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Arshi FF: THE VALLEY OF LOVE- update at page 76 (Page 5)

meniranjana00 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:13am | IP Logged

Chapter 4


At dinning table

Everybody was present over there. They were sitting and having their food. While Amar was almost finished his food and ready to leave, his mother none other than Arnav's sweet dadi set her all mood to tease his grandson. Our poor Arnav was just finished his current roti and waiting for more to serve him by his lovely mother. He was a foodie person. He love to eat. Shusheela was just waking out from the kitchen with more hot roties for her hungry son.

Arnav- " o...maa..make it fast please..."(while placing something in mouth and looking towards his mother with a pleasing smile)

Dadi- " oho! My Hungry young men..! is your stomach a well or something else???? How much are you eating????" (making a funny face to tease her grandson)

Arnav- " dadi... don't ever try to tease me ...ok???" (making a knowing face to his dadi)

Dadi- " teasing ??? Me..??? and you ???.. not at all...(in serious + funny tone) i am just telling the fact only.. that you are eating too much.. and  while eating like ..."

Dadi was not allowed to finish her sentence by a protesting shusheela.

Shusheela-" maaji... why are you always up to his food..."

Arnav-" ya...absolutely..."

Dadi-" see wife, Amar..! she is the one..who pampers him alot.. (While glaring towards her bahu) you are the one who make him eat this much...don't worry Shusheela.. soon your son become  FATTY..."

Shusheela was just ready to defeat her mother-in-law, but was shocked by her next wordings.

Dadi-"and then...don't ever come beside me to ask help to find a good girl for him... "

Hearing his dadi's comment and his mother worried expression Arnav was coughed and having a small sip of water he stated.

Arnav-"oho..dadi...don't boil your precious brain over my weight... Thank God! That he has given me such a good health condition that I can eat whatever I want and don't be get you see.." (placing a winning smile on his face)

Shusheela was convinced by his smart reply. By caring his hair ,she put one more roti to her son's plate. Arnav smile at his mother action and thanked her by his eyes. But noticing his dadi he at once said..

Arnav-" and... of course  who's grandson am I ????"

By that comment Yashodara was convinced and overwhelmed.

As the discussion continued on their dinning table. Amar put a new topic of house warming of their house. As there are new to this colony they decided to throw a party for all.

Arnav-" party is on we have to move for inviting all as soon as possible ..what you say dad??"

Amar-"yes... you are absolutely right my dear..we should start by today itself.. what you say maa??"

Dadi-" guys go on inviting all... I would like to have some peace over here as I am not feeling roaming around..."

Amar-" ok maa you wish.. so Sheelu, me and Arnie will go ahead in evening.."

By this they had their conversation about party and arrangements too.

Precap: Arnav at Ramida...speechless .Smile


plzzz dont ever forget to leave comments and do hit likeSmile

Edited by meniranjana00 - 09 May 2012 at 6:20am

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Angel13 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Great one thanks for pm

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Harman_RRS Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Beautiful story.Plz pm me nxt updates. M snding u buddy rqust plz confirm it. N cmbination of pics wid stry is jst amazing. So much Hardwrk na!!???

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Nice update.thnx for the pm

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megharaj Newbie

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 6:00am | IP Logged
nice chapter...continue soon...Big smile

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tinsel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Interesting update.Clap Curious to know what happens next...

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. Nice update. Cute.

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mee_sana00 Newbie

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
here arnav is just similar too barun...
and dadi is too good at teasing...
loved it really cool update looking forward

Edited by mee_sana00 - 20 April 2012 at 4:41am

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