Hey
guys! Im back with another update! There is a note on the next page. Do read it.
This
update has both VIRIKA AND VIRMAN. I really hope you'll like it. The next
update will most probably be in 2 weeks.
RECAP:
In the last update, Swamini and Virat convince Viren to stay in Chandigarh,
Dadaji tells Jeevika and Manvi about Viren's decision, Jeevika is tired of
Viren hiding things from her, they check into the hotel, Viren books a special
suite for him and Jeevika while the others have deluxe rooms, not suites. At
last Jeevika decides to clear the matter once and for all with Viren and VirMan
decide to have dinner.
Please
give your suggestions. I hope you'll like the update. This part is not extremely long as the others!
Here it
goes:-
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NOTE:
Some people may be wondering about the character sketch of this SS, well, in
this SS, ALL characters have the SAME nature as in the show- Sweet and shy
VirIka and naughty and mischievous Virman- just one change- Manvi is not at all
ill.
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Part
13: Midnight:-
As
Viren was going to shut the light he heard a teary voice.
"Aap
mujhe ignore kar rahe hai na? Kyu avoid kar rahe hai? Meine kya kiya hai? Meri
kya galti hai?" Jeevika sobbed softly.
Viren
turned around. He was shocked. Only he knew how his world had shattered in
front of him, on seeing Jeevika cry so much. He always wanted to be there for
her, and he could not bear to see the love of his life crying. It hurt him, as
each drop of tear slided down her cheeks. He could never forgive any person who
brought tears in her eyes, be it him, or anyone else.
"Aap
iss tarah se kyu behave kar rahe hai? Itni der se aap bilkul theek the aur jese
hi meine ek important baat discuss karne ke liye bola toh aap... aap jaante hai
na ki mein kya baat karna chahati hoon? aap aise kyu kar rahe hai? Mein aapse
kabse baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, magar aap baar baar baat ko taal
rahe hai! Kyu? Kya aap mujhse naaraaz(angry) hai?" Jeevika went on crying.
Viren
immedietely climbed on the bed and hugged her tightly. He clutched her hand and
gently rested her head on his shoulder. He patted her head to comfort and calm
her. But tears continued to make their way down her cheeks and onto Viren's
T-shirt. After sometime Viren realised that his sleeve was wet. He kept still.
Viren
the whispered:-
Viren:
Kuch nahi hua hai Jeevika... aisa kuch nahi hai jo tum soch rahi ho.. Mein
tumhe Ignore ya avoid bilkul nahi kar raha hoon.. tumhari koi galti nahi hai..
sach me..
J: toh
fir aap aise..
Viren:
shhh, Jeevika abhi kuch mat bolo.. meri poori baat dhyan se suno...
Jeevika
remained silent. Viren went on.
Viren:
MEIN tumse bilkul bhi naaraaz NAHI hoon... mein koi bhi baat ko nahi taal
raha.. Jeevika, mujhe tumse koi shiqayat (complaint) nahi hai, aur kabhi nahi
hoga... tum meri zindagi ho, bhala koi kabhi apne zindagi se naaraaz ho sakhta
hai kya? mein janta hoon tum kya baat karna chahati ho... flight ke baare
mein..mein tumhe sab bata doonga.. tum bas shaant (calm) ho jao..
Jeevika
slowly broke the hug and looked at him.
J: Sirf
flight ke baare mein nahi, aap mujhe yeh bataiye ki aap mujhse sab kuch kyu
chupate hai?
Viren:
Meine tumse kya chupaya hai?
J: agar
aapko kaam ke liye pehle chandigarh jana tha toh aap keh dete na.. magar aapne
yeh baat mujhse discuss karna zaruri hi nahi samjha..
Viren:
tumhe iske baare mein kese pata chala?
J:
meine dadaji ko poocha tha.. agar aap mujhe pehle bata dete, toh mein dadaji se
baat karti, mein unki permission leti.. mein unhe kehe deti ki mujhe aapke kaam
se koi problem nahi hai, jesa woh aur baaki sab sochte hai..
