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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god.. that was so beautiful.. its like a fairy tale to read... yu have left me craving for more... please update sooonn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...such a sweet update!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update! , continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update naina - lovely - pls continue soon
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Dil Ko Hei Yakeen. . .Hum Pehle V Mile Kahi

When Arohi come back she is completely wet,but she is happy as well as surprised. Dadi and Shefali was tensed because it is already 9:30 then! They see her, Shefali said---
-Dadi Arohi aa gayi!
Dadi come near to her and said---
-Arohi tu kaha gayi thi?
-concert mei!
-lekin concert to cancel ho gayi. . .aur tu puri vig kaise gayi?
-Dadi baad mei baat kare. . .
-ha tum upar jake change kar lo mei Shefali ke haton haldi-dudh vegwati hoon.
 Arohi left, she was sat unmindful when Shefali entered. She gave her the glass.Arohi said---
-Tu theek keherahi thi
-kya?--- she said surprisingly.
-koi hei jise ye dhun pata hei,
-matlab. . .sach mei koi hei?
-ha Sheffy sach, mei khud apne kano se suna,
-kaha? concert mei?
-ha,
-details bol na.
 Arohi tell everything what had happened today.
-mujhe to abhi yakeen nehi ho raha, wo sapna tha ya sach. jaise wo dhun aj aur nikhar gaya, koi sunapan nehi raha, lekin mei use dekh nehi payi.
-to kya hua, agar wo tere liye bane hei, tere liye aye hei to wo tujhe khud hi dund lenge.
-lekin Shefali mujhe bahot dar lagraha hei, agar ye ek sapna hua to, jo kuchi palaon mei tut jayega?!
-Jo awaz, jo dhun maan se nikalta hei wo kabhi sapna nehi ho sakta, ye sach hei Arohi, tera wo prince charming aa gaya,
 Arohi smiled.
Arjun was silent since the incident happen.Aarav notices him, and said---
-kya baat hei?gana sunkar gunga ho gaya kya?itna chup kyun hei?
-nehi yaar, aj ek bahot badi chance mila tha gana gaane ka, par sab gadbad ho gaya.
-kyun?tu mera naam nehi liya?
-ha tera naam ki waja se hi to gadbad hua
-unlogon ne kya kaha?
-chuchundar!
-kya?????😲tujhe chuchundar kaha?itna bada himmat. . .
-cool! mujhe nehi tujhe bola
-kya? tu chod unlogon ko, aur waise bhi eha gake tu karega kya?ye to small-town hei,mera kuch contacts hei mei kaushis karunga,tu tension mat le.
-Aarav lekin aj aur ek cheez bhi hua!
-kya?
-aj jab mei akele waha guitar baja raha tha I feel mera elawa koi hei waha,
-kaun?
-wo nehi pata, lekin waha koi to tha, uski dhadkan ki shor sunay de raha tha mujhe. . .
-phir!?
-ha matlab ek aisa feeling ho raha tha, jaise use mei janti hoon lekin pehchanti nehi,uski aahetein, uski dil ki awaz, uski khusboo. . .mujhe aisa feeling ho raha tha. koi waha tha Aarav.
-tune dundne ki kaushis nehi ki?
-wahi to, tera message aa gay aur mei chala aya, lekin koi hei aarav, aur Dehradun mei hi hei, jis se mera koi to rista hei,. . .sanjog!
-kya?
-kuch nehi chal.
  Arohi can't sleep that night, every moment she was heard that guitar tune.
 Arjun also enriched his feelings all night. There is still raining outside.
 
   

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely update naina - iam really engrossed in the story - hope they will meet sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
how beautiful love is! *sighs*

thanks for the PM naina :) you will get used to this :)

