New FF:Part 4:The Party Pg#9 - Page 5

@AMBIKA2561979Thanks for liking my FF & I will try to write lengthy parts from now on.

@rabzonedgeThank you dear, I want to show a subtle attraction initially.

@PoojapangeThanks Pooja, they are just thinking about each other & still in initial stages, will make future parts a long one.

@SwastikAshNiThanks dear My FF will be very different from the show

@Binat Thanks dear

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@Blushsarika Thanks dear .. I am just portraying Ashu as a very good doctor & at the sametime someone who is tall & handsome too but ashni love will take time to happen..

@karajekar Thank you dear

@ayushi.luvsid Thank you dear for ur appreciation

@Deepikikamandal Thanks dear

@vanillaflowers Thanks Vanilla I will post lengthy ones henceforth

@rrdus Thanks dear

@ niniborn2rule Thanks dear 

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Interesting story...grt going..update fast😛

Aarati.. lovely update... aww Nidhi .. n the rains... such an awesome combination ❤️

Interesting story,wd like to know the next AshNi convo soon.
Now both of them has felt a mysterious attraction for each other.So looking forward to c how it improves.Pl update soon.

Aarathi...Great FF...Story is unfolding in interesting way...👏

1.-Nidhi and her freinds are damn cute...loved their masti in rain...Nidhi is mischievous,caring person...Best part was her freinds teasing her..and saying...'wooo'...😆 

2.Nidhi's family intro is Nice..here you have given twist about her Dad..wow...

3.Dr Ashutosh has a Past...Hot babe named Tanu..😉..Nice name...She loved Drenching in Rain..and so is nidhi..excellent connection between past and present...

4.Dr Ashutosh..furious on Nidhi...And nidhi is not at fault...How is he going to rectify His Mistake...

Love Story starts..Eagerly waiting for Next update...😊

Lovely update...
Rain scene was cute...nidhi playing with rain drops n ashu staring at her...U change d past of both characters...Here Nidhi's dad left home when she was just 5 years old n other side Ashu wants to forget Tanu...intresting story...
Both r feeling something new about each other..n next day ashu furious on nidhi as she come let on her duty but now he knew there is no fault of nidhi...
Now looking forward to see how he talk to her...plz update soon

👏 it was lovely update Aarti.
Liked it.
You have given information about Nidhi's family and Ashu's past.
Nidhi's father has left her mother when she was very young.
You have created a mystry about his father.
It's totally different from other FF's.
There was a girl in Ashu's life named Tanu . Expect to get more information about her in next update.

Nidhi's friend were calling Ashu dr. Hardstone but she did not agree to them.
Ashu has created a good impression on her.
Both of them are thinking about each other and are attracted to each other.
Ashu has decided not give her much attention ,let's see how he controls himself.
Ashu has scolded her and after knowing the actual reason ,what will be his reaction.
So waiting for the next one
story is going very well.
Please make the next part sooner.
And thanks for the pm

its a completely differnt story and a lovely 1 at that👏⭐️. liked it so muchhh😊. thanks for bringing in a  new perspective to the old set of plot👍🏼 and dont worry about ne mistakes being made we here all have a very big heart ❤️❤️so we forgive and forget little things😉i guess u can say we all have amenisia here like BB 😆😆😆😆😆[ktlk].sorry if offended ne1 unintentionally.😊. 1 request though plz specify is it ASHU as in SHARAD or ASHU as MB.Just so u know i loveee😳😳 ASHU as in SHARAD😆😆😆.And again thanks for this lovely fresh story⭐️⭐️⭐️.Love and take care.🤗

great update...hoping for  some romcom between ASHNI...soon