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OS: I Can't Believe I Fell in Love With You! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh, I'm in tears! literally in tears and now I have to explain why to my mum :s

This is just beautiful...I hope the CVs read this and it knocks some much needed sense into their heads...I mean I went from wanting to strangle Arnav to punching Shyam in the eye and to hugging poor Khushi...the pain was so real I can feel it in me...beautifully done :) And the resolution ten times more beautiful

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. Smita, you raise my hopes for the show.
 
This is EXACTLY whats needed!! Khushi confessing, and then, expressing every bit of herself, until Arnav realizes, and comes out and joins her under the stars...awwwh!
 
Im gunna hug you for writing something like this !πŸ€— and can we really hope one of the cvs or writers of the show stumble upon this, and realize that such a thing in the show would be so sensational, so beautiful, and just so perfect and needed!! And, no doubt Barun and Sanaya would do justice and beyond to such a scene like this!!!
 
BEAUTIFUL OS!!
 
- Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arrr what a beautifull OS onlinif it wasreal loved it plase dk continue and could u please pm me
Wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...i jus read n it was lovely dear...u described each n every emotion of theirs beautifully...loved it...pliz cud u pm me if u update or for any other future work...thnxxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
luved it!! it's always a treat to read ur OS's :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it love it waitiin for ur next part update soon...!
nice love ur os...!

Good job! πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ


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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘Beautiful OS. Loved her confession and loved how he broke down and apologized. πŸ‘

Thank you for the PM. Waiting for your next OS πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
As I read thru ur OS I could visualize ArHi enacting it...so powerful...so emotional...awesome job Smita
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Posted: 12 years ago
The theft was just below the belt. I loved Khushi's outburt

Yuks
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Posted: 12 years ago
love conquers all...

i am v glad that kushi confess right there and then! enough with all the accusations!

let arnav be full of guilt, for kushi has not given up on him and together
they will soothe each other.'s hearts..

love love this!