Chaand Sitaare... ArHi OS - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Rae
It was so beautiful
Reading it once again the song is so apt here
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anurao.66

The OS was very beautifully written. It was sheer joy to read how he remembered small thing about Kushi. Its was a great pleasure to read.



Awww! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: Bunny_Bear

Awesome OS Rae.

I love that song. In fact i love all the songs in that movie.
The way Arnav notices small things about her, be it her towel, her laughter, her singing, her jewellery it should be the way the CV's must make him realise. 
Thanks for the PM>



Thank You, Bhavi! :)

I have recently come to love the songs in that movie! Lol!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilly

This was just amazing ! exquisite just like your update ! :) 


Awww! Thank You sooo much! :)

Originally posted by: Arshi143

Awww! Nice train of thought :)


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zafi

Awesome os.⭐️

Loved it. Beautifully written.
Thanks.😊


Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it! 

Originally posted by: Poonam786

Beautiful, extremely well written piece of work.. Absolutely loved it! Are you going to continue, and show Arnav figuring out the truth? Would love it if you did.. Please do PM me with updates of your work.. :)


Thank You! :)

Well most probably its going to remain an OS but thank you for your suggestion! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliantly written...Superb OSπŸ‘πŸ‘
loved the way u hv shown arnav's gradual realization...him noticing every little about khushi...him feeling lonely & alone without her😳...awesome one!! really hope in show too they show a gradual movement!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful layers of realization for Arnav shown in your work.
Also speaks to how certain people wrap themselves around our heart and we fail to realize until they become silent. You capture that.

The bit where she winces while brushing her hair was really well-written---his response to wanting to eliminate everything that disturbed her even if it was her own hair.
Made me smile.


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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it rae πŸ€—
well written...
i like this part very much aaj mausam hai suhana,kapre dhonay ka hai bahaanaπŸ˜†πŸ˜
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent update ...beautifully written ... keep on writtting
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was on cute OS! 

Really sweet! Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply beautiful...thanks for the pm  :) :) :)