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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

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Posted: 11 years ago

your writing is so hot and sensual!!! brilliant writing. loved arnav's move at the end; cant wait to see khushi's reaction to that! haha. thanks for the pm :)

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES!

BEBE! Cold showers are not gonna be enough! I think Imma havetah go an run tah release tha sexual tension!

You are BRILLIANT! And then Arnav leaving with Khushi made me Aww :)) Luv ya!

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jiji

@lakshyaNkt

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was beautiful and loved how arnav said he was leaving with her. plus, his aggressive love making was fabulous.

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709328

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...the twist at the end was brilliant!..i was so not expecting arnie baby to pack his bags & b ready to leave as well..that hows the depth of his love...& the rest of the update was, well, i am still blushing maniacally...☺️☺️...& thanks 4 d pm...

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Hiruni

@CDlove

IF-Rockerz

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

Ok so Im officially your fan!! seriously woman I think I was going to faint while reading your update!! Damn you now I cant even go to bed in peace 😉 this is one of the moments when I realise I need a man 😉

anyways jokes apart that was an awesome update with an even more awesome twist at the end. How you pen down emotions with such accuracy is unbelievable. Kudos. It wasn't just love making...there was a huge emotional elemant behind it too! wonderfully handled and converted to words😃

regards,

your forever phan gal 😃

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

wow man he is ready to leave with her...thays great...

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

*clap clap clap* you go girl !

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bnvs

@bnvs

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

nice update.what a twist at the end? superb

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376925

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome loved the twist at the end waiting waiting for the nx part:):)):)). Happy writing:):):)))

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Shivika23

@Shivika23

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update
the ending is just superb
continue soon

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