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A NEW SS-- FAMILY HOLIDAY (Page 22)

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Of course yaar! No need to rush.
We all -I- understand.
I hope you will be able to update soon...
 

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Its ok bbz take ur time.. X

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
take ur time...v don't want a rush...sabr(patience) ka ful meetha hota hai...

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Hey guys, Im back with another update.

Sorry for the late post, but as i was really busy for the past couple of weeks, i could not update!

RECAP: VIRIKA: LUNCH

               VIRMAN: TASK ABOUT TO BEGIN

NEXT UPDATE: 27th or 28th ... I cant assure you that but i will try my best to update before that...

ABOUT THE UPDATE: this is a bit more VIRMAN than VIRIKA as promised, but the VIRIKA scene is also very long...

As this is a LONG UPDATE, after a LONG TIME, therefore, i want very LONG COMMENTS and a LONG LIST of likes.

Hope you'll like it.. Here it goes:-

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Note:-

Guys, there are 2 things i want to make absolutely clear:-

1) Vaderas are millionaires. But viren does not spend lavishly without thinking, he respects money, but its not that he doesn't have money! HE IS A MILLIONAIRE. Viren is not like "its just 2o,000, big deal!" he cares for money but he is not a miser and he LOVES spending for his family.

2) for jeevika and manvi, even 20,000 is a lot (for obvious reasons).

3) The aeroplane is like- the seats are not one behind the other, like in normal flights, as this is a private flight, seats are far away. So people cant see and hear what the others are talking about and stuff, so its not like one can look over at the other from their seat.

I know, reading this would be confusing now. But as you'll read further (this update), you'll will come to know why I am mentioning these.

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Part: 9: Aircraft: Task and the Purchase.

Meanwhile VirMan:-

M: T..t..task? abhi? Kesa task virat?

Virat: haan task! Woh bhi abhi!

M: lekin aeroplane mein task thodi na kar sakhte hai.. yaha zyada jagah bhi nahi hai..

Virat: madam ji, tumhare paas bahane ki kitni lambi list hai?

M: Virat! Mein bahana nahi bana rahi hoon... its a fact.. abh tum agar mujhe task do ge, toh mein kaha karungi until and unless kuch bohot simple ho...

Manvi had her hopes up that virat would agree and give her a simple task since they were in a flight.

Virat: umm... let me thinkk... umm...FINE! mein tumhe ek truth aur dare poochoonga..truth mein, tumhe bilkul sachi sachi jawab dena hoga, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye aur dare zyada tough nahi hoga... i mean nothing which would make you uncomfortable... done?

Manvi thinks: YESS!! Phas gaya... truth mein kya hai.. kya pooch sakhta hai... aur wese bhi sach bolne mein mujhe koi problem nahi hai... aur dare bhi mere agreement ke bina nahi hoga, toh its perfect for you manvi.. Kya Virat Singh Vadera! Galti kardi tumne itna bara aur acha mauka haath se jaane diya, i mean MANVI CHOUDHARY ko ek task dena joh usse karna hi parega, yeh mauka baar baar nahi aata.. tch tch tch...i cant believe it, ki mein esse task ke liye, itne time se, dar rahi thi, ki kahi yeh virat mujhse kuch tough task karne ke liye na keh de... magar yeh toh kaafi aasaan tha! TUMNE ACHA CHANCE GAWA DIYA PARTNER!!

Virat thinks: Manvi! Yeh mat sochna ki mene tumhe ache ache kaam karwane ka mauka gawa diya hai! Mein janta hoon ki iss waqt tumhare man mein ladoo foot rahe honge, but just wait and watch, jab tum tumhara truth aur dare sunogi, toh agar tumhara muh khula ka khula na reh gaya na toh mera naam bhi virat vadera nahi!! ABH MEIN BHI DEKHTA HOON KI TUM ISSE KESE BACHTI HO MANVI CHOUDHARY...

M: oh.. truth? Konsa sach partner? Meine toh tumse kuch nahi chupaya hai!

