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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 44)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
do continueee soon...reallyy amazinggg!!!!!!!!! waiting fo rthe next part...pls PM me...thnkuuu

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sajanfan004

Originally posted by kushalkidewaani

Overall:Man...how do you manage to write soo well??...I'm like totally addicted to your writin...I didnt check my If for days and I came on today just to check if you updated...: and Wow this update was once again commendable yaar...:)...so now lets divide this apprciation comment into segments... :)

Note:Thank you for giving me the note :)...I guess I probably would have been preety confused without it :)

Devar-Bhabhi:I justt loveeed this btis the most even more than the Jeeju-Saali bits :)...I loveed Virat's dialouge when he explains Viren's wishes to Jeevika about getting to know her better :)...I loveeed the Hi-5 part...The part when Virat pulled Jeevika's cheeks was absolutely adorable...But most of all I just love the way Virat makes Jeevika blush :)

Jeeju-Saali:I adored the Jeeju-Saali bits as wel...My favorite was when Viren had mistaken Maanvi for Jeevika...Man that prt made me LMAO...I wouldnt say much abotut this Jeeju-Saali Duo kyunki jab log ye log saath hote hai toh everyone knows ki unka has has ke halaath kharab hone wali hai :)
Precap:As usual,your Precaps always excite me lekin this one yeh wala has over excited me yaar...I cant wait for the update...I mostly excited because as an ultimate VirIkian I get to read very few Virika updates and your precap about the Unchaai thing...makes me over-excited :)...By reading all the three precaps I predict that there wil be more of VirMan in the upcoming part...but I'm excited for that too as I am a VirManian too :)

Obera

Hi... Thank you for such an encouraging comment..
Yeah, you have predicted right- there will be virman in the next update!
I'm really happy that you are liking my update..
Just by the way, if you are a virika fan then why do you have a virman picture?
My photo is of VirMan because before VirMan was my like and as by name I'm a big fan of Kushal...soo I guess that justifies my dp...But, now that you brought it into my notice Imma change it :D

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Cute Update! The precap's sound exciting! Do continue soon! 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
cute update but can you put little bit more virman pliiij

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Edited comment on page 45. Big smile 

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Deeps-

*Unres*

Shit! I'm really really really sorry! For the super duper late comment! Shocked

Had exams na! Ouch

Okay, now let me start.

Jeeju-Saali - Oh. my God! Manvi is super duper hilarious! ROFL 

And so sweet! LOL She spoiled their romantic moment but will make a romantic scene for them! Embarrassed 

Haw! Manvi.. Bad manners! Not suppose to read others love chits! ROFL

Aw! How adorable is Viren? Embarrassed Smiling in his sleep.. Ahhh! Day Dreaming

Thank you Bhagwan Ji, mere di ko Jeeju jaise pati dene ke liye, jo unke aakhon mein kabhi bhi aasoon(tears) nahi aane denge aur jo unhe HUMESHA khush rakhenge, chahe aandhi (storm)aaye ya fir toofan! Mere Radha jaise di ke liye, sirf unke jaisa Krishna ho ho sakhta ha.." How true is that now? Big smile Radha and Krishna! Embarrassed PERFECT! Big smile

His mood, at once, changed into romantic. Viren! ROFL Very naughty haan! Wink

 He said at last, as he opened his eyes. "Goodmorn..." He stopped abruptly. He was shocked, he saw Manvi next to him instead of Jeevika. "AHH" He screamed and jumped up on the bed, for once he thought he was seeing a dream. - That was totally hilarious! ROFL I was actually like this ---> ROFL While reading it! LOL

Aw! White shirt and blue jeans and J has worn a white salwar! Woah! Embarrassed PERFECT yet again! Big smile Wicked Viren haan! LOL Bechaari J will have to wait for a super sweet,romantic compliment.. But I'm sure it will be worth it! Embarrassed

Weird Manvi! ROFL She is standing and getting weird freaky dreams! ROFL 

Devar-Bhabhi - Aw! I love the way Virat keeps pulling J's leg! Embarrassed

 aapne galat kaha bhabhi, yeh kahiye 'jo mere pati ka pasand, wahi meri pasand'... True that! Wink

. Viren had always cared about her life and her thoughts more than his. He would always like to hear her and Manvi's childhood tales, but he never told her any of his memories. - How sweet can he get yaar? Embarrassed Seriously, One caring person he is! Big smile

Hahaha! :D Loved the devar-bhabhi breakfast plan! LOL

Like seriously just juice and salad? Dead

Why does Virat drag Manvi into everything! LOL Seems like she is 24*7 on his mind! Wink

Baby elephant?! ROFL 

Viren? And natak? Shocked Oh my God! flirty Viren.. Shocked Wow haan! Tongue

Manvi = Drama queen! Seriously! Perfectly suits her! LOL

Haw! Manvi sabko darati thi! Tongue 

I loved how Virat came to her rescue! Big smile So sweet! 

Normal log? ROFL EArly-types. Man! She is hilarious! ROFL 

Haw! Viren. So bad! LOL Aise nai tadpate kisi ko! Wink

Loved the update. I just like it how you explain everything. Big smile 

PRE-CAP - Ohhh! So, Manvi will get her punishment! LOL 

And They are gonna do various activities. WOW! 

Next update is FUN FUN FUN! Big smile 

Can't wait. Continue soon! And once again sorry for the real late comment! 

Wow! That was such a long and encouraging comment, wonder if my update was worth it. 
But thank you so much for liking my SS, and I will try and update soon!Your comments always urges me to write more, I'm so glad tha my ideas are being liked by many people. 
Thank you once again, and please start with your FF also... Will be waiting for that... 

Once again, thank you for liking my post..
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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
u didnt update from so many days update soon

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
nice concept...just read part 1...it was hilarious...loved the awesome nok-jhok convo virman had...gonna read the next parts now...really good stuff...

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