Viren:
Jeevika, mein tumhe batane wala tha, fir socha ki business ki baat hai isliye
pehle dadaji se baat discuss kar leta hoon...tumhe kya laga? ki mein tumhe bina
bataye hi yaha se jaldi chala jaunga?
J: fir
bhi, aapne mujhe kuch nahi bataya...aur mein itni der se pareshaan ho rahi thi
ki shayad aap mujhse naaraaz hai, ki mujhe aapka zyada kaam karna pasand nahi
hai.. magar aap pehle mujhe bol dete toh mein..
Viren:
Jeevika, Jeevika, Jeevika! Tum kya boli ja rahi ho? Mein janta hoon ki tumhe
mere kaam se koi shiqayat nahi hai.. (after a pause) magar mein yeh bhi janta
hoon ki jab dadaji ne tumhe yeh baat batai hogi ki mein chandigarh jaldi ja
raha hoon, toh yeh sunte hi tumhara dil beth gaya hoga na?
Jeevika
remembered how sad she was when she heard that Viren had to go back for some
important work, and he wouldn't be there with her for the whole journey. She
looked up at Viren. He knew her so well. She smiled and nodded slightly.
Viren:
aur wese, isse ek kaam toh acha ho gaya..
J: Kya?
Viren:
poore pariwar ne mujhe yahi rehne ke liye convince kar diya... warna agar mein
tumhe batata aur tum jake sabse baat karti to shayad sab maan jate aur mujhe
jaldi jane ke liye permission de dete..
Jeevika
laughed.
J:
Viren ji, aur ek baat thi..
Viren:
arrey, abh aur kya baat karna baaki reh gaya hai?
To
tease Jeevika, he added "abh baad mein baaki sabh baatein karenge, abhi so jate
hai..". He lied down and pulled the blanket over him. He pretended to fall
asleep. After a couple of moments he opened one eye and saw Jeevika sitting in
the same position staring at him. But this time she had a really serious
expression on her face. Viren jumped up seeing her *pretend to be angry*
expression.
Viren(sort
of scared): arrey, mein toh mazaak kar raha tha yaar! Mein tumhari baat ko
kabhi taal sakhta hoon kya? Bolo kya baat hai?
Jeevika
smiled.
J: Mein
bhi mazaak kar rahi thi, aapko kya laga? ki mein sach mein aapse gussa ho gayi
hoon? Mein janti thi ki aap sirf sone ka naatak kar rahe the.. aur aapko jagane
ke liye meine apna serious expression ki help li..
Viren's
mouth fell open.
Viren:
iska matlab Mrs. Vadera, aapne mujhe budhu banaya! Aapki itni himmat?
He
began tickling her and she fell on him and he fell on the bed. She went on
laughing as Viren went on tickling her. Despite of her constant attempts of
trying to remove his hands, she couldn't succeed. At last, she said "Vir..viren
ji, abh bas, haste haste mera pet(stomach) dukh raha hai" (since she was
laughing and trying to speak at the same time her voice came out in a stammer.
She said that she had laughed enough and now her stomach was aching because of
it.) Viren left her. She had forgotten what she had to talk about and so had
Viren. Viren shut the light and pulled the blanket over them and Jeevika slept
happily in Viren's arms.
Meanwhile
VirMan:-
Manvi
goes inside and sees Virat sitting on a couch, with his legs on the nearby
table and his eyes fixed on the television screen which was presently showing
an INDIA vs SRI LANKA cricket match. She frowned and rolled her eyes.
Manvi
went and stood in front of the television, blocking Virat's view. Virat shifted
his head right to see the screen, and Manvi moved right as well. Virat moved
left, Manvi moved left. This went on for sometime, after which both of them got
fustrated.
Virat:
Kya yaar? Beech se hatto na!
M: Mr.
Virat Vadera! Shayad aap bhool rahe hai ki yeh mera room hai, isliye mein jaha
bhi khara hona chahu, mein khari ho sakhti hoon!