Virat: jab tum ne woh dialogue kaha "sirf partner? Sirf partner? Arrey mein toh tumhari life..." fir tumne mujhse kaha ki you meant "live partner", abh mujhe sach sunna hai! Tum pehle kya keh rahi thi? Aur manvi, yeh ek proper task hai, ek random question nahi hai, isliye tumhe bilkul sach sach jawab dena parega! (he had literally asked her to confess her feelings for him, but twisted the way of asking.)

Manvi's mouth gaped open! She was in shock, HOW WAS SHE TO ESCAPE THIS?!

Virat thinks: Abh kya karogi manvi choudhary... Wah Virat! Kya phasaya hai! Abh toh tumhe sach kabool karna hi parega..

Manvi thinks: arrey! Yeh kya pooch liya virat ne... meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki ek bet lose karne ke wajah se itna problem hoga! Abh mein kya karu... jhoot nahi bol sakhti, aur sach bhi nahi bol sakhti.. acha phasaya hai virat ne.. abh toh mein gayi..

Virat: kya soch rahi ho partner? Bolo na..

M: wo..woh.. kuch nahi.. bas aise hi..

Virat: haan, toh mein sun raha hoon..

Just then Claire came.

Ah: Sir, madam, its half way now. We are serving lunch. Please look through the menu card and let us know the dishes you would wish to have.

Virat: Sure.

Ah: and sir, one more thing..

Manvi gets an amazing idea how to get away with this situation. She thanks God.

Manvi whispers: Woh virat, meine life partner hi kaha tha, i just didnt want you to know that i like you. Ok, this is the truth. I have completed my task.

Manvi thinks: Yay! Kaam ho gaya, thank you so much bhagwan ji, kitna acha idea diya aapne, Thank You so much...  abh dekhte hai virat ki tum kya karte ho..

Ah: Sir please order quickly, our lunch service is going to close in 30 minutes.

Virat: Ok, Thank You, just give us a minute.

The air hostess leaves. Virat turns to manvi.

Virat: toh manvi sach batao..

Manvi laughs..

Virat: arrey has kyu rahi ho, abh yeh koi nayi tareeka hai kya mujhe avoid karne ka?

M: Nahi.. woh.. actually...partner, jab tum uss air hostess se baat kar rahe the na, tab mene sach bol diya tha.. whisper mein bola tha, lekin bola toh tha..

Virat's mouth fell open.

Virat: Thats cheating partner!

M: Thats not cheating! Tumne apne question mein yeh toh nahi kaha ki zor se bolna hai, ya fir whisper mein, naahi yeh kaha ki jab mein bol rahi hoon, tumhe meri taraf face karna parega..

Virat: Matlab tumne..

M: matlab, jab tum air hostess se baat kar rahe the, toh meine sach whisper kar diya tha! Problem sirf yeh thi, ki tumne nahi suna uss waqt kyuki tum baat kar rahe the..

Virat remains silent.

M: aur wese tumhe mujhse thank you kehna chahiye.

Virat: MEIN? TUMHE? THANK YOU? BOLUNGA? KISLIYE? Mujhe trick karne ke liye?

M: nahi, kyuki meine tumhare aur tumhari pyaari claire ke beech mein dakalandaazi nahi ki, aur tum dono ko akele baat karne ka mauka diya..

Virat: ha ha ha... very funny! (he was sarcastic)

Virat thinks: yeh mauka bhi haath se gaya, abh mein kya karunga! This manvi is too smart!

Manvi thinks: Dekha Virat! Uloo bana diya na tumhe! Mujhe challenge karna is not so easy! Im too smart! Good job, MANVI CHOUDHARY.

She thaps her back lightly.

Virat: sirf ek challenge hi toh jeeta hai, itna... hawa mein kyu urr rahi hoo?

M: tum nahi samjho ge partner..

After sometime, when he finally got out of his depressed mood (losing a good chance for making manvi confess her love) he remembered what the air hostess had said.

