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dil se rey:kriyaansh ff thread 2 part 34:pg 146 (Page 10)

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Im back..
hollla dee !!!
right tyme pe entry great...
vaise bhi m in way to update my ch -4 !!!

Ya updt even I will try to update mine too...
greattt !!!
well u'll not try...
u have to...plsss

ya sure n by d way poppy n twinkle??
twinkle ka toh pata nai...
nd poppy is busy !!!
deee??????

Ya here..bt busy updating n u??
samme here !!!!
actually let's do a thing...
firstly will update nd then will chat !
kayy ?


Ya sure..

heya im back...Big smileBig smile

Big smileBig smile

Hey twinkle I will send u a pm..read it n tell me if I hav to make any changes.

kayy cool...

sent u a pm wid my doubts
heyyo dee nd twinkle !!!!

hey sweeets...wat u doing
Have updated my ff...do check it out !!!! :D


Guys come to deetha's post..she isnt feeling well na she wil update asap but we will surprise her after she comes..

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Im back..
hollla dee !!!
right tyme pe entry great...
vaise bhi m in way to update my ch -4 !!!

Ya updt even I will try to update mine too...
greattt !!!
well u'll not try...
u have to...plsss

ya sure n by d way poppy n twinkle??
twinkle ka toh pata nai...
nd poppy is busy !!!
deee??????

Ya here..bt busy updating n u??
samme here !!!!
actually let's do a thing...
firstly will update nd then will chat !
kayy ?


Ya sure..

heya im back...Big smileBig smile

Big smileBig smile

Hey twinkle I will send u a pm..read it n tell me if I hav to make any changes.

kayy cool...

sent u a pm wid my doubts
heyyo dee nd twinkle !!!!

hey sweeets...wat u doing
Have updated my ff...do check it out !!!! :D


Guys come to deetha's post..she isnt feeling well na she wil update asap but we will surprise her after she comes..

arsha or kriyansh post
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Im back..
hollla dee !!!
right tyme pe entry great...
vaise bhi m in way to update my ch -4 !!!

Ya updt even I will try to update mine too...
greattt !!!
well u'll not try...
u have to...plsss

ya sure n by d way poppy n twinkle??
twinkle ka toh pata nai...
nd poppy is busy !!!
deee??????

Ya here..bt busy updating n u??
samme here !!!!
actually let's do a thing...
firstly will update nd then will chat !
kayy ?


Ya sure..

heya im back...Big smileBig smile

Big smileBig smile

Hey twinkle I will send u a pm..read it n tell me if I hav to make any changes.

kayy cool...

sent u a pm wid my doubts
heyyo dee nd twinkle !!!!

hey sweeets...wat u doing
Have updated my ff...do check it out !!!! :D


Guys come to deetha's post..she isnt feeling well na she wil update asap but we will surprise her after she comes..

arsha or kriyansh post

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 4:08am | IP Logged
congrats tina for ur second thead.
Wish u many more in the future.
keep writing ur gr8 work.

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Congratzzz tina...omg 2nd thread..amazinggg
hope u make more and more threads...
Congo again




Sorry 4 d late reply..was busy with relatives

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:32am | IP Logged
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a special congratulation fr ur new thread... keep writing n updating.. n nvr frget 2 pm me plz.. Smile



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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Shonu hw was d introduction n I thought of a title too--

"Just d two of us-never one", did u lyk it??


