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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Hi Friends,

The ff bug has caught me too :) I have been reading and re-reading all the ffs here with so much addiction, can't get enough of them. This forum has become like my haven, every few mins I am checking it, and get restless being away from it for long. So on a saturday, instead of going out or doing anything else, I started my very first ff. Please let me know if you like it or you would like me to change something. My ff continues from the point where Nidhi and Ashutosh parted in Kerala. The story before that is exactly how it was in the show. So it will run parallel to what we're seeing now on tv. Since it starts after the separation track, it will be sad in the beginning, but hope to get happy later on. Please excuse any errors and shortcomings as this is my first ff. Would love for all your suggestions, especially the seasoned writers whose ffs I have read numerous times, Sharmishtha, yanks, lizzie, forgive me if I forgot someone.



Eternal Love
 Part - 1

It had been 2 days since Nidhi and Ashu parted ways in kerala and Ashu helplessly gave in to Nidhi's requests to '
neither talk nor meet her, though he had no idea how he would do that. Since he recovered from his accident waking up 
to Nidhi's touch, he realised he got a new life, one that is meant to be with his Nidhi. He remembered his talks with Nidhi
before the accident, and how anxious he was, to meet her family, and talk to her Baba about their relationship. And now, 
after having recovered, tracing Nidhi to Kerala, meeting her family, and listening to Nidhi's verdict, had zapped all the 
energy out of him. He felt his life slipping away from his hands again.  In the last 2 days he felt like a zombie, didn't 
know what he did, all his thoughts were lost in his time spent with Nidhi since she had joined Kotnis. His life had been 
a barren land with strong barriers around. And she had managed to break those and come closer to him with her vivacious
nature, love of life and love for him. He had started loving life, the life he looked forward to spending with Nidhi, 
and now this, how was he to cope with this. Would he be able to survive and move on? Would he be able to abide by Nidhi's
wishes, to not meet her, talk to her? He had seen her tear stricken face before they parted, and it pained him a lot to let her 
go. If Armaan hadn't been with him, he wasn't sure he would have been able to get back to Kotnis after the Kerala trip. Along with 
being emotionally down, his physical self didn't give him the strength to resume duties. Armaan was the one
who coaxed him to go back to work, reminded him that his patients pain came before his own, and helped him regain his confidence.

It was a Thursday when he reported back to work. Dr. Ranganath was the first one to greet him and was very happy to see Dr. 
Ashutosh after long, and hale and hearty, back at work. 

Dr Ranganath: Good Morning Sir, welcome back, its so good to see you after what seems like ages.How have you been? We missed you!

Dr Ashutosh: Good Morning Dr. Ranganath, I am fine, thank you, its good to be back indeed. How are things here?

Dr. Ranganath: Everything under control sir, and will be great now that you are here ( Dr. Ranganath was genuinely
 happy to see Ashu and he smiled at him fondly before he returned to his cabin) 

On entering his cabin, Ashutosh was greeted by Mallika, who was in a good mood at getting the news of Ashu-Nidhi break-up
from Armaan.

Dr Mallika : Good Morning Ashutosh, how are you? I am so glad to see you ( She hugged him)

Ashutosh did not quite return the hug, only replied formally " Good Morning Mallika, good to see you too". He got to work
right away. " Mallika, could you please send me the case files for the week that I wasn't here?"

Mallika looked at him like she wanted to talk to him about his absence, his recovery, his heartbreak everything, but Ashutosh's
stern posture and eyes did not give her the courage. Maybe she should wait for sometime she thought.

to be contd.

Thank you for reading. I have not made it longer this time as do not know how it would be liked. If you like it, will make it longer next time.



Edited by ssktlk - 01 June 2012 at 5:27am

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Awesome FF. wish it was longer. Very well written and good flow. Don't keep us waiting too lo g for the next update.
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Hey nice FF please update soon.
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Nice update...
Good start...post next chapter soon
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Good start,
please continue,would like to read longer update.
Mallika ko bus mauke ka intezar rehta hai ashu se chipakne ka.
Would like to read your different approach from the show.
Do continue.
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Very good starting plz carry on. Thanks
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Seems interesting. Plz continue..
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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Thanks for the likes and encouragement friends. Gave me some courage to move ahead with the story. here is the second part.

