OS: Her Tears - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww i really feel sorry for khushi... I love how you showed that she desperately craves his love and all she gets is pain... she tries to put up a strong front so that he can't hurt her more but of course that is just a front, inside his words have ripped her to shreds and she is clearly becoming less and less like herself. 

This is not surprising, I mean how long can she keep up the happy-go-lucky spirit she has if she is surrounded by so much negativity that is targeted specifically to her. I'm glad that some sort of extremely low watt bulb went off in his head!!!! Pretty please with a cherry on top...give them a happy ending :D

Thanks for the PM :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know you feel bad for Khushi...but Arnav is in pain too :( and you portrayed it well :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovelyyy os
felt realy bad 4 khushi..:((
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know Khushi must be having a bad time...but it isnt simple for Arnav either :( :( and you portrayed both parts well :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey this was another amazing OS from you...loved it..please cont if you can..and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
S**t... I loved this!!!

Amazingly written...!!! But hey - you made me cry!!!!! 

Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful...
i has  tears in my eyes at d end...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
luved khushi's monologue... & arnav's reaction...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I first scene of today's episode really touched me... there was such a longing & confusion in her eyes... You did a brilliant job using that in your OS ๐Ÿ‘

I really hope you will continue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww poor kushi๐Ÿ˜”
lovely update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh do continue.. n pls pm me..