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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged


EmbarrassedPART 6Embarrassed


The doorbell of Handa haveli rang furiously giving
the hint tht a storm is cuming... Dhanno ran 2wards the door 2 opn it...as well as
letting the storm cum in...There a muddy geet
stand spitting fire 4m her eyes...nd a terrefied
pinky...dhanno's facial xpression change
drastically...first surprise...thn shock...nd lastly
amusemnt...


Dhanno...'didi,...haha...yeh kaise...hehehe...'


Pinky ws trying her bst 2 signel dhanoo nt 2
laugh...bt dhanno is dhanno...


 Geet gave a murderous luk 2 dhanno saying...'tu
aur ek bar has...fir dekh main tera kya haal krti hu'


Dhanno shut her mouth immediately nd gesturd
thm 2 cum inside... Geet startd going upstairs...whn dai ma (dm) came
4m kitchn...


Dm...'kaun hai...???... dhanno'


Seeing geet nd pinky dm got surprisd...


 Dm..'tum dono yaha...????...tum toh yash k ghar
jane wale thi nah...'



Thn dm's attention wnt 2 geet's condition...


 Dm...'baccha yeh kaise hua,...????'


Geet hissed in anger nd said..'dm plzz...abhi kuch
maat pucho...baad me bataungi...'


Saying this geet wnt 2 her room...Dm askd pinky
with her eyes wht happnd...bt pinky shudderd her
shouldrs indicating tht she didn't knw anythg...


 Dm sighd nd said...'leave her alone 4
sumtim...she'l b fine...'



******************************


Maan reachd his mansion...threw his bike keys
on a side...nd sat on the sofa wid a big thud...


Maan...'nakul...bring me water...'


Nakul brought 1 glss of watr 4 maan...maan gulpd
it down in 1 go...


Ravi enterd the house shouting on top of his
voice...'wht the hell...do u thk u r doing...????'


Nakul sensed danger nd quickly dissapeard farthr
inside in the house...


 Maan...'i m nt deaf...u don't need 2 shout...'


Ravi...'don't giv me tht attitute maan...'


Maan sighd nd got up...'i m nt...it won't happn
again...'


Ravi...'u said it thousand times'...he rose his voice
a bit nd said...'if thy knw u r here...u'l b dead...'


Maan lost his cool nd shoutd...'i knw...i knw...tht's
y i hav been living lik a cagd bird since i ws 5...i
hav 2 chng evrythg abt me in evry 3-4 yrs...i cn't
go anywhr...i cn't b wid sum1...i m stuck...i feel lik
a prisoner...'


Ravi sighed ...He knew wht maan goes through...


Ravi 'maan...i...'


 
Maan...'no...don't...don't sy u undrstand...coz no1
does...'



Saying this maan wnt up 2 his room...


Ravi sighd nd said...'i promise...son...it'l b ovr
soon...tht's y u r here...'



Ravi calld nakul nd instrucktd him...tht if maan
again goes sumwhr...he'l inform ravi
immediately...nakul nodded...nd ravi wnt 4m there
2 put his plan in action...


******************************


It ws almost midn8 nd geet still didn't say anythg 2
any1 or nt evn eatn anythg...pinky left aftr having
dinner...she really got tired aftr xplaing annie,yash
nd meera...tht evrythg ws okay...nd geet wsn't
feeling gud tht's y thy didn't reach there...


 Dm enterd geet's room wid a blck forest cake...nd
switchd on the li8...geet quickly closd her eyes
pretending 2 sleep...


Dm..'geet...stop pretending...i knw u r nt sleep...'


Geet sighd nd sat on the bed wid a grumpy face,...


Dm sat beside geet nd said...'jo hua use bhul jaa...'


Geet...'bt dm...u don't knw...wo ladka...' Dm didn't let her finish nd said...'jo chiz meri
princess ko gussa dilaye i don't wanna knw it...'



Geet smild a little nd said...'ap mujhe har bar kaise
mana leti hai...????'



Dm put her hand on geet's cheek nd said...'whn u
were only 2...tujhe maine pala hai...main nahi...toh
kya padhosi janenge...'


Geet smild brightly...


Dm..'waise tujhe khush krne ka ek aur zariya hai...'
she pointd 2wards the cake...


 Geet smild evn brightly nd she stard releshing the
cake...


 Geet...'dm u r the bst...'


 Dm..'i knw...'


Dm nd geet burst into laughtr...nd startd eating the
cake...smiling laughing...


 ******************************


Yash ws again cressing his cheek which ws again
red...bt this time 4 geet's slap... On the nxt day in cllg geet xplaind her frnds wht
happnd wid her yestrdyy...evry1 wntd 2 laugh
bt seeing geet's angry glare...no1 evn smild.,... Bt yash couldn't control his laughtr imagining
geet's face clad wid mud...nd as a result got a t8
slap 4m geet...


