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CrazyMaaneetFan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Wow story.
add me to ur pmlist

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vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 July 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
waiting dear
y u r not updating
Tarina.R.Totini Goldie

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 2:22pm | IP Logged

EmbarrassedPart 11Embarrassed

Geet entered her house almost in a  daze...she was smilling nd literally very proud of herself...She was finaaly happy tht she has done sumthg
very heroic by breaking Maan's bike's headli8...

Daima (DM) was in the kitchen doing was surprised whn geet took her in her arms nd started doing ballroom danc with her...

DM "arey arey chor mujhe...chakkar aa jayenge... "

Geet "kya DM ..ap bhi nah...thoda danc wanc sikho...dekho kitni moti ho gayi ho...yeh zero-figures ka zamana hai dm...socho agar ap
aise rahogi toh woh apka hawt IMRAN KHAN apko kaise pasand karega..."

DM laughed out laoud nd slapped Geet playfully...Geet also smiled nd stopped dancing...Dm sat on a sofa...nd Geet sat on the ground placing her
head on Dm's lap...DM stroked Geet's hair lovingly...

DM " kya baat hai.????? ...AAj meri guriyan badi khush hai...?????????? "

Geet cutely pouted saying " kyun ab main khush bhi nahi reh sakti kya...??????????? '

DM smiled nd said  " maine aise thodi nah bola...i want k tu humesha khush rahe... "

Saying thid she affectionately kissed Geet's head...Geet smiled nd cuddelled more in DM's laP...DM smiled nd continued stroking Geet's hair...

DM " ab boligi bhi akhir meri princess inni khush kyun hai... kahi tujhe koi ladka toh pasand aa gaya..."

Saying this DM literally pulles Geet up nd made her seat on the sofa beside her...

DM held Geet by her shouldernd literally shook her saying "nam kya uska...dikhne me kyasa hai...konse khandan se hai..kya krta hai ... ab bol bhi...
chup kyun baithi hai "

Geet rolled her eyes saying " aap bolne ka mouka dengi toh bolungi nah "

DM smiled uncomfortably nd controlles her enthusiasm ...She left Geet nd said "srry...woh zyada xcieted ho gayi thi... "

Geet " ab apne xceitmnt pe thora break lagaiye...aur meri baaat dyan se duniye...koi ladka warka nahi mila...i m happy being

DM became sad a little bit ...Thn looked at Geet meaningfully...

DM " toh fir tu itna khush kyun hai..????????"

Geet smiled brightly & declared proudly " maine usss ladke ki bike ki headlights thod di..."

DM "accha..."

Thn the reality drawnd on her nd she shouted " kya...????????? tune kisiki bike ki headli8 todh di aur upar se aise bol rahi
hai k kitna mahan kam kiya hai..."

Geet pushed up her invisible collars saying " of course maine mahan kam kiya hai...uss khota ko accha sabak sikhaya hai..."

DM narrowed her eyes  " konsa khota ...???????"

Geet "areh wohi jisne mujhpe kal kichar giraya tha..."

DM "oh...paar woh tujhe kaha se mila ...???????"

Geet "areh humare cllg ka naya student hai...Arjun k class me..."

DM " aur tune usske pehle din hi uske bike ki headlight uda di..."

Geet "oh hello...ap toh aise baat kar rahi ho..jaise woh koi mahan admi hai aur apka bula rishtedar..."

Dm sighed saying "maine aisa thodi nah kaha..."

Geet "poar apka matlab toh wohi tha nah...ap janti nahi...woh kitna bada kamina hai..."

DM murmurrred under her breath "han..aur tu toh dudh ki dhuli hui hai..."

Geet went near DM 'apne kuch kaha...????????"

DM " nahi nahi.u continue..."

Geet " han toh kaha thi...han.k woh kitna kamina hai.apko pata nahi DM ...Galti karne k bad bhi kya attitude se ra ha tha..."

DM " dekh bhi hua..mujhe nahi pata k kaun sahi hai...aur kaun galat...par tujhe uske cllg k pehle din tujhe aisa
nahi karna chahiye tha..."

Geet "par DM shurwat usne ki thi ..."

DM " thik hai.mana...par ab tu iss baat ko yahi bhul jayegi...wada kar..."

Geet pouted saying " agar usne kuch kia toh..."

DM knew tht Geet was naughty bt can never harm any1 intentionally...Bt whenevr anger was dominating her mind things can go out off hands..She
smiled nd kissed Geet's cheek saying "agar usne kuch kia toh tu kuch karegi.."

Geet smiled brighty nd hugeed DM...

DM "par han usne kuch nahi kiya toh tu bhi panga nahi legi..."

Geet nodded saying " ab khane chale..."