Virat: acha, tumhe bhook lag rahi hai? Humein 30 minutes ke pehle order karna parega nahi toh...

M: Nahi toh 2 and a half hours aur bhooka rehna parega...

Virat: actually nahi rehna parega, tumhare paas khana hai... bhool gayi kya? Apna bag poora bhar ke laayi thi...

M: Bhooli nahi hoon, inn security waalo ne mera sara khana le liya, yeh bol ke ki flight mein khana milega aur bahar ka khana le jaana allowed nahi hai... mere paas sirf wohi thoda khana hai jo humnein airport pe extras samajh ke liya tha... pata nahi security ko kese pata chalta hai ki yeh wala ghar ka khana hai aur yeh airport se liya gaya hai! Kitna ajeeb hai na?

Virat: kuch ajeeb nahi hai! Haan, tumhare brain ke siwa... stupid, airport ke samaan ke peeche ek 'airport meal' ka stamp laga hota hai, jisse security ko pata chalta hai! Aur wese bhi, woh khana bhi kaafi hai! Im sure tumhari appetite ITNI bhi bari nahi hai, ki tum sara kha logi aur tumhe fir bhi bhook lagega.. 

M: MEIN STUPID NAHI HOON! TUM YAHA SE HAZAR BAAR TRAVEL KIYE HO ISLIYE TUMHE SAARE RULES PATA HAI! ABH ZYADA NAKHRE MAT DIKHAO, SAMJHE!... (after calming down a little) aur  mere liye toh woh khana kaafi hai, magar mere bagal mein itna bara bhukad betha hai, ki mujhe lag raha hai ki tum hi sara khana kha jaoge!

Virat: oh, sunoo... mein itna bhi bara bhukadd nahi hoon, samjhi! Aur...

Just then Viren got up from his seat and walked to VirMans seat.

Virat: arrey bhai, aap bhabhi ko chodke yaha?

M: Di bohot bore kar rahi hai kya?

Viren: Nahi nahi, aisa kuch nahi hai! Mein sirf yeh dekhne aaya hoon ki tum dono ne khana khaya ki nahi? Service thodi hi der mein bandh ho jayegi..

Virat: Nahi Bhai, woh...actually..

Viren: Actually tum dono jhagra karne mein itne busy the ki khane ke baare mein bhool gaye!

Manvi and virat are surprised to hear viren guess so accurately.

M: Haan, jeeju, woh, yeh Virat na! Usse jhagarne ke siwa kuch aata hi nahi hai! Aap toh isse jante hi ho! Bachpan se reh rahe ho! Ek baat bataiye, aap isse sehte kese ho?

Viren: arr...

Virat: MEIN jhagar raha tha? MEIN? Bhai, aap manvi ko kitni achi tarah se jante ho na! Bilkul jhagraalu hai, adjust karna toh isne seekha hi nahi hai! Aap toh jante hi ho JAHA MANVI WAHA PROBLEM! Sach sach bolo, tumne jhagra challoo kiya tha!

Viren: sun..

M: pehle stupid kisne kaha?

Virat: bhukkad kisne kaha?

Viren: ab...

M: woh toh meine tumhari wajah se kaha tha..

Virat: right right! Stories banane ki speed toh dekho?

M: mein story nahi bana rahi!

Virat: bana rahi ho.. sab tumhari...

M: tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko?

THEY BOTH WERE SPEAKING TOGETHER AND THEIR WORDS WERE OVERLAPPING! IT WAS A BIG CONFUSION, NO ONE COULD MAKE OUT ANYTHING, BOTH OF THEM WERE SPEAKING ON THEIR FASTEST SPEED. VIREN JUST LOOKED FROM ONE TO ANOTHER HELPLESSLY AND TRIED TO SAY SOMETHING, BUT INFRONT OF VIRAT AND MANVI, HOW COULD HE GET A CHANCE TO SPEAK AT ALL?!

At last viren got annoyed of all the noise and confusion.