Virat:
Arrey Manvi, yeh apne ratte (mugged up) hue dialogues hai na, kissi aur par
jake barsaana (use them in front of someone else), mere upar hi kyu use kar
rahi ho? Mere upar toh inka koi effect hi nahi hai, kyu waste kar rahi ho?
M: Kya
kaha tumne? Ratte hue dialogues?
Virat:
Haan! aur nahi toh kya? Har samay ek larai karne ka bahana yaad karke aati ho,
aur aake mujhse jhagra karti ho! Dekho, mujhe tumhare kaam se koi problem nahi
hai magar, tumhe ek suggestion deta hoon..
Manvi
looked at Virat and moved forward, towards him. She went close to him and
pointed her finger at him.
M:
Pehli baat toh yeh, ki mein koi bhi larai ka bahana dhoond ke nahi aati hoon!
Aur doosri baat, mujhe tumhare stupid suggestions ki koi zarwat nahi hai,
samjhe?
Virat:
Jitna time tum larne mein lagati ho na, utna time agar apna dimag use karogi na
toh bohot acha hoga! Infact sabh acha hi hogi! Kyuki, tum poore din toh larte
rehti ho, kissi na kissi bechare ko dhoond ke jhagarne ka bahana dhoondti rehti
ho! Toh socho, agar poora time tum apne brains use karogi toh poore duniya ko
kitna faida hoga!
M(smirking):
Haan, apne brains use karke na humesha yahi plan banaungi ki Virat Vadera ko
kin kin tareeko se mein irritate kar saku! Aur tumse kisne kaha ki mein poora
din sirf larti rehti hoon?
Virat(smirking):
Manvi,kissi ko mujhe batane ki koi zarwat nahi hai! Tum poore din MUJHSE hi toh
larti rehti ho na, toh mujhe pata hai!
M: toh
tumne apne aap ko bechara bulaya? Anyways, mere paas tumse larne ke alaawa aur
bohot saara kaam hai, samjhe?
Virat:
Acha kya kaam? Beeji aur baaki ghar waalo ko pareshaan karna, dabbu ko daatna,
ya fir Jeevika bhabhi ke ache tasty khane mein aur namak mirch dhalna? Bataiye?
M: Ho
gaya? Abh mein bolu? Mere paas in sab se better kaam hai, jaise ki, Beeji, ki
seva karna, dabbu ko sumi ke liye naye naye tips dena aur Di ke life mein har
problem ko door karna!
Virat: 'Mein
toh tumhe free advise de raha hoon... lena hai to lo nahi to jane do'..
M: Yeh
filmy dialogues hai na, mujhe mat sunao.. aur..
Virat:
chodo na Manvi, fir se larne mein lag gayi ho! Dekho, meine sahi kaha tha na,
tum poore din larte rehti ho!
M:
taali ek haath se nahi bajti, tum bhi toh lar rahe ho?
Virat:
acha jo bhi ho, meine bhai se promise kiya tha ki mein tumse aaj larai nahi
karunga..
M: kyu
jhoothe (false) promises karte rehte ho Virat? Mujhe pareshaan kiye bina toh
tumhare jeevan ka ek pal bhi nahi guzarta! Aur aaj ke din hi kyu, kal, parso,
saare din mujhse larai mat karo, tab manungi..
Virat:
Jo bhi.. chalo khana khate hai.. mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi hai, tumhari
bakwaas baatein sunte sunte mein aise bhi pak gaya hoon.. Waise Manvi, abh toh
tumhari bhook khatam ho gayi hogi na?
M: Kyu?
Virat:
itne der se mera sar jo kha rahi ho!!!
Manvi
got really angry she climbed on a sofa and started hitting Virat with all the
pillows she could find. Virat joined in and soon there was a pillow fight
between them!After some time, one of Virat's pillow hit Manvi really hard. She
looked at him with such a scary expression that he knew that danger was coming.
