The Picture Perfect Postcard - Page 2

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Edited by rusha4003 - 12 years ago

@ an and mru : beautiful poems both of you. 👏👏

My GOD how beautiful these lines are...Amazing an12345678...Yes, that scene was like a picture of a post card which express everything without saying a single word...

This content was originally posted by: CraziestGurtian

Awesome writing Daaku... ⭐️ ... could never really read ur works in den (if u did)... 😛... Keep writing gal... 👍🏼

Glad you didn't read as I often wrote the episode was "Utter Crap" that too when the show was at its popularity peak 😆😆😆😆 Thank You!

This content was originally posted by: Mru_bee

Lovely verse, An. ⭐️  It creates such a lovely visual, especially since I am few hours away from watching it.

He has began his long journey,
Holding on tightly to the hanky.
He knows he has no way out
He has to follow his heart, no doubt.

She has no clue to the sun that shines
She is yet to break out of her confines
But a day will come when the *musibeet*
Will be the one, who will trigger her *heartbeat*

-- Mru

WOW, beautiful rhyming lines! 😊You've beautifully summed up two journeys. Did you see the episode?

This content was originally posted by: Newdime

Aahat darwaje pe hui..paya use khada...
Najre jab woh mili...
Dil se sukoon ki aah nikli...
Ankhone jub thama dil ka haat...
Sanso mai aai gehri aas
Bani phir ankhe dil ka saaz...
Num thi ankhe sunkar dil ka haal...
Na kuch bol agaye...mujko ehsaas hai kiya hai tera haal.
Badaah kar agay apna haat...diya phir apna mujeh saath.
Na bole tum, na maine kuch kaha...phir bhi humne samjhi ek doosre ki awaaj.

The lines are sheer beauty -- meaningful and lyrical. Thank you for writing and posting it. Do write and post more often 😊
Edited by an12345678 - 12 years ago

Thank You Everyone for liking the post. 😊

This content was originally posted by: an12345678

The lines are sheer beauty -- meaningful and lyrical. Thank you writing and posting it. Do most more often 😊

Thank you for the praise 😳...I dont do this more often..its a fluke that i get inspired and the words form the lines.

...I got inspired by ur lines  and  Mrus...and it flowed with nonstop and hence the creation of this lines. 

Newdine: Do it more often now 😊

This content was originally posted by: an12345678

WOW, beautiful rhyming lines! 😊You've beautifully summed up two journeys. Did you see the episode?

I did see the episode in the night. Your words described the scene perfectly. It was well acted by both. Mohan's expressions were the best. I really feel for that character, whether he is fussing over getting back the hanky or empathizing with Megha.

But I just couldn't help but think if only they had set up the scenes leading up to this moment, more realistically. The whole track was so contrived that the effect when Megha finally realizes her folly was lessened for me. It was a powerful moment for Megha. Just I couldn't enjoy it as much as I would have liked.

But NBT does give some picture perfect postcard moments like these. And that will keep me happy for a while. I do hope they give some convincing buildup to such beautiful moment though. Strictly speaking from my pov.

And I hope we get more such moments that inspire such beautiful writing for you 😃

-- Mru