Viren: SHUT UPP!!!! BOTH OF YOU, JUST SHUT UP!

VirMan together:-

Virat: Par bhai..

M: Par jeeju..

Viren: (he looks from manvi to virat)JUST... SHUT... UP!

VirMan (together): Par..

Viren: Shhh... kuch nahi bologe tum dono abh.. chup chap betho aur khana order karlo! Mein ja raha hoon... tum logo ke saath mein pagal ho jaunga...

Saying this Viren leaves.

Virat: acha yeh sab chodo partner...

M: hmm... acha, suno, mujhe raat ko bohot bhook lagti hai..toh...

Virat (in his tone): toh? Isme mein kya kar sakhta hoon? Roz raat ko 1 baje ka alarm laga ke tumhe khana khilane aau kya?

M: Nahi yaar partner, poori baat toh suna karo..

Virat: woh kya hai na partner, agar mein tumhe poori baat karne dunga, toh tumhari baat kabhi khatam hi nahi hogi! Tum bas bolte jaogi, bolte jaogi, bolte jaogi... isliye tumhari baato par full stop lagane ke liye, mujhe baar baar interrupt karna parta hai!

Manvi glared at him. Virat sensed trouble and quickly gave in.

Virat: Mazaak kar raha hoon yaar! Itni serious kyu ho jaati ho? Acha bolo, kya bol rahi thi?

M: Mein keh rahi thi ki mujhe raat ko bohot bhook lagta hai toh..woh kya hai na, agar har roz raat ko mein room service call karoongi toh weird hoga na.. aur plus, mein akele neeche bhi nahi ja sakhti and im sure ki aadhi raat ko koi bhi apna neend kharab karke mere saath khana khane nahi jana chahega... toh mein soch rahi thi ki..

Virat: ki humne jo khana airport pe khareeda tha, woh tum raat ko kha sakhti ho aur abhi hum kuch aur order kar sakhte hai?

Manvi was shocked.

M: BILKUL YAHI!

Virat: dekha, sachi ka partner hoon na tumhara..

M: Koi shaq!

Virat (in teasing mood): dekha partner! Bola tha na ki agar tumhe apni baat complete karne doonga toh tum bolte hi jaogi, kabhi rukogi hi nahi! Is liye mein tumhe tok deta hoon, warna continuous manvi choudhary ka radio sunna parega aur bhala mein apne kaano ko itna torture sehene kese de sakhta hoon? itna simple cheez tum itna ghuma fira ke kehti ho na, ki ek cheez bolne mein hi tumhe barso lag jate hai!

M: abh kya karoo partner! Sirf yeh hi toh ek kaam hai jo mein ache se kar sakhti hoon ' bolna... abh yeh toh dhang se karne do!

Virat laughs.

Virat: acha yeh sabh chodo... tumhe bhook lag rahi hai kya? 

M: Haan!!! BOHOT!

Virat: yeh lo menu card aur bolo kya khana hai (he hands her the menu)

Manvi looks at the menu.

M: Partner... mujhe pasta khana hai.. aur ek burger bhi..

Virat: i'll share pasta, aur mein ek sandwich mangaunga..

M: ok... toh mere liye 1 cheese and cabbage burger aur 1 all arrabiata... tum kya khaoge?

Virat: mein cucumber aur tomato sandwich khaunga..

M: kya partner? Fir se woh same, old sandwich? Kuch naya try karo na..

Virat: no.. thank you, i'll stick to the same one.. woh kya hai na mera taste bohot particular hai...

M: jo bhi..toh chalo order kar do..

Virat: aur pasta?

M: meine kaha na 1 all arrabiata..

Virat: NAHII!!! I HATE RED SAUCE, ARRAIBIATA IS ALWAYS RED! NOWAY, WHITE SAUCE PLEASE!

M: CHEE! WHITE SAUCE? BILKUL NAHI!! KITNA GANDA TASTE HAI TUMHARA PARTNER!

Virat: WHITE SAUCE!

M: RED! Kabhi toh adjust karo na partner please..

