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i realLy likeD the set up u did for the characters!
arnav is a play boy and arnav and khush have a past?
looking for ward to meeting khusi and their firSt meeting!
EXCITED !! :D
great update dEar !!!

wow that was interesting...cant wait for them to meet...

i really loved...it...i liked the nick name Nav FOR ARNAV..

Omg!! Vita you updated!! YAY!!!!!

WOOWWIEEE I LOVED DIS NEW CONCEPT... AMAN N KHUSHI, BRO N SIS.. I CANT WAIT FOR THEIR ENCOUNTR ALREADY..!! UPDATE SOOON... N THKYOU FOR THE PM.. :)

wow..this chapter 1 ws just superb...

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Omg!! Vita you updated!! YAY!!!!!

sorry yesterday was very busy for me, so i couldn't comment!!!

Muwuhahaha!!! You introduced Amilia!! Me is happy!! But hey! How dare arnav scream at me😉!!! I hate him😆

Vita lovely, please make arnav do something for amilia to make it up with her😳

Oh wow! Next chappy, we r getting to meet Khushi!? Arnav is the sam khadoos dude as always! I hope i spelled khadoos right!

Soo... Vita dear, you truly write beautifully!!! I mean it!!!!

Update soon!!

Haffie!

HEY haffie glad you liked the update! Haha we are going to have to wait annd see what arnav does to make it up to Amilia.. Next chapter you shall meet khushi, but firstly I need to get writing but work is so hectic customers can be such a pain at times
great for suspense building...

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HEY haffie glad you liked the update! I really did!!!  Haha we are going to have to wait annd see what arnav does to make it up to Amilia..Cant wait!!! 😳 Next chapter you shall meet khushi, but firstly I need to get writing okie dokie!  but work is so hectic customers can be such a pain at times
great for suspense building...Omg!! i understand you!! i do a part time job ! and must help  customers too!! sometimes they can be such a pain! hehe yes great for the suspense building indeed! 

Nice part!!they are going to meet after ten years!!waiting for the next one!!!thanks for the pm!!update soon

awesome..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..