Hi.
I cannot beleive that you have ended this story so fast. Wish you had written a little further, showing some happiness that has finally come to all of them. Would live to read of the happy times.
All said and done, loved reading the story. Indeed some incidents in life are so drastic that they change and affect everythin. Finally shyam is out of everyones life for good. Allowing Khushi and Anjali to find the much needed closure and to move on in life.
Take care.
p.s. may be you can write an epilogue.
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