Virat: nahi, WHITE SAUCE!

M: RED SAUCE!

Virat: WHITE

M: RED

Virat: WHITE

M: RED!

VirMan (together): MIXED SAUCE!

They pause for 2 seconds and start laughing.

M: wese partner, tumne toh kaha tha ki flight mein desi khana nahi milega.. yaha toh sabh milta hai...

Virat: desi se mera matlab 'toru, bhindi, lauki' inn sabh se tha.. pasta, pizza se nahi..

M: woh toh mujhe bhi pata tha, ki yaha par hare sabzi nahi milegi.. kya partner, pehle specify karna tha na, mein ghar se hi decide karke aati ki mujhe kya kya order karna hai! But anyways its ok!

Virat: meri galti nahi thi... aur wese bhi..

Just then claire comes.

Ah: Excuse me sir, madam, did you'll decide what you'll would like to have?

M: yes!

Virat: we want 1 cheese and cabbage burger, 1 cucumber and tomato sandwich and 1 pasta with mixed sauce.

Ah: sorry sir, we dont serve mixed sauce.

After thinking for a moment Virat said:-

Virat: ok,  just make it 1 all arrabiata..

Ah: Ok, Thank You!

She left. Manvi was shocked to see virat change his choice because of her. She felt very happy that virat took care of her wishes (in her heart). But she didnt want to show it to virat.

Virat: khush?

M: kya khush? Esaan kar rahe the kya?

Virat: arrey! Tumhara kuch nahi ho sakhta, tumhare man ka karo toh problem na karo toh problem.. chalo ek kaam karta hoon, order change karke white sauce pasta hi manga leta hoon..

M: NAHI! NAHI! Theek hai.. thank you!

She smiles.

Virat: better!

He smiles too.

Meanwhile Virika:-

Viren comes back after visiting VirMan.

J: Kya hua viren ji? Aap itne pareshaan kyu lag rahe hai? Sabh theek hai na? Virat aur manvi ne kuch khaya ya nahi? Aap kuch bol kyu nahi rahe hai?

Viren: Jeevika, jeevika, jeevika, relax.. tum bolne ka mauka dogi tabhi toh bolunga na.. woh dono abhi order kar rahe hai aur mein isliye pareshaan lag raha hoon, kyuki abhi abhi unki jhagra sun ke aa raha hoon..aur tum toh janti hi ho ki jo unke jhagre mein parta hai, uska kya haal hota hai... abh aap fikar karna bandh kijiye!

J: Yeh dono bilkul pagal ki tarah larte rehte hai! Inka kuch nahi ho sakhta!

Viren (in romantic mood): acha abh unki baate choro aur...

J: aur?

Viren (coming closer to her): aur, tumhe nahi pata?

Jeevika sort of understood what his intention was, so she looked down and shook her head slightly.

Viren: toh mujhe samjhana parega...

He comes more close to her but Viren's luck was really bad that day! To ruin just the perfect moment for VirIka, Emily comes.

Ah: Excuse me sir...

Viren jerked back and looked at her.

Viren: Yes?

Ah: sir, there is a booklet in front of your seat. Its the Singapore Airlines Travel Purchase. You can have a look and select anything of your choice. Please do go through it and let me know if you would like to buy something.

Viren: Sure.

Ah: Thank You!

The air hostess left. Viren was muttering under his breath. Jeevika laughed.

J: aap kya bol rahe hai?

Viren decided to forget his anger and be romantic again.

Viren: yahi ki hum jo kar rahe the abh hum woh wapas resume kar sakhte hai..

Jeevika understood his mood and thought: abhi toh uss air hostess ne mujhe bacha liya, magar woh har baar thodi na aayegi.. mujhe hi kuch karna hoga...agar koi aa gaya na, jeevika, toh soch usse kya lagega, especially swamini bua ya fir dadaji... Nahi... abhi nahi..

J: nahi, hum continue nahi kar sakhte..

Viren thought she was thinking of some excuse to get away from him.

