Hey reya,
Congratulations on thread 5 and congratulations on doing such a great job putting this together.
I am relatively new to the forum and was unaware of the fan-fictions people write. I am still amazed and completely in awe.
Well i don't read all of them to tell you the truth, but i liked how you presented your piece with a trailer, a brief synopsis, an index, the ease and well definitely appreciate the meticulous choice of vocab.
Fab job at that.
I just read all your chapters at one go and hence my first comment but i'm sure as hell going to write to you after every post from now on.
Well how wonderful is the grip in your story, it leaves you wanting more.
I like the character build-up and the suspense being intact probably because i know how things might intensify once the truth starts to unravel.
There are some instance you've picked up from the show but i am guessing that is only because we as readers can relate to them.
For example - Arnav letting khushi fall, pinning her against the wall almost all the time...
Visual impact always gives the much needed impetus to reading a story.
I like Arnav's unrest and Khushi's fluttering.😳
They are such no-nonsense characters that you almost fall in love with them time and again.
I also observed how you're totally in love with their expressive eyes, i almost come across that apt description of them emoting through their eyes in each of your chapter, which brings me to post a picture here about how beautiful those eyes actually are.
But hey thanks for writing this out for us.
I hope my comment did even like .000001% justice to your FF.
Lots of Love and Best wishes
Gitika
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