Yash...'kya yr...mujhe toh sabne punching bag
bana diya hai...'



Geet ws going 2 answer him...bt 1 sound got evry
single person's attention 2 cllg's gate,...


There maan enterd evr so stylishly on his bike...he
stoppd his bike nd took out his sunglss...he took
his bag nd enterd the cllg premises ... Oohhss...nd aaahhss could b heard 4m
evrywhr...geet carefully lukd at the bike nd thn at
maan...she instantly recognizd him...


 Geet...'haila... yeh toh wohi hai...'


Pinky xceitdly said...'reaallly tu iss hotty ko jnti
hai...kaise..??...kab se...??'



Geet..'pinky shut up..yeh wohi hai jisne mujhe kal
mud me giraya...'


All..shoutd...'KYAA...???'


Geet..'chilla kyun rahe ho...???'


Meera...'tu sure hai yeh wohi hai...???'


Geet..'han...100%...'


Annie...'bt yeh toh bada sharif dikh raha hai...'


 
Geet..'tum log mere dost ho...yah fir iske...main isse
apne dead-bed me bhi pehchan lu...'



 Yash...'ab tu kya karegi...??'


Geet..'kuch nah kuch toh karungi...'


 Suddenly geet spotted a mud-pool on the side of
the path-way of the cllg...she evily smirkd


 Geet..'kichar ka badla kichar...it's show tim baby...'


Geet walkd 2wards maan evr so gentelly...maan
ws busy luking around oblivious on wht ws going
2 happn...geet stood beside the mud-pool nd
pretentd 2 read a book...maan reachd there...nd
suddenly geet pushd him... All the cllg gaspd nd a sound ws heard ...'splash...'





Precap...



'main tum jaisio k mu nahi lagta...'


Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:11pm

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
awesome update.loved it
thanks for the pm dear.

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
loved it,,Big smile cont soon dear!!

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
awsome
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EmbarrassedPART 7Embarrassed


There ws maan... clad in the mud...front portion of his
shirt nd his face ws completely drenchd wid
mud...on the othr side geet has the largest grin
on her face...


Whole cllg ws stopped 4 1
second...thn all of thm burst in laughter...


Maan ws still trying 2 get out of the shock...he ws
thking xactly wht happnd 2 him...he came 2 the
cllg...he ws luking all around the cllg...nd grlz were
drooling ovr him...okk tht's ordinary...


He thought
may b as it ws his first day there...may b there'l b
sum ragging...bt since he ws in 3rd year nw...it's nt vry likly 2 rag him... Although he thought all the possibilities of
ragging...bt he cn never thk tht a girl'l cum nd jst
push him in the mud...nd thn the situation
drawnd upon him...A GIRL PUSHED HIM IN THE MUD
ND THE CLLG WS LAUGHING ON HIM...WHT
THE...F**K


Maan at once stood on his feet 2 destroy the grl at
once...he took off his glss...nd gave a murderous
luk 2wards geet...geet also replied him wid equal
murderous luk...


 All the cllg ws nw luking at thm leaving their
wrk...few of the students hav gathrd around
thm...including annie...meera...yash...nd
pinky...thy knew geet didn't need thm 2 f8
sum1...bt moral support bhi koi chez hoti hai...


 Maan...'wht the hell...dhakka kyun
diya...mujhe...???'



Geet...'mann kiya isi liye...'


Maan...'wht...???...r u mad or wht...????'


 Geet...'heyyy...watch ur mouth...'


Maan...'huh...u jst push me in mud...nd nw telling
me 2 watch my mouth...vrry funny...'


Geet..'kyun kal jab mujhe dhakka diya tha...yeh sab
batein demag ne nahi aayi...'



Maan...'maine tumhe dhakka diya...' Thn he suddenly remembrs tht he pushd a grl in
mud yestrdy...nd...SHE WS THE GIRL...


 Maan...'woh tum thi...??'


Geet..'nahi mera piyo tha...it ws me...nd let me
remind u...k nahi tumne apna khatara roka...nor u
said srry...bt i m here...2 face the consequences...'



Maan...'listen...i wanted 2 sy srry...bt ...'


Geet..'bt wht...gf ka phone aa gaya tha...'


 Maan...'u knw i ws thking 2 sy srry...bt nw i
don't...wanna sy srry...especially 2 a witch lik u...'


At tht time the principal's car enterd the cllg...he
saw the gathering nd told his driver drop him
there...aftr getting down he statrtd 2 go 2wards
the gathering.,...


 Geet...'wht did u jst sy...????'


Maan...'tht u r a witch... W I T C H...matlab pata hai
nah...'



Geet...'tht's it...u dog...'


 Geet ws going 2 scrach him...suddenly princi came
there...


Princi...'wht the hell is happening here...???'


Hearing the princi most of the students fleed
away...bt geet's frnds stood there rooted...