Viren: Kyu? Abh kya bahana banaogi?

J: Woh...woh...

Viren: wohh...wohh...kya?

Jeevika was silent. After a moment:-

Viren: relax karo jeevika, mein janta hoon kya baat hai, tumhe yahi fikar hai na, ki kahi koi dekh na le?

Jeevika looked up at him with a relief in her eyes and she was wondering how he came to know.

Viren: mujhe isliye pata hai, kyuki mein bhi janta hoon ki kya hoga agar abhi dadaji aa jayenge toh... mein sirf tumhe chedne ke liye acting kar raha tha.

Jeevika heaved a sigh of relief.

J: mujhe toh laga tha ki...

Voice 1: ladies and gentlemen, we have covered more than half of the journey with 2 hours to go, for landing. Right now, we are flying over Malaysia. We hope you're enjoying your journey. Thank You.

Viren: toh, tum kya keh rahi thi?

J: woh.. kuch bhi nahi...

After sometime:-

Viren: acha jeevika, yaad hai, trip ke pehle tumne kaha tha ki tumhari ghari toot gayi hai?

J: haan...woh, viren ji, pichle hafte, manvi mere watch ke saath uchal kood kar rahi thi, aur uske haath se slip hoke gir gayi... mein aapko batana bhool gayi thi, fir jab aaj subah mein ghari dhoond rahi thi, toh dhyan aaya ki woh toh toot gaya, toh meine aapko bata diya... sorry...

Viren: koi baat nahi jeevika, sorry kis baat ki? Ek kaam karo, yeh lo (he hands he the purchase booklet of the flight), isme watches bhi hai, tum isse apni man pasand design select karlo aur khareedlo... agar tumhe kuch bhi aur pasand aaya toh tum woh bhi le lena..

She smiles.

J: theek hai...

Viren: tum dekho, mein baki sabse milke aata hoon... woh kya hai na, badi maa, dadaji, aur maa, kabhi itni lambi duration ke flights mein nahi bethte, unhe kabhi itni door, jana hi nahi parta na, saara kaam India mein hi ho jata hai, isliye, mein dekhna chahata hoon ki unhe kuch chahiye ya nahi...a..

J: haan haan, viren ji... aap jaake dekh lijiye, aap sahi keh rahe hai, ho sakhta hai unhe kissi cheez ki zarurat ho, aap unse milke aa jaiye..

Viren smiles and goes away. Jeevika flips through the booklet.

1st page: Purses of all different brands and colours.

Jeevika thinks: Yeh sabh toh mere liye nahi hai, mein toh purses use bhi nahi karti...

2nd Page: Dresses, skirts, and other fashionable tops.

Jeevika thinks: bilkul mere kaam ka nahi hai, itne chote kapre pata nahi log kese pehen lete hai!

3rd Page: Jewellery.

Jeevika thinks: mujhe toh abhi hi apni shaadi mein itni saari jewellery mili hai, aur yeh sabh itne bhaari hai, mujhse toh pehna bhi nahi jayega...

4th Page: food items and snacks.

Jeevika thinks: Yeh toh Manvi aur virat ka section hai...

5th Page: Shoes (flats and heels).

Jeevika thinks: log aise heels kese pehen sakhte hai? Aur yeh flats bhi itne partyish hai! Nothing simple.

The next few pages were for men with belts, ties,etc. She thought whether she should buy one for Viren but she thought it better for him to come and select as she didn't have any idea about the good companies and brands of belts and ties... Jeevika kept flipping pages when she finally saw watches. There were 2 pages full of them with their pictures and prices written below.

Just the Viren came back and stood behind Jeevika, for a moment he thought of scaring her, but he thought to wait a while till Jeevika finishes her selection.

Viren thinks: Mujhe exactly pata hai ki tumhe konsa pasand aayega, jeevika, the most simplest one, with a steel belt, and a small dial. Light colour ka bhi hai! Jeevika ko dark colours ke watches bilkul pasand nahi hai! Im sure ki yahi ghari tumhari choice hai...

