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Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2 (Page 26)

tracy1191 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
great update.. luv d way khushis having conflicted emotions nd d way arnav knows wen 2 giv her space nd yet make her feel his presenceClapClapClap

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update, as usual!

Eeep! Is Shyamu back? :O Nooo! But then again, I'd love to see Arnav beat the living daylights out of him Evil Smile

Khushi's pain at his cut, Arnav's contentment at seeing the bangles on her wrist, his peacefulness at being with his family, Arnav trying to verify Khushi's doubts about Anjali, Khushi calling Anajali "Di"- everything was perfectly written :D

Needless to say, I loved the last scene. Looks like Khushi has herself a new nickname LOL 

Can't wait for the next update!

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
that was a beatifully written update. i love your style of writting. you catch every little detail to perfection.
love the little changes in khushi and the way arnav is so observant, he dosnt miss a thing when it comes to his khushi.
thnx for the pm and please continue soon.
good luck with your exams.

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meghnas Goldie
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update! Love Khushi's reactions when Arnav is close by or close Smile N loved how Arnav observed that Khushi isn't stepping back/scared of Arnav's resence 
Their little moment was adorable SmileSmileSmile Looking forward to reading abt Arnav's plan Smile

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
loved the update that was emotional loved khushi reaction when arnav is close  to her and her finally call anjali di loved the update beautifully written who keeps calling her thanks for the pm

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update

Nice

Thank you for the update

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Awww this realization was so deep, intense and emotional i loved it! very very VERY beautifully written!!!LOL

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Res. will comment later.

Loved it so far.

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