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My story - "Eye Of The Beholder" (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Just one doubt as I am reading it...maybe you have answered it later...still...
 
When Abhijeet and Daya raid Robin's place, why did Abhijeet ask for the 'hell hole to be burnt' after evidences are collected? Surely, cops wouldn't destroy a place like that...???

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
He has all necessary material moved to the bureau. I remember he tells a criminal that his hideout will be destroyed after their work is done in one of the older episodes, so I thought I'd revisit that here.
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
ok...I finished 4 and a half chapters...Robin is shot. Will continue later. Smile
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Great Ravi !!! I will read it soon...i know it will be a good one !!!

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Woah... That's a huge story... Will read it in the bus while gng back to Bangalore ... I am sure it's gonna be a superb way to spend time in the bus Smile...

Well...great job in advance Ravi... I appreciate your patience... You have been doing a lot of WU's recently and along with that you managed to write such a big story... Wonderful Clap

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Ufff!!!
Ravi, Such a lenghthy story...
How did ur hands managed to type that... Hats off!
Eager to read it, till that tym can u give a summary, basis of ur story??? If possible...

Edited by daya_angel - 06 April 2012 at 11:29pm

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It's very lengthy at the same time great story, I've finished reading about half of it. Will continue reading after sometimes.

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