Originally posted by Newbiesoapfan
Sudha
Great one again... I did equations on wesha's post last time but today there is someone who has tried not a mathematical equation on the logic of IPKKND but a whole program in C... somehow it fitted in ... because things went into a loop and infinite loop!
Seriously --- the CVs are using interns --- the ideas are right but the conceptualization is all wrong.
For eg.
1) Khushi's dabba service - could have been done much better rather with blessings from Naani and with more planning.
2) Exposing Khushi's character to Arnav -- the Sanghi? brothers thing was totally unnnecessary as was the policeman thing... everything else that she did was OK
3) Showing his passion --- they could have done it like yesterday rather than thru the dance
4) Showing that she does things sometimes out of the goodness of her heart --- could have been done better --- maybe the dabba service and the guy running it ...and Khushi doing something selflessly or for someone in the office... but they had to have this fashion show thing.
5) Delhi mein Bali - don't ask!
Ash
Ash,
Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments.
Regarding what the CVs could have done better and CVs should do in future, I can tell you, the writers on this forum can give them a million ideas on how to make this better than the best. But like you said, current CVs are fresh novices it looks like - to me.
Rgds
Sudha