DM nodded & both of them started walkingf 2 the dinning area...


MAAN entered his bunghalow on a on his headlight broken bike but he was not angry...He was unusally happy...for the first time in
his life he was treated special treatment or any attention...First time he talked with some person...ok...not talked
fought...still He had a g8 time...First time he did sumthg unxpected...& boy he felt g8...with a smile on his face he entered
his house...but his smile vanished slowly seing only 1 thg welcumed him there & tht was darkness...

Nakul came running 2wards Maan...

Nakul " sir...may i help u wid sumthg...????????????"

Maan came out of his thoughts & looked at Nakul...

Maan "no...i m going 2 my room..no1 should  me there..."

Nakul "sure sir..."

Maan went inside his room & the shut his door...& a long tear escaped his eye...

Maan " what the hell..i was thinking...tht i can have a normal life...with friends & ways...i m not life
is not normal...no1 can be safe wid can i think like tht...i can never b happy or have a blessed life..."

Maan 2wards the window where the moon was decorating the complement 2 the stars...Maan looked at the sky & a painful
murmur escaped 4m his lips... "ap mujhe kyun chor gayi maa...????????"


Next day at college...

Pinky was as usual having some chips...& irritating Geet which is normal in Geet's life...Both of thm were as usual were on thr
corridor of their cllg making some notes..Bacically Geet was making notes & Pinky irritating telling her all the gossips available
in cllg...

Geet "pinky agar tune firse koi bakwas gossip kaha nah toh tera ek sin warna mera ek din..."

Pinky "areh unnah...woh sonia hai nah amit ko chor ke uske best friend k sath bhag gaya..."

Geet was going 2 answer stopped thinking kuch cheez e kabhi nahi badalti...

Yash "hello ladies...aur geet tera pehla punishmnt kaisa gaya.?????"

Pinky "han...tune toh bola hi nahi..."

Geet remembered the incident tht happened yesterday...Her anger boiled bt she controlled herself...thinkg abt her discussion wid DM...

Geet "woh..."

Yash cut her off saying "areh dekh tera jani dushnman aa gaya..."

All of them looked at the entrance of the cllg & saw Maan coming on a brand new bike...Yesterdays happenings were  back...Everyeye were stuck
on the persona tht Maan held...Maan came down of his bike & put off his helmet...& entered the college...He looked at Geet once thn
passed 4m their widout gaving any xpressions...

Geet was shocked 2 the wits...It's lik he doesn't evn know her...WHT THE HELL HE THINKS HE IS...?????????????He ignores Geet Handa...
Geet was literally shaking in anger...

Yash " wah kya bike hai ...hainan Geet...??????????"

Tht was the last pin in the coffin...Geet looked at Yash wid murderous eys & screamed on top of her voice...

Geet "agar itna hi accha hai toh shadi karle is k sath...better option usss kamini se shadi karle ...u...u...GAY..."

Geet stormed off 2 her class...

Yash scrached his head not understandind anyting ...

Yash "ab maine aisa kya  kaha k main gay ban gayaa...??????????'

Pinky  "kya..tu really gay hai...????????'

Yash "noh..."

Pinky looked at Yash seriously nd said "i doubt now..."

Yash "main gay nahi me..."

Pinky went inside the classroom followed by Yash who was continuously
xplaining tht he is nt a gay...


Somewhere in Delhi...

Jonathan (Jon)
"so u have no information abt him..."

Dev looked at Jon who was looking at all the documents...He was in these 4 the past 1 hour...Jonathan was a gud -looking man...He was
British by was living in India.He had blue eyes & a innocent look in his face...may b tht helped him with the things he do...

Dev "tht's y u r here...i waant him..."

Jon " this is hard u know...first a top class closed case...nd no informations 4 past 20 years..."

Dev "still u can find him..."

Jon smiled "u knw me well...i can find it'l take some time..."

Dev stood up 4m his chair & looked meaningfully at Jon...

Dev 'u knw...if any1 else was on ur place...he'l b dead by now..."

Jon "bt i m nt any1...I m jonathan...the bst...& u knw if i hav taken some task i"l complete it...:"

Dev "hmmm...find him as soon as possible..."

Jon "yes sir..."

Jonathan went outside ...clossing the door...

Dev sighed saying "i'l find matter wht i'l hav 2 do..."


His hot breath were fallin on her open anticipated lips...He could't refuse the invitation & leaned in closser... 

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:15pm

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love4all IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
 awesome part dear
nice ff will read whole and comment

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tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged

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freya123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
loved  it  
superb part
lovesia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
nice update
but no maaneet scene together Cry

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 July 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Loved the update..
so maan decided to ignore geet??
y dev s behind maan?
loved the suspense..

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