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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 8)

disha7 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
loved it!!!greatly written
and wow that was a very long updateTongue

thanks a lot for the pm and plz do continue!!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Fabulous!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
This chapter was, in one word, BRILLIANT!!! Nope, it did not seem incoherent and rushed. In fact, I thought it was paced perfectly.

I absolutely LOVEEEDDD Arnav's confessions. He laId his heart and soul out to her. Giving the kangans at the end of the confessions was PERFECT timing!! And, phewww!! FINALLYYY Khushi responded positively (I know she's been through a lot and it was right for her to take forever, she's still not completely accepted him, and I am perfectly fine with that cause I believe she needs the time. BUT, I was also in desperate need to see her show him some positivity and you gave it in this update, so THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!)

I'm sure this update took you a long time to write as there was so much going on and it was so long, so once again, THANKS A BUNCH!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!! And, thanks for the PM! =)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Wow! Heavy duty update.. Loved arnavs lengthy confession abt how he was forced to love her... it finally clears up things for khushi, she'll finally realize tht he didnt just start loving her one fine day outta d blue... Thanks for d looong update..

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
aww... such a sweet update... SmileSmileSmile plz do continue soon... Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
So it is a long update.
But honestly who can complain about that.
I thoroughly enjoyed all chapters right from the beginning.
Read it all in one go.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
this was one long great update!
very insightful about khushis thoughts n her conflicting emotions!
i surely can understand her uncertainty,her helplessness n her fear of once again trusting arnav only to b left shattered n torn later...very well describerd!
i loved arnavs confession...finally he let it all out which made khushi see his inner emotions 4 once...that was extremely wonderfully portrayed!continue soon...

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome ,amazing, beautiful, lovely,marvelous ,wonderful n all lovely words for dis update man !!! It was amazing n arnav's confession bought tears to my eyes !!

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