Amazing FF.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Loved it.
You have realistically mentioned Kushi's past grief of losing her parents and the way she coped with it. (Stupidly, they had ignored it in the show, although this is what made her the way she was!!)
The separation made Arnav more humane and showed in stark reality that he is not Superman. Able to do and handle everything with few or no problems. (The way the show and most FF's make him out to be.)
I love your style of writing, too. Thanks for sharing an amazing story.
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