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Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by melovemayur

Beautiful OS!!

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by Smita.M

Fantastic OS!Loved how u co-ordinated the lyrics of the song with the story!Clap
 
M a fan of ur writing yaar,u write awesome stuff!

Thank You sooo much! :)

I am just glad you like it and am truly humbled. :)

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Risha_ipkknd

Rae I read this without seeing the PM Honest judgement ; D -It drew me somehow and it didn't disappoint.Just a single word-WOW! I am on my phone so can't quote lines but will do so later.It is just so tremendously heart-clutching that you feel sad -WHY oh why does this happen to two beautiful people in love? You penned it so beautifully I am spellbound-reference to yellow,the sunshine in his life Brilliant!EmbarrassedBest of both worlds-indeed she is a child and a woman at the same time!Loved how you portrayed that she isn't a gold digger.Love how he smiles despite everything.Just beauutifulLOL

Awww! Risha, Thank You so much! :)

I am just humbled by your words of appreciation...and you are right, both of them need to just realize what the other is feeling! Sigh. :) <3
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rukuswasthika

simple but nice.i loved it

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by e_enigma

too cute. was very well written..

Thank You! :) 

Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Wow Rae
It was so beautiful
Reading it once again the song is so apt here

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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anurao.66

The OS was very beautifully written. It was sheer joy to read how he remembered small thing about Kushi. Its was a great pleasure to read.


Awww! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by Bunny_Bear

Awesome OS Rae.
I love that song. In fact i love all the songs in that movie.
The way Arnav notices small things about her, be it her towel, her laughter, her singing, her jewellery it should be the way the CV's must make him realise. 
Thanks for the PM>



Thank You, Bhavi! :)

I have recently come to love the songs in that movie! Lol!


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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hilly

This was just amazing ! exquisite just like your update ! :) 

Awww! Thank You sooo much! :)

Originally posted by Arshi143

Awww! Nice train of thought :)

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zafi

Awesome os.Star
Loved it. Beautifully written.
Thanks.Smile

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it! 

Originally posted by Poonam786

Beautiful, extremely well written piece of work.. Absolutely loved it! Are you going to continue, and show Arnav figuring out the truth? Would love it if you did.. Please do PM me with updates of your work.. :)

Thank You! :)

Well most probably its going to remain an OS but thank you for your suggestion! :)
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Posted: 07 April 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
brilliantly written...Superb OSClapClap
loved the way u hv shown arnav's gradual realization...him noticing every little about khushi...him feeling lonely & alone without herEmbarrassed...awesome one!! really hope in show too they show a gradual movement!

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