PAYAL REVEALING THE TRUTH (ss) (part 2 updated) - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the concept! Please post the next part soon! :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the start... Lovely to ser payal supporting Khushi...hope Arnav believes her...
Thanx for the pm
Posted: 11 years ago
different take on the angle...very interesting.  Please let me know when the nx part is up...waiting to see how Payal handles the situation.  happy writing:):):):)
Posted: 11 years ago
I love the idea of payal actually doing something important for a change...continue soon and thanks a ton for the pm :) :) :) 
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing start plz update soon nd plz plz pm me!!
Posted: 11 years ago
part 2
arnav :payal tum yahan..
payal : haan arnavji ,aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai..
arnav :ok
payal : jo bhi hum kahenge hume pata nahi ki aap viswas karenge ya nahi..lekin yahi sach hai..anjali ji ke husband shyamji ne hi humari khushi se engagement kiya tha.shyamji hi humare ghar mein paint guest ban ke rahe..pehle humein pata nahi tha ki woh anjali ji ke pati hain..
hamare bhuaji chahte the ki khushi ki sagayi unse kari dijaye..lekin khushi nahi chahti thi..lekin apne bhabhuji ke liye usne haan kar di..jab hamare aur akashji ke liye jo pooja rakhi thi usi din khushi ko pata chala ki shyamji anjali ji ke husband hai..

arnav rememberd the day when dt pooja had taken place..when khushi cried ..the day when she looked so upset..
he remembered the day when khushi said her fianci name is shyam...

payal continues: agle din jab woh kehne ke liye ayi thi to anjaliji ka mangalsotra toot gaya..anjali ji bahut dar gayi thi..
khushi ne socha ki wow shyamji ko ek mouka de..
use kya pata tha ki wow badlne wale nahi hai..wow shyamji abhi bhi khushi ko pareshan karthe hai..khushi aapko kuch nahi batayegi...kyunki wow aapko aur anjali ji ko bahut pyar karthi hai..wo apko kabhi dukh nahi dena chahti..
lekin mujhe pata hai woh abhi kis daur se ghuzar rahi hai..
aap plz uska khayal rakhiye..
khushi kabhi bhi apne bare mein nahi sochti..
saying this payal leaves..

arnav is shock in hearing this...
arnav  : meine yeh kya kar diya ...meine apne khushi par viswas nahi kiya...meine use kitna dukh diya ...usne mere parivar ko bachane ke liye...meri di ko bachane keliye..
meine uske saath kya kya nahi kiya...
he rememebers all the pain he has given her...he remebered the weeding night, ..how he made her slept on the cold, how much he talked ill abt her,...how much he hurted...
woh kya mujhe kabhi maf kar payegi...lekin mujhe use sab sach batana hoga...
he decides to tell her the truth y he married her.,..what he saw in the terrace and what shyam had told him...

he decides to meet her now itself..he leaves office and goes home..
he saw khushi crying sitting in the poolside..

arnav : khushi...
bt khushi doesnt hear him calling her..she is lost in her thoughts...
arnav : khushi..
he comes near her and sits beside her..
he cups her face and tells : tum janna chati thi na meine tumse shadi kyun ki...mein bata tha hoon..!!!..and he explains him everything..
khushi is shocked to hear all this.
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Edited by lak4nithi - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
good ... nw eager to c hw khushi reacts on arnav's confession...
Posted: 11 years ago
Really curious to know how Khushi reacts to Arnav's confession.

I wish on the show Payal would be as proactive and not so self absorbed and notice that her dearest sister is going through such  misery ! But that would take a miracle!
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm buddy.
Very nice part.
Can't wait to read more.
Please update soon.
Good job
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one!!
plz update soon.

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