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                                            CHAPTER 21
thnks a lot guys 4 this new thread n congragulations 2 u all...here z a treat 4 u 4 this...
NOTE:
this is a hot update so read on ur own risk...
DISCLAIMER:
again this is a total fiction based work n no eperience involvedCry so in case ov any mistake u cn tell me...
He ws lost in her deep sea eyes n ws continuously adoring her wen she realized n blushed 2 the core…so she moved away…a drop fell on her head..she looked up 2 c n touched her hair 2 feel wen drops ov water started falling on her face..yup it ws raining…she got amuzed by tat as kriya loved rains bt rey moved inside the car n asked  kriya 2 come 2 bt she refused n instead she requested him 2 come wid her..she literally dragged him out bt he went inside again…this left her bit discouraged bt she continued..soon she ws drenched in rain..
There our dear swaron
Swayam ws  gng home in his car wen he noticed an outta order car wid a grl outside..he realized it ws Sharon so he stopped his car,reversed it n went 2 her!she ws really happy 2 c sme familiar face thr..she asked 4 help
Sh:swayam ma car broke dwn..plx help me...
Sw:ya sure!just w8…
N he went 2 fix her car  bt it started raining heavily..sharon ran n hopped inside the car
Sw:cmon Sharon come out..lets enjoy the rain
Bt she wsnt willing 2..he pulled her out n asked her 2 enjoy the rain..she ws mseumerized …bt then she ran inside only 2 b caught by swayam who pulled her back n she crashed on his chest…he held her back in his arms 2 save her from falling n she felt butterflies in her stomach..everythng ws gng marry-go –round 4 her…yet she controlled n separated 4m him…
Sh:capt swayam!ye ap kia kar rae o??
Sw:oh em sorry..actually I wanted u 2 enjoy the weathr.y u gng inside?
Sh:actually I hate rains..its 4 stupid,juvenile ppl..
Sw:n u thnk tat nt enjoying the rain ll make u a sensible person??
Sh:I dint say tat bt I dnt like 2 drench myself
Sw:cmon Sharon!giv urself a break…rain z beautiful..just smell the soil..its mystifying..
Sh:wots so gr8 in it??
Sw:cmon Sharon…enjoy the weathr n they started 2 merry-go-round…
She actually enjoyed n it ws fun…
Thr at kriyaansh
Kriya ws spinning round n round n round n ws fully wet..water drops were flowing 4m her face down her throat n she ws fully rejoicing the weathr n rey ws watching her in awe inside his car..then a sudden,unseen force made him 2 move out…he came out ov his car n went gng close 2 kriya..her face ws turned 2 the othr side n he cud hear sobs nw wich became deeper so he turned her 2 face him n cupped her face wid his hands…
R:y u crying BC??the grl I knew ws v strong n nvr used 2 cry…
K:I just got lost in ma past memories..i loved sm1 who left me c ov an MU…I em afraid wot ll happen ov me if u leave me??i lived widout him bt if u leave me I ll die….
R: (putting his finger on her lips)no darling!dnt say this…I promise I wud b on ur side thru all thick n thin n I ll never ever leave u..he ws so stupid who left the sweetest thng in the world..he doesn't knw what he has lost??u r my treasure…my life I ll nvr ever leave u…
K:I love u,I love u eagle…
R:love u 2 my BC!!
N they both hugged…he patted her back 2 let her outta grief n she tightly hugged him snacking her arms around his back…wich made him on n he had a sudden desire 2 kiss n lick her…he moved her hair strands away 4m her face still in the hug n caressed her face wid his hands..this made her feel secure n her cheeks turned red c ov etreme emotions…she held his hand in hers n kissed
them..this provoked him further…
She dint knw wot effect she had on him n she ws dng it in her innocence bt he ws a man so this ws provoking him…he tried 2 control his emotions…nw his heart ws beating faster n his emotions overflowing…he again pulled her into a hug n put the starnds away 4m her nape of neck n started kissing n sucking it…she moaned…this electrified him further…nw he inserted his hands under her shirt n started caressing her curves…she gasped…he moved further..n she broke the hug n tried 2 shove him off…she held her waist wid 1 hand n the othr still in her shirt n exploring her cyrves..she ws gasping…
K:ea…eag…eagleee….stop it…
R(still wid his hands moving)cmon honey!enjoy the wet weathr…
She ws shocked…then he held her hair n moved her neck low 2 allow his head 2 get more access into her,opened her zipper 4m the back..this eposed her bare chest..he rested her body on the front ov his car…still its raining heavily n they r all wet…nw his lips caressing her curves…she held his hair n her hands n pulled them 2 let her go bt this drived him more crazy…nw he started sucking her curves n skin…this ws making it more wet as the saliva ws mixing wid water already thr…nw she inserted her hands in his shirt n started caressing his solid chest wid her hands..this ws giving him more n more pleasure…the rain has stopped by nw….n a car came 4m far n they heard a horn…this made him come 2 his senses n he realized wot he ws dng..he quickly pulled her shirt up n she also came outta trance n drew her hands bck…she stood on the floor still like a statue
..he came 4ward n closed her zipper…she felt bad n he knew it…they walked silently 2wards the car n sat..he silently drove the car..she ws also silent n thnkng abt wot happened..he decided 2 break the silence…so he suddenly pushed the brakes..the car quickly stopped…
K:wot happened??
R:nthng..i thnk smthng z wrong wid the car..w8 lemme chk
K:ur car always z like tat??y dnt u just sell it n buy a new 1??
R:2day it doesn't wnt u 2 go away 4m u
N kriya blushed…
Aftr dng a lil drama ov checking the car,he drove her bck 2 her hostel…
Thr wen he reached the gate,he stopped his car n she went out..rey called her
R:BC!dnt u say good night??
K:oh sorry!good night!
R:wots oh sorry gud nyt??apnoon ko sorry nae boltey!!
K:ok gud nyt…
R:uhm mm…tats nt hw u say gud nyt.w8 lemme tell u..
N he opened the door n came outta his car 2wards her…went 2 her cheek,kissed it n said
R:gud nyt BC!hav sweet dreams abt me…
K: (smiled shyly) gud nyt eagle…
PRECAP:
Swaron at the mall
Kriyaansh birthday party

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