This chapter was, in one word, BRILLIANT!!! Nope, it did not seem incoherent and rushed. In fact, I thought it was paced perfectly.
I absolutely LOVEEEDDD Arnav's confessions. He laId his heart and soul out to her. Giving the kangans at the end of the confessions was PERFECT timing!! And, phewww!! FINALLYYY Khushi responded positively (I know she's been through a lot and it was right for her to take forever, she's still not completely accepted him, and I am perfectly fine with that cause I believe she needs the time. BUT, I was also in desperate need to see her show him some positivity and you gave it in this update, so THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!)
I'm sure this update took you a long time to write as there was so much going on and it was so long, so once again, THANKS A BUNCH!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!! And, thanks for the PM! =)
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