He ran for it-- all around the dining room, under the table, behind the
counter, on the bed, outside, on the sofa, chased by manvi who was continuously
shouting "mein tumhe chodungi nahi Virat, tumari itni himmat ki tumne Manvi
Chaudhary ko maara...".
After
sometime both of them got tired and they stopped running like cats and dogs. They
saw that the wooden floor had turned white with the layer of feathers which had
squeezed out of the pillows while they were fighting. They looked at each other
and laughed. They both sat down on the sofa.
M: bas,
Virat, ho gaya...abh mein bohot thak gayi hoon, aur meri bhook double ho gayi
hai..
Virat:
same here Manvi! Chalo yeh larai hum kal continue karenge abhi ke liye khane ko
enjoy karte hai..
M:
haan, acha idea hai partner, mein abhi khane ka bag laati hoon..
Virat:
ok..
Manvi
got up, went to the corner of the room picked up a light shaded bag and marched
back to the sofa. She kept the bag on the table, grasped the television remote
kept beside it and switched off the television.
M: tum
bhi na Virat, pata nahi kya bakwaas dekhte rehte ho TV par!
Virat:
Oh madam! Yeh bakwaas nahi tha ok? This was an international ODI match of the
worldcup 2012. The finals between India and Sri Lanka!
M:
Whatever.. mujhe match ke itne details chahiye bhi nahi.. pata nahi larko ko
cricket mein itna interest kyu hai!
Virat(imitating
manvi): Pata nahi larkiyon ko saas-bahu serials mein interest kyu hai!
They
both shared a laugh.
Manvi
took out all the things from the bag, naming each one of them as she kept it on
the table.
M: yeh
rahe, di ke haath ke samosa, fried rice, dal, aalo ke parathe aur meetha
achaar.. aur yeh raha jo humne airport se khareeda tha- fried chips, coke,
cheese balls, popcorn aur chocolates!
Virat:
yeh toh sach mein feast hai yaar!
M:
meine kaha tha na! Chalo abh khate hai..
"Mein
to sabse pehle bhabhi/di ke haath ka bana hua aalo ka paratha khaunga/khaungi"
Virat and Manvi said together. They smiled. They decided to eat it together.
Virat took a piece of the paratha and dipped it into the pickle. He then put
his hand in front of Manvi's mouth. She smiled and opened it, but Virat gulped
it into his own mouth. Manvi squinted at him. He again took a piece and put it
in front of Manvi. She opened her mouth and this time she was a centimetre
close from the paratha when Virat withdrew his hand and ate it up. Manvi was
annoyed. She bent forward to break a piece for herself, but then Virat stopped
her. She looked at him. He held his ears, and again broke off a piece for
Manvi. He brought it close to her mouth. This time Manvi didn't want to take
any chance. She held his hand and forced it into her mouth and bit so hard that
she nearly cut Virat's finger.
Virat:
OUCH!! Partner! thoda dheere please!
M(smiling):
Sorry Virat! Magar tumne woh kahavat toh suni hogi na 'Jaisa karoge, Waisa
bharoge'.. sab tumhari galti hai..
Virat
ignored her and continued eating. She joined in and both of them ate, sometimes
having fun, sometimes feeding each other. After sometime while drinking coke:-
Virat:
Waise Manvi, mujhe tumhare dare ke liye ek bohot acha idea aaya hai! Its mind-blowing!
Manvi
thinks: Arrey yaar, is Virat ko dare ke baare mein abhi yaad aaya? Ek din ke
liye bhool nahi sakhta hai kya! Mera poora feast kharab karne mein tulla hua
hai!
Virat:
Hello? Manvi? Kaha kho gayi? Mein tumse kuch keh raha hoon!
She
came out of her thoughts.
M: haan
haan, mein sun rahi hoon! Kya dare hai bolo? Mein bhi toh sunoo tumhara
mind-blowing dare..
Virat:
toh dare yeh hai ki..
M: abh
zyada suspense mat create karo, seedha seedha bolo na..
Virat:
dare yeh hai ki ... TUMHE...KAL POORA DIN...
