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NEW FF: Mystic Skies Blog Link Update PG1 (Page 51)

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
lovvved the way you penned down the Arnav-Khushi scene at his house! n the angry Khushi pacing up n down n blabbering away Smile
waitng to read more Smile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Unrest and bewilderment but still at ease
A lil gruesome with the blood and shooting pain but the control of emotions amazes me
they don't want to show what they actually feel.
Panicking and maintaining a straight face Shocked 

I like where this story is headed
Thanks for the PM and the post.

Love
Gitika.

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
once again this was an amazing update...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Ah! Arnav the rescuer LOL I'm soo glad you didn't make him catch her.
You know, Arnav on the show is angry, hurt, a little damaged. But i'be never really felt that he's dangerous, never been convinced about it. But this Arnav, it just feels scary, in a really good way Smile
Well done!!!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Love this FF Anne ... Read the last two parts in one go Big smile

Aakaash sounds like a complete moron and Arnav is mysterious (for lack of a better word) ... am sure there's more to him than repairing cars Big smile

Thanks for the PM Anne

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Wow...lovely storytelling and nice buildup. Characters are very

different from what they are in the serial but still some tiny thread of

similarity is there. Looking forward towards next part. Thanks!

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Wow! Such different circumstances? But yet similar characterization for both Arnav and khushi! 
I read all 3 chapters and prologue together, so am commenting on all 4. 
In the epi I thought you may show Akaash having some interest in khushi, was wondering what's happening there. And Payal seemed to be superficial, and the hint of both the things was very interesting. 
In chapter 1, the intro of Arnav was so well written! I could actually visualize each interaction between him and Khushi. I loved how Khushi, is so open and honest and mature. And how guarded Arnav is, a hint of things to come, may be a past hurt? 
Chapter 2: I was wondering about the animosity between Akaash and Arnav, as if they had some interactions before this one! Classic rich jerk and strong willed, poor but honest hero! I am curious though, about the seemingly mean natures of both Payal and Akaash. I know you would be writing more about them, just had to mention that I am really curious about them. 
Chapter 3: hot hot! Embarrassed
Waiting for more, the gutter part of me wanted more hot scenes, and the book lover part of me wanted more details about both Khushi and Arnav's lives and families. Sigh. I hope I am not coming across as demanding, I am just trying to put my thoughts and reactions out here. I love what you have written so far! 
Thanks for the PM! 


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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
I am so happy that u started another FF. I loved all the parts. This is so different but their personalities are still the same. This is the first FF I am reading in which Arnav Singh Raizada is not the great big rich business tycoon. I can't wait to read more of this.

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