J (to herself but aloud): Yeh wala! (her finger goes to the picture of the watch which Viren had guessed). Mere liye perfect hai, steel belt and a small dial! No dark colour! Mein viren ji, se pooch ke yahi w...

Suddenly she stopped. Her finger went below, to the price:

Rs: 50,000
PURE STEEL.
Warranty: 5 years.

Jeevika shut the booklet and put it back on the front seat.

J (to herself but aloud): Koi faida nahi hai, ghari mere type ki hai par iska price bohot high hai, ek ghari ke liye 50,000 kuch zyada hi hai..mein toh isse khareedne ka soch bhi nahi sakhti... Viren ji itna mehnet se kamate hai aur mein agar aise hi...Choro jeevika, chandigarh wapas jake le lena... shayad foreign prices aise hi high hote hai..

Viren was shocked. He didn't know how to react. In his heart, he was really sad that Jeevika doesn't want to spend on herself  and she thinks that she is wasting Viren's money. He didn't move for a few minutes, thinking about what to do. He knew that Jeevika wouldn't buy the watch, even if Viren forces her to. But he knew that she really liked it...

Viren came from behind.

J: arrey, viren ji, aap aa gaye, buaji aur dadaji aur baaki sabh ko koi problem nahi hui na?

Viren thought of a plan so that jeevika doesn't feel suspicious. (about what he was going to do now).

Viren: haan, woh actually... bari maa ka booklet kho gaya hai, unhe apne liye earrings dekhni hai, toh agar tumne dekh liya hai toh kya mein unhe dikha do?

J: haan haan, bilkul... lijiye... (she hands him the booklet)

Viren: tumhe kuch pasand nahi aaya kya?

J: nahi viren ji, koi simple wala nahi tha. Sabh diamonds aur silver ke saath tha, aur aap toh jante hi ho ki mujhe simple watches hi pasand hai..

Jeevika lied to viren purposely, because she knew that if viren would come to know that she liked a watch and didn't buy it because of the price, he would feel really bad.

Viren: acha, koi baat nahi, hum singapore mein hi kuch dekh lenge.

Jeevika just smiled. She was feeling guilty for lying to Viren, but she knew that she had to.

Viren: mein bas 2 minute mein badi maa ko yeh de ke aata hoon...

J: Ji...

Viren went away.

Viren: jeevika ne mujhse jhoot bola... par mein samajh sakhta hoon kyu, and im sure ki woh abhi bohot guilty feel kar rahi hogi... its ok, uski koi galti nahi hai...

Viren went to the air hostess instead of going to his badi maa. (the badi maa excuse was just a way to go the air hostess, cause if he said that he was going to meet the air hostess, then Jeevika would feel really suspicious).

Ah: How may i help you sir?

Viren: actually, i wanted to buy a watch...

Ah: yes, sure sir, please tell me which one?

Viren opened the page and showed it to Claire.

Ah: Just a second sir..

Claire went inside a room and came back with a box in her hand.

Ah: here, sir, Rs: 50,000?

Viren took out a checkbook from his blazer pocket and gave her the sum.

Ah: Thank You sir...

Viren nodded and kept the box in his pocket. He went back to his seat and sat down.

J: Toh, buaji ko kuch pasand aaya?

Viren: haan, unhone red colour ke earrings khareede..

Jeevika smiled. She knew that viren was upto something.

Jeevika thinks: zarur viren ji mujhse kuch chupa rahe hai.. mein yeh achi tarah se janti hoon ki buaji ko lal rang bilkul pasand nahi hai, viren ji mujhse jhoot kyu bolenge? Zarur yeh koi bahana hai...Kuch to baat hai...

Viren thinks: i hope jeevika ko pata na chale ki mein usse jhoot bol raha hoon... kal mein usse yeh watch de doonga..

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So Thats it guys. I hope you'll enjoyed it..Sorry for the late update!

Do comment and press the like button. Will be waiting for your response.

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