Arsha OS:Birthday wid a twist!! Updtd pg 36 - Page 20

bhavya kimshuka

@kimshu

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing its damn sooo hawt
waiting for the next update

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

awww!!!it ws so sweeet!!!

really loved this epi n em v v v v happy wid u 4 contt this OS...

love u meow!!!so sweet

at least i cn cherish them 2gethr in ur OS

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res will unres in the nite...
un res
firstly a big hug🤗for updating fast...n i luved the new title u gave MAGICAL MOMENTS...luved the update
awww shakti doesnt want amar to go n becums angry!!!!
n luved the way amar was laying on her laps hayyeee...
i luved his condition dat he would go only if she kisses him...hayyyeee their kiss was amazing!!!
n yeh kya bechare ek dusre se theek se baat nhi kar paye...eagerly waiting for the next part DID 100th epi super excited to know wat will happen between dem...
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

oh loved it! n thanz 4 da pm!!

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

WOWW
dat was soo romantic
n kunwar is such a naughty kitni jaldi mukti ke bedrum ka door lock kr dia...hahahaha
n nw i m waiting 4 kolaveri di
thnx 4 dis such awsumm update

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part...loved it very much

it was very romantic part , awesome

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

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UnAvailable

@MyDarkPassenger

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

really romantic update!

continue soon!

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow i loved the update it was too cute thanks for the pm and cant wait for the next one yaar update real soon

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Wowww it was super rocking, beautiful, hot, romantic, and chumeshwari update.. Loved it <3 <3 <3.. Waiting for nxt update. Super excitd please update fast.. jaldi se bhi jaldi.. Jus cnt wait.

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
res..

Edited .😛

unres

simply picture perfect DEE !!!!👏

am just awestruck reading ur update on Arsha !!!!

you write really very well on arsha...so you should write more and more on arsha...but...after you complete with love-is-in-fashion-and-fashion-is-in-you !!!😉

nai toh i won't talk to you...

so,it's an earnest request to my 😳cuteipie😳 that u have to...have to...have to...in any case update he FF -love-is-in-fashion-and-fashion-is-in-you !😃

kayyy !!!!😊

{kayy mein isliye bol rahi hu ki u have to...with no choice left...jaldi se update the next update sooon) !!!!😆

now,coming to the Arsha update...

1.great that you changed the name "why dis kollaveri di"...

immensely luved it !👏

2. The way you showed the character of our dear nd mere amar is simply Fab !!!⭐️

3. The way he seduces her in any condition...uff !!!☺️

poor shakti...kabhi bhi deny nai kr skti hai...for anything...

whether it's going somewhere or romancing !!!😆

4. hayyye ..😍...i luved the romance scene !!!😳

as said earlier...you are a great romance writer !!!👍🏼

pukka u have to help me in my FF wid romance thingy...cuz it's just out of my head !!!😆

5. you also have to update more on this OS !!!!

as am luving it more nd more...day by day !😉

nd woh bhi jaldi... jaldi...😃

6.I noe am acting as a dumb fool writing comment in points...😆

actually writing to make sure that u don't miss any of my points😳 and keep it in mind before you update next of any FF/OS !!!😃

7. i luved ur update to the extremest core !!!❤️

want to read more nd more...esp.often !!!😛

mindblowing..⭐️.awesummm ...⭐️

8. you are definately Fabtastically Gorgeous DEE at your writing skills !!!👏👏👏

phewww...finally completed...😆

now i wan't my answers DEE !!!😃

jaldi reply !!!😉

9. *most imp* - mwaaah to u fo ur energetic skills nd managing your itnaaa saara FF/OS/SS !!!!🤗

10. hats off to you !!!👏

true inspiration for me to write !!!😳

Edited by mEgical_arsha - 12 years ago

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