Varshini

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Posted: 12 years ago
All I want to say awesome...ek dhun is tying them together...when r they going to meet n going to realize the melody of love...aare yaar mujhe bhi pm diya karo😃...
Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story is really getting intresting ek dhun do dil ka Milan too good want to see them together
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Jasbaat Kya. . .Halaat Kya
Vikram was very upset he feel that Arjun is a good-for -nothing; he is in the drawing roomwith Abhinav abd consulting some buisness problem, when Sumitra come for give the tea,Vikram said---
-Sumitra aaj mujhe aane mei thoda waqt lagega tumlog kha le na
-je ek baat thi
-jaldi bolo
-mei soch rahe thi Arjun ko kuch paise veg dete hei, wo to waha akele honge
-sapna to hei, lekin poora karne ka himmat nehi hei, tab use dad ki paise chahiye, kuch hota hi aise jise swarthi kehte hei, selfish!
Sumitra said---
-Aabhi tum andar jao, mujhe tumhara dad ke saath kuch baat karni hei.
Abhi left, Sumitra sit near Vikram and said---
-pata hei aap Aabhi ko jyada pasand karte he, lekin Arjun bhi to aap ka hi beta hei, aap hamesha kyun use aise tane marte hei?
-Beta wo naam se hei, kaam se nehi
He left, Sumitra was sad.
  In the morning, Aarav come Arjun's room to give him coffee. Arjun is standing in the balcony.Aarav said---
-ye le tera coffee! kya hua?
-kuch nehi, mei ek baat soch raha hoon,
-kya?us anjaan ladki ki bare mei?
-nehi, mujhe kuch kaam karna chahiye, kyun ki ghar se to mein kuch laya nehi, aur barbar mei tujse paisa nehi mang sakta. . .
-lekin. . .
-mujhe pata hei tu mere liye kuch kami nehi chodega, tu mujhe apne ghar mei rehne diya, lekin mei ab tere upar aur. . .
-tu kya bol raha hei?mei tera dost hu!
-ha isliye to please.
-thik hei lekin tu kaam kya karega?mera matlab tu itna bada industrialist ka beta hei, tere dad ko puri duniya pehchante hei, agar tu apna naam liya to sabko pata chal jayega.
-ha wahi soch raha hoon.
-thik hei par mei ek kaam dila sakta hoon tujhe par kya tu karega?
-kaam kya hei?
-hamari eha ek library hei, waha book-keeper ka job tha, par kal mujhe pata chala ki koi ladki waha join kiya hei, par jo Paresh Uncle hei waha ka manager, wo kehraha tha ek assistant book-keeper ka jarurat he.
-ha mei kar sakta hoon
-o.k then tu aj chale jana aaj Saturday hei na mom-dad se milne jana hei, so. . .
-its ok yaar.
  Tomorrow is Arohi's 21st Birthday; sa Shefali and Dadi are planning about something special for her. suddenly Shefali said---
-Dadi aapko yaad hei college mei Arohi kitni acchi piano bajati thi?
-ha bahot prize bhi jita tha usne.lekin uski ma-baap ka death ho jane par hume wo piano de deni pari thi.
-I have an idea, kyun na hum Arohi ko ek piano gift karte hei
-ye to bahot acchi baat hei lekin paise. . .
-wo sab to aap mere upar chod dijiye.
   Arohi came very late that day, She was very tired and forgot about her birthday. Dadi and Shefali were also silent, Arohi said---
-kya baat hei? aap dono itna chup kyun hei?
-kuch nehi aise hi.
   Arohi feels surprise, and go to sleep.
   Arjun came back at 9:00 p.m. Aarav was in tension, he saw Arjun and feel relaxed, said---
-gaya tha tu? baat hui?
-ha, naukri confirm hei.
-congratulations! to kal se tu bhi busy ho jayega?
-ha lekin mujhe books accha lagta hei, lekin tension hei ki wo mere boss, matlab wo lady book-keeper kaise hoga?
-I, think, acchi hogi,isliye to book-keeper ka job mila hei.
   They smiled.
Next day morning, Arohi was sleeping, Shefali and Dadi are planning and Shefali go for a music store. The store is just open, Shefali said---
-uncle yaad hei mujhe?
-kaun ho tum?
-Shefali Rai...wo Aradhana Sharma . . .
-o bolo beti kya chahiye?
-uncle apko yaad hei bachpaan mei humare ghar ek piano tha lekin humne use apko de diye the, to wahi wapas chahiye. . .
-theek hei lekin uska price to. . .
-ha ha paisa hei mere pass, kitna chahiya?
-10,000
-theek hei ye lejiye
-wo mei thodi der baad vegwa deti hoon.
-o.k
  Shefali come back, Dadi asked---
-kya hua?
-sab ho gaya dadi, unlogon abhi piano de ke jayenge.
    At that moment arohi entered, they became silent, Arohi said---
-mujhe dekh kar aise sab chup kyun ho jate ho? aur tu coffee-shop nehi jayegi?
-nehi aur tu bhi aj library nehi jayegi.
-kyun kya hua mujhe? kuch nehi honewala hei!
-kya?
-wo to surprise hei.
   Just then they entered with the piano, arohi is gasped in astonishment. said---
-Piano!!!!😲
-ha tera birthday gift---said Shefali
-lekin ye to humne de diya tha na?
-ha aur ab le liya
-itna paise kaha se aaya?
-tu fikar maat kar.
  Arohi is crying in joy😭, Shefali hugged her.🤗
       At night, Arohi and Shefali are chatting about their dream; Arohi said---
-tu mere liye piano le ayi, lekin itna paisa. . .
-Arohi ye paisa mera hei, mera kuch savings tha us se hi liya. . .tera sapna jo pura karna tha
-lekin tera sapno ka kya?
-meri sapne! wo to...mei model banna chahati hoon,I know small-town mei ye thoda difficult hei, lekin...
-tera sapna bhi jarur pora hoga,jaise tu mere sapna poora kiya waise mei bhi karungi.
-you are so sweet Arohi.
   Shefali go away and Arohi go to sleep.

     
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago