~Hona Tha Pyaar~ManVeerSS~Note Page 57~ - Page 5

Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was sooo good, I'm absolutely loving the intense relationship they're sharing. 😉

Jayghamandini, had to ruin things here to😡 Aghh..I Hate Her.

Loved Their Outfits, I could imagine the whole scenario, it was like playing before my eyes in real , That's hw well written it was, Great Work Surya.👏⭐️

Continue Soon ... can't wait to read on😉

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update.Thnks a lot 4 the PM.

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Surya 🤗 how are u yaar?

For once am not late😆😆 this is awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️ love the pics ...manveer scenes uff kya baat hai☺️

Hope M will be less agressive😡 towards UV next time😭 ...poor UV is here on the edge now

The precap sounds interesting hope there will be lots of Manveer intensive scenes😉

Plzzz update soon dear and thxs for the pm

TC have a nice wk-end

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Anjali

@Anjalika13

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

looking forward to the next part :)

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teju

@tejuangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it

really good work surya👏

thnks 4r PM🤗

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@wendy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

just lovely surya .

amazing post. thanx for the pm.

waiting for the next update.

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

L0vd it surya update s0on

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ria

@mythical

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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you for the pm. lovely update👏⭐️👏, please continue. feel so bad for udayveer😭. as for jai🤢🤢. manyata dont be so mean, uday loves you.

all in all very happy to read this.

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720820

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey surya dear thankoo for the pms yaar itni writing hai tumhari ki humare paas tareef k

arne ke lie lavs nahin hain

arz kia hai ki

tum likh ti ho kya khoob

masallah lafz nahin he humare pass bayan karne ke lie

cvs bhi tumhare saamne lagte hain fool

pls do continue

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720820

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey surya very nice thanks for the pms

arz kia hai

tum likhti ho kya khoob

masaallah lafz nahinhai humare pass bayan karne ke lie kitna

cvs bhi tumhare samne lagte hain fool,

that was really boring shayari

anyways pls do continue soon i mean it soon means soon

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