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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 88)

Psychedelic Goldie
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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Nafi! Totally feel short of words after reading this one. You've captured their insecurities and the inexplicable feelings they have for each other! The doubts and how the other's words and actions soothe them. Beautiful! And I never thought placing kisses on one's hands could be described so erotically! It was too good! Would love to comment longer but am short on time! :( Love you for taking the pains to type out two chapters! It was beyond fab! :)

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Kookiemonster IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Loving the way things are shaping up.
I am glad that Arhi talked.
It really was about time they had this chat.
I understand Khushi's fears because Shyam is evil.
How much these poor souls have to bear together?
Anyvys great update.
Hoping to read the next one soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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preetihere IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Awww all is well with them again! Together they will be able to overcome the upcoming storm!
What has Anjali seen in the video i wonder, is it the terrace scene? or some recording of Shyam's evil talk to his henchmen? Waiting to hear that...
Beautiful writing, i can feel my heartbeat increase with Khushi's!

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
congratulations on the 100th page of THREAD 2 - well deserved century

Edited by Arjuhisis - 29 July 2012 at 2:21am

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
THAT.was wonderful!!! I love Arnav!!!! and obvioulsy the way you have shaped both of their characters!

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
fabulous updates dear:)

loved them:)

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 4:17am | IP Logged
awesome update. finally caught up.
wow just wow.
update soon.
thanks for the pm's

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It was beautifully written Clap

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