Manvi's
mind was racing in all directions. She was continuously thinking ' 'poora din!
Kya dare ho sakhta hai, poora din uske saath rehna, poora din usse larai nahi
karna, poora din KYA!!!!'
Virat
continued: MERA HAR BAAT MANNA PAREGA...
Manvi's
mouth fell open. She was shocked. She didn't want such a dare! She had not
thought about it even in the dizziest of her daydreams.
M:
KYA?? MATLAB, MUJHE KAL POORA DIN TUMHARA GULAAM BANKE REHNA HOGA?
Virat:
YES! Mein jo bhi kahu, woh karna hoga! Mera saara baat manna hoga! Koi bahana
nahi chalega... No cheating ok?
M: Kya
virat! Dare mein koi cheating kese kar sakhta hai!
Virat:
baaki ka toh pata nahi, lekin, tum zarur kar sakhti ho! Zarur koi na koi plan
bana logi, issliye mein pehle se hi clear kar raha hoon! Dekho, agar mein tumhe
koi kaam doon, toh tum, bhabhi ke paas nahi bhaag sakhti ya fir, kissi bhi
tarah kaam ko taal nahi sakhti! Done?
[Basically,
the dare was that the next day, Manvi had to listen to everything Virat said!
EVERYTHING! Without postponing the work in any way, or running off to any of
the family members for help or making any sort of excuse for the work which
Virat wanted her to do.]
Manvi
didn't want to be teased by Virat, so she made up her mind to think of
something that night only.
M:
Theek hai DONE!
Virat:
acha chalo, abh mein thak gaya hoon, khana bhi khatam ho gaya hai, toh mein
sone ja raha hoon!
He
stood up. Manvi stopped him.
M: Oh
Virat! Kam se kam, yeh saara mess clean up toh karne mein help karo! Kal agar
di iss kamre mein aa gayi na, toh pata nahi kya hoga! Itna messy room dekh ke
toh woh mujhe bohot gussa karengi...
Virat:
Oh haan! mein toh bhool hi gaya tha, bhabhi ko dirty rooms bilkul pasand nahi
hai! Chalo, mein tumhari help kar deta hoon!
Manvi
smiled. They started to pack up all the food left and cleaned up all the
feathers. After sometime they had cleaned everything and the room looked much
neater.
M:
Thank you so much Virat!
Virat:
arrey Manvi chodo na! Partners ek doosre ko thank you nahi bolte! Aur waise bhi
yeh room toh meine bhi dirty kiya hai, toh obviously mujhe bhi clean karne mein
tumhari help karni chahiye!
M: yeh
toh tumne sahi baat ki hai!
Virat:
Mein toh humesha sahi hota hoon..
M:
acha, abh yeh deenge (false praise) maarna bandh karo..
Virat:
Ok see you tomorrow!
M: See
you...
Manvi
escorted Virat to the door and after wishing a goodnight, she shut the door.
That
night:-
Manvi
was lying on her bed and thinking(to herself): Iss dare ka mein kya karu! Bari
jaldi jaldi mein haan bol diya tha na manvi, abh nateeja bhukto (bear the
result)... Virat ko bhi yahi ek dare mila tha kya? Usse waise bhi isse acha
mauka nahi milega mujhe irritate karne ka! Kuch na kuch toh sochna hi parega,
mujhe! Lets just hope ki raat ko Virat ko itna distracting sapna aaye, ki woh
kal subah dare ke baare mein bhool jaye! Fingers crossed manvi!
Meanwhile
Virat:-
He was
sitting on his bed thinking about the next day.
Virat
(to himself): Waah Virat, waah! Kya dare diya hai! Isse toh manvi chaha karke
bhi nahi bach payegi! Kal mein jo bolunga, usse meri saari baatein manni hi
hogi!
Thinking
of the next day Virat set the alarm for 7 and slept. Manvi to set an alarm on
her mobile for 7 'o' clock and fell asleep.
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Thats
it for this update!
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Thank
you!
--sajanfan004
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