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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 31)

ssafiyaa Senior Member
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Last 2 parts -- 1 word Amazing!!!

Khushi feels a connection wit her MIL .. Nd d letter was beautiful, how u explained each line wit khushi analyzing the whole thing and realizing Arnav's love and her belief in that love... Smile 
 
Nd shes bck to being more of herself, the interaction wit payal, the reference to salman khan.. d nonstop chatter..! Big smile

...I think when you fall in love with someone, that person becomes a necessity...that person becomes necessary for you to live, for you to survive. That's what it feels like, anyway... --- Loved these lines! Thumbs Up

She refers to d letter as her letter..!! Acknowledging that its hers rightfully.. Big smile

Poor Arnav, wonder when he sleepless nights r gonna end! LOL

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Fantastic!!! He finally revealed how he felt... the emotion that he felt were clearly depicted  in your writing... truly a moving chapter... Clap

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Wonderful update!  Arnav's contentment at seeing the bangles on her wrist, his peacefulness at being with his family, Arnav trying to verify Khushi's doubts about Anjali, Khushi calling Anajali "DiClap

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Finally she ll knw d truth.grt updt.ur a superb writer

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
I loved the update. It was beautiful and very well written. I think that when they start the Arnav redemption track in the show they should really use your ideas. I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Awww!!! Such a cute chapter...!! i can feel that their situation has improved and is progressing visibly, after the letter...i love their encounter, in the bedroom...too cute. LOL And seeing Khushi progress from fear and anger to nervousness and anticipation feels so good...Arnav feels it too and i guess his mind is already planning more, um, ambushes (for the lack of a better word) or is it just my gutter mind overworking??WinkLOL lovely chapter! thanks for the PM!

and good luck with your revision!! Smile

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Hey! Sry for the late comment but was out of town n so couldnt. Hey the update was just awesome. Our khushi is returning slowly. Arnav is gonna hv many sleepless nights ahead. Update soon.

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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Absolutely Loved the update !!! Big smile

Waiting impatiently for next part

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