KriYansh/ArShaSI#93:Teri Yadon se Doori Behtar Hai - Page 8

Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju
hmmm post it lets try something.
shivs i'll give u idea u put it up in words.
i dont think i can do irt well.

ok fine and u can try at least and i will add to ur words ok will post now

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

now ur turn so tel me ur ideas

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

i edited it so that no one else can read it so how is it

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was a wonderful one shivs.

k for the next.

she takes a taxi nd goes to her coll.

she gets down and sees a speeding bike near the college nd a small gal crossing the raod.

her heart skipped a beat seein this.

dat child remainded her of the childen in her orphanage nd she ran to save the ggal.

the little gal got scared and started crying very bad.

kria tried to comfort her but she was crying.

so she took her in her lap nd made her sit comfortabbly nd searced for the gals parents.

she could nt find anyone der.

so she asked the gal nd the gal said she does nt know abt her parents.

kria felt sad for the gal nd hugged her.

the guys who drove the bike was suprised by this act of her.

she saw him watchin her.

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing but who will be the girls parents

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 12 years ago

conti.

she sees the guys noticing it.

she does not want to spk with that guys.

she was very angry on him so she jus caresd the child nd the little gal kissed kria.

kria hugged her back nd asked her mane.

she said piya.

So she asked piya wat she wants nd gave her choc nd water.

rey was touched again.

she asked the gal to wait der nd not go antywere till she goes in the college nd comes.

now u continue.

if u wanna change the name u can.

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: The007Shivani
amazing but who will be the girls parents

let it be a suspense.

no one knows nd kria takes care somethin like dat.

so that she does nt miss the orphanage.

shivs tell me frankly was it gud.

oi dont feel so.

i musnt spoil this ff na.

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

I put the sentences together and changed some words hope u dont mind and it was an amazing idea she can look after teh girl that is so sweet and no it wont spoil the ff

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

S sivs this was sweet.

i told u already u can put words in it.

i wont mind.

hry u keft one pt.

she saw rey but didnt want to spk wir him as she was angry seein his rash drivin.

if possible add this.

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Smriti

@dazzlerfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

ok am at the AT after many many days..so shivs you here???

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