The First Night- AarYa OS - Page 2

dat was really nice
plz continue

Originally posted by: salmankhanrulz

dat was really nice
plz continue

too gud
if possible please do continue

Originally posted by: DMKJ_VB

thanks a ton.i was really apprehensive u know...

well, i will try to continue.not sure about turining it into a fanfic though...but i will try to continue with the next part soon😛

not at all sis...😛
its really nis..👏eagerly waiting 4 ur next part..😃.

Originally posted by: M_n_h

too gud
if possible please do continue

Originally posted by: DMKJ_VB

thank you so much...by the way, i just read urs.its great!😛

thanks

Yup Ria the pillow scene in the second promo... How about a second part with a pilllow scene and children as well😛...that will be something to watch out for in the serial as well Edited by adigaag - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adigaag

Yup Ria the pillow scene in the second promo... How about a second part with a pilllow scene and children as well😛...that will be something to watch out for in the serial as well

1st attempt is good Ria Edited by VersatileStar - 12 years ago

wow ria jaanu.u too became OS writer😆.Great script from u .if possible continue Aarti talking with Yash😊.Loved the part when Aarti realized when she saw Arpita pictures on wall. keep it up dear