Part 2
 
Nidhi's House

Anji came over looking for Nidhi. She was still in bed pondering over the events of last week. So much had happened
 in such less time. From her getting almost engaged to Rohan to Dr. Ashutosh's car crash, his much believed death( how she still shudders
at the thought of it), then his miraculous discovery, how she was rock solid in her belief through all this. That her love,
her Dr. Ashutosh would never leave her alone in this world. And what did she give him in return? He came all the way to 
Kerala searching for her, ready to take on Baba, Dadi Bua, the whole world for her, but it seemed as if all the energy
had been zapped from her. She turned so weak, her heart tore away when she had
to say she agrees to what her Baba wishes.  It seemed like a Tsunami which blew away her confidence, her smiles, all her happy moments
and all she was left was scattered fragments of her unforgettable moments spent with Dr. Ashutosh. And she lacked the
strength to pick up the fragments. Feelings of deep guilt, remorse, pain burdened her heart. Will she be able to survive like this?
She made Ashutosh promise that they would not meet or talk again, but she wasn't sure if she would be able to breathe
without thinking of him. Thinking all this, she didn't realise when her tears fell on Anji's hands and she hugged her hard.
Anji took her hand, wiped her tears and said bravely " Nidhi, get ready, I have to go look at some materials for a dress
I am designing, and I got a flat tyre. Could you please drive me there or I'll be late." She looked at Nidhi's blank face expectantly.
Nidhi wasn't so sure she wanted to go anywhere, but the genuine look on Anji's face, made her move. In half an hour they were 
on the road. Nidhi did not feel like having breakfast so she just got ready and got out of the house. Anji was observing 
Nidhi carefully but did not say anything. She just kept talking casually about her dress design and how she was having
a hard time deciding fabrics for the same. But Nidhi seemed to be in a world of her own. "Nidhi, are you listening? Do you think
think Bharat Fabrics would have a better collection or should I check with Yuvti?" On getting no response from Nidhi, Anji changed
the subject, " They say love makes this world a better place to live in, but I am starting to feel, what I thought earlier
was true, love is just our mind's wandering, doesn't leave you with anything but thorns". Suddenly Nidhi slowed the car, looked 
at Anji with moist eyes and said " Anji, not all are destined to find happiness in love, but once you are in love, its pain 
is also precious, and stays close to the heart, it becomes the disease as well as the cure." Anji was listening intently
when outside the window, they could hear some noises, she told Nidhi to stop the car. They got down and saw there was a small
crowd, when they walked there, saw it was a bike accident. A man and his 6 yr old daughter were hit by a car and people
were blocking the car threatening the driver. The little girl was unconscious and her father was frantic seeing his daughter's
condition. Anji told Nidhi to look at the girl and get her to the hospital right away. Nidhi helped the father and daughter 
in her car, and subconsciously drove her car to Kotnis general hospital. When she parked and got down, she realised
what she did and looked at Anji helplessly. Anji motioned her to help the patient and her father out and not to worry.
She called for the stretcher right away, and consoled the dad who was very scared, that his daughter would be fine, not
to worry, his daughter would be attended right away. Dr. Ranganath saw Nidhi and was happy, then saw the stretcher and 
quickly assessed the situation.He said " Dr. Nidhi, don't worry, I will inform Dr. Ashutosh right away, he will look at the girl".
A tear dropped as Nidhi heard Dr. Ashutosh's name and she seemed unsure what to do. Before she could think Dr. Ranganath went 
away. Dr. Ashutosh rushed out of his cabin right away, and on seeing Nidhi, he was rooted for a second with moist eyes, then 
quickly took note of the situation and looked at the girl. After checking her, he found the little girl to be out of danger, 
but ordered some tests and then talked to her dad. " Don't worry, she is just unconscious from the trauma, but we will have all the necessary  tests
done and keep her under observation for a day, she will be fine". The father was somewhat assured. Ashutosh turned around to look for Nidhi
but she was nowhere to be found. Without thinking he rushed out and checked with the receptionist " Dr Nidhi?", "Sir she just
went out towards her car." Nidhi was about to open the car when she heard the deep voice that always made her heart 
beat "Dr. Nidhi". She felt an unknown shiver down her body, and turned around, "yes Sir? ". Their eyes locked momentarily
and talked to each other. Ashutosh : " Why do I stop in your tracks knowing that you  wish not to tread this path? How
do I choose a new path now when you were the one who showed me this way?", tears welled up in his eyes as he looked longingly.
 Nidhi : "Unknowingly
my feet got me here, back to you, my heart is not in my control. I have decided to walk away from you, but my heart refuses
to listen, what do I do?" and she closed her tearful eyes, trying to look away. " Thanks for trusting me with this patient,
she is stable, I will inform you of the test results" Said Ashutosh and walked away. Nidhi waited till he was out of sight
and got into the car, feeling empty within.

contd.


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