 Princi lukd at maan...nd said...'nd who r u...????'


Maan...'sir ...nw admission...MAAN SINGH
KHURANA...'


Princi...'ohh...yeah..i knw...bt wht happend 2
u...???'


 
Maan lukd at geet nd said...'tht u should ask her...'


 
Princi...'geet..u did this...???...y...???'


 
Geet...shot a dangerous glnc at maan...nd again lukd
at princi saying...'sir...yes...i did ...bt...bt...there is a
vry gud reason behind it...'


 
Maan...sarcastically said...'yeah yeah...vry gud
reason...'



Geet...'listen u...'


Princi...shoutd...'shut up...u 2...both of u in my
office r8 nw...'



Maan nd geet followd princi in his office...nd startd
2 tell the story... Aftr listening the story princi sighd...


Princi...'geet...i don't xpect such kind of behaviour
4m a scholar lik u...nd may b maan is r8...he did it
accidently...nd he had sum wrk...tht's y he couldn't
say srry...
'


 Geet...'bt sir...he did tht on purpose...'


Maan...'i didn't...'


Geet...' u did...'


 Princi...'shut up...'


Princi sighd nd said...'geet...whtevr
he did...ws out of the cllg...it doesn't mean...u'l
behave lik this wid a new boy in cllg...'



 Geet...'srry...sir...'


Princi..'geet...u guyz r the 1 who'l reflect our cllg's
image...'


Geet..'srry...sir...'


Princi...'geet u'l receive sum punishmnt...4 this kind
of behaviour...'


Geet...'bt...sirrr...'


 Princi...'geeettt.. '


Geet ...."okk sirrr..."



Princi...'4m nwon...u'l help the librarian...in
library...each dy 4atleat 1 hour...it'l continue 4 1
week...'


Geet...'okk sir...'


Princi...'fine...nw u may go...nd nevr repeat this
again...'



Geet nodded nd wnt outside...


Maan ws the mute spectator of this convo...


 Princi...'okkk...maan...srry 4 wht happend...'


Maan nodded...nd said...'it's okk...sir'


Maan hesisted a bt nd said...'woh sir...my shirt...'


Princi...'ohhh yeah...'


Princi calld the peon nd told him 2 bring...ARJUN
RATHORE
in... Aftr sumtim a well-built guy...having dark
hair...wearing a denim nd shirt came in princi's
room...


Arjun...'sir u called me...'


Princi...'ohh yess...arjun...meet ur new classmate
maan...'



 Arjun lukd at maan nd xtended his hand 2
shake...maan took his hand...nd shook it...'


Princi...'arjun...well u see...he got sum problem...his
shirt...is kinda ruined...can u giv him a shirt.. 4m
boy's locker...'



Arjun lukd at maan nd said...'no prob sirr...'


Princi...'fine...u guyz cn go nw...nd maan...meet me
b4 going out off cllg...'


Maan...'okk...sir...'


Arjun took maan 2 boy's locker nd gave 1 of his
shirt...saying...'dad told me abt u...'


Maan...'ur dad...????...ohh...u r acp ravi rathore's
son...'



Arjun...'indeed...dad se meri shakal milti nahi
kya...'
nd he laughed...


Maan...'haan...thora thora...'


Arjun...'don't feel alone...koi prob ho toh mujhe
batana...'


Maan...'hmmm...'


Arjun...'nd jo hua usse bhul jao...geet me bachpana
hai bt woh dil ki buri nahi...'



Maan didn't miss the spark in arjun's eyes whn he
talkd abt geet... Maan came aftr changing...


 Arjun...'u luk gud...nw tum office se apna...clss
shedule le lo...nd meet me in clss...i'l introduce u 2
my grp...'



Maan...'okk...c u latr...'


Maan startd 2 go 2 the office nd again bumpd into
geet...geet ws cuming out of clss...caring sum
assignment files...all the files were on floor...maan
lukd down 2 sy srry bt seeing geet...he sighd...


 Maan...'nt again...'


Geet..'tum aur koi nahi milta kya...'


Maan...'plzzz...i got bettr options...main tum
jaisiyon k muh nahi lagta...'


Saying this maan left 4m there...geet wntd 2 go
aftr him...bt seeing the files lying on the ground
she couldn't... She pickd up the files...bt struggled 2 hold
thm...suddenly arjun came there nd helpd her
out...


 Arjun...'careful..angel...tu he-woman kab se bn
gayi...'


 Geet...laughed...nd said ..'bachpan se...'


Maan ws nt too far 4m there nd lukd 2wards geet
nd arjun...he saw geet smilling tht ws may b the
most beatiful smile he has evr seen...bt it ws nt 4
him...nd tht thg he didn't lik...




Precap:




He inhaled the sweetest smell of rose nd jasmin...


Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 21 December 2012 at 1:11pm

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awesome update
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Update...

cont. soon  Smile





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sweet n cute updates.

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