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mg ff: distance brings us closer#3 pt 47 pg 117 (Page 75)

_Jyothi_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha5058

reserved  for next part...


oh my god... sid had called her and warned her...
that's why she left the home...
mummy me crying badly...Cry
vicky tried a lot but she didn't listened to him..after all this is only for her maan,,
how can she let him happen anything...she loves him so much..
maan sensed something and get back to home and found geet has been left him...
i can't see my maan like this... kuch karo jaldi.. i know maaneet mil chuke hia..
we are roaming in past but fir bhi...
he became a hard shell after leaving geet... whole family shattered...
neha is crying badly seeing maan's condition without his jaan..
vicky is so helpful.. he helped her a lot...
and sent her at his place..this is gud in this part...
she became pregnant... wow guddy giddy news...
what will maan do now?
me worried...swetha n sid ki to kahir nahi hai...

love you dear... hugs to you..muah,.. finish nahi ho sakta...
itni jaldi.
pls pls pls ...

awww dont cry neha dear...
every thing will be fine... now the past is over...
yes dear i am ending it soon...

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meena..

loved itt

thanku dear... Smile
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jssood

Loved the first half
oh so sid is behind all this love  the way maan tackel geet
now waiting for next wt happen worst and how this happen

thanku dear... Smile
yes sid did all this...
hmm maan will do something now...
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal_maaneet

awesome part
so sid is behind the accident
loved how maan is taking care of geet

the second half was awesome
poor geet her birthday started so happily but she has to leave all
i hope she atleast calls vicky after reaching bangalore

thanku bacha... Smile
ya sis did all this..
ya they celebrated geet's bday and she is happy but that sis'd call made all the things worst Angry
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneetlover1

Omg!me cryng badly like kya hai sweetu muje rula diya...
So Maaneet ki shaadi hospital mein hui infrnt of anand..
That bas***d idiot stupid dnkey kamina i hate hm how dare he is...wait i hav one mre i idea..i'l tie no no we wil hamara cop team hai na..we'l tie hm ulta and beat hm with with thorny sticks no no ths wil be small saza..umm baad mein batathi hu..
Omg!in sab mein love makng scene chala gaya...he he me besharam na..
Oye i want nice wala sr scene nw in present samji...
Maan mera sweetu love u love u love u muaah..kitna khayal raktha hai apni wife ka..hey babaji plz muje bhi maan jaisa pati do nt nw abhi time hai..mein abhi choti bachi hu..isliye meri di's ko do..ahem hey di i thnk u knw who iam referrng to...
Geet ne jane se pehle vicky ko inform kiya isliye o saath tha..par geet ko maan se sab kuch batadena chahiye tha..par o kya karthi o dar gayi thi na..
Tum na us kaminey ko chod mat..warna mein tujhe chodungi nahi..i hate hm grrr
me again startd cryng rememberng maaneet's pain..mummy jyothi di ne muje rula diya..
Love u darling..muaah

thankgod vicky was there 4 her..omg!my maan ka kya haal huwa..iam cryng really..nahii!my chweetu loving maan became i love maan in every way..he he he afterall iam maaniac...iam sufferng 4m maan fever n want ths fever forever..he he he
so the past ended and nw sweetu us kaminey ko chodna mat..sid idiot sala ruk mera maan araha hai ab teri khair nahi..maan i'l gve 1 mre idea..make sid stand on hot big pan and dnt let hm step down..ek bada box fix karo tha ki o bahar na asake aur hot pan par kadi rahe nahi jump..he he..evil smile
neha di n jyothi di kesa hai meri idea?

awww so sorry mona dear for making u cry... Embarrassed
first of all thanku so much for ur comment... Smile
yes sid did all this... hate him,,,,,
i am also thinking of punishment...
but maan will  do it...
finally the past is over and now u will get ur fav maan-maanvi moments... Big smile
tumari idea tho superb hain...
but u want dad-daughter moments or not..
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemishti

Thanks for long update.
Geet went through so much because of that devil sid.
He tried ti kill her dad and planning for maan.
Bechari what she will do.  Forced to leave the house.
Good vicki's parents were taking care of her.
Sid and sweta should be punished severly.

ur welcome dear...
ya because of sid they all suffered a lot...
ya vicky is a true brother...
happy for that...
yes they will be punished by maan for sure...
thanku for ur comment dear...
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uteem

awsome update
loved it
best part dey got married as geet fathers..wants her safety
bloody sid
i hate him to the core
swetha is totally mad.
he is in sid side to get maan
bloody her

dey get married..take deir relationship to the next level..
bt after dat sid destroyed her happiness.nd she is mad,.chali gyi..
maan ko toh bata deti
wht sid did...
hate him
maan totally lost
kasam di thi isliye search nai kiya


finally past over
nd now present
ab tu gya sid
nd swetha
nd geet ka bhai bi hai ab
ab kya hoga
going to love it

thanku dear... Smile
yes sid did all this and maan will punish him soon...
yes dear past is completed now...
haha sid and sweta are gone now...
thanku dear..

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rani1391

sid shwetaCensored AngryEvil SmileDead poor maneet have to go through so muchCry

sid n sweta AngryAngry hate them...
ya because of them they have to suffer a lot. par ab nahi...
maan aagaya na,... Big smile

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