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Rang_ Goldie

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tamanna1391

confession hope ye shart mu na create karde


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Rang_ Goldie

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simrancuty

wowww... vt a treaser yr... romantic1...
jaldi update de...
bt take rest 1sst..

stinnu picture abhi baki he mere dostLOLWink

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged

 4 PMing Me..Smile..
  ur updates r just ... n
just  dear.Big smile..
 4 ur
  updates...Big smile...
keep the  job up dear..Clap..
keep ing dear...Big smile
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
Note: sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics

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Rang_ Goldie

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 PART 12 


Maan : and for what ??


Geet (with baby face) : I shouted on u without ur fault so….


Maan(st.) : ye ladki bilkul pagal he



Maan : at 2'o clock u came here to say sorry ?

He said with question filled eyes


Geet : so what's the big deal in this , my father always says me that whenever you think that you must appologize the person whom you hurted , don't think about the damm world and reach to the person so I came here to say sorry


Maan : but I should say sorry to you for gifting u a dog ,


Geet : no it was not your fault , u did not know that I have a fobia of dogs , so it was my mistake


Maan : no it was my mistake that I didn't punch RV for once


Geet : no but I think u were right , we must stop ourselves for being violent


Maan : no u don't need to say sorry , I am sorry


Geet ( being little angry) : I said na sorry


Maan : no I am sorry


Geet : Ek baar meen kaha na , me sorry kahungi


Maan : no , u r not at fault , so I will not allow your sorry , samji tum ?


Geet : achha ji , to me bhi kyu chalaungi tumhari sorry ,


Maan : geettt


Geet : don't shout on me , chillana muje bhi aata he


Maan : achha to chillaona , mene kaah roka he !


Geet shouted on top of her lunges


Geet : AAA


Maan pressed his rough hand on her soft patals like  lips , Geet shivered with his touch

No doubts how many times she came close to maan and hugged him even both had slept in one bed , but today she is felling something new for him 
she felt he has some freezing gaze today ,she unknowingly  came  close to him

Their lips are inches away

Same as maan , he  didn't let blink his lashes , both are staring eachother with eual intensily


It was a brief eye-lock between them




Sudddenly their gazing brock with a loud knock on door


A man : maan , r u okay ?? hamne ek cheekh suni (we heard a scream)

Maan got frighten to hear care taker of his hostel ,who never allow a girl in hostel and if he caught any boy with a girl , he can be a devil itself

Maan immideatly start a TV and came out of the room and closed the door behind so a CT can't go inside

Maan : no sir wo actully I was watching tv so it's came out from it

sir :  itni raat ko ?

maan : ha vo sir I was preparing for my exams and then I felt boaring so I on the tv to relex a bit

CT smiles and said : good , I know u r a very hard working boy , keep reading

He left from their and maan took a relif breath and go inside

He saw geet has a smile on her lips

Maan see her with question filled eyes like asking why is she smiling ?

Geet : I never know u can lie also

Maan with baby face : it's the first time of my life that I told lie

Geet : I am sorry maan , meri vaje se tumhe …(for me you…)

Maan (cutting in) :ufff ! now stop this sorry yaar , u said that day na (in part 2)  "dosti me no sorry and no thank u " Remember ??

Geet : oh mera hi formula muj par ha !!

She smiled , maan smiled back

Maan : achha now go home , its too late

Geet : hmm , bye good night

She goes near maan and hugged him lightly , like two frnds hugging each other

Maan : good night , see you tomorrow

Geet was about to go when maan called her

Maan : geet , how will you go ?

Geet : jese aayi thi vese hi jaungi ,or kese ?

Maan : geet , u will fall down

Geet : relax champu , nothing will happen to me , chill ,

Maan made a funny angry face listening CHAMPU and geet laughed on his expression

Geet : achha maan , we will practice tomorrow of our dance , plz reach at my place at morning

Maan nodded in yes


She made her way to go back to home , she reached to her room

It was 4am when she reached home

She rested herself on bed and yawns

She was hell tired ,within a minute she dozed of

After some time she felt that someone is came in her room

Geet : who's that ??

A voice came : it's me JAAN , MAAN YOUR LOVE

Geet switch on the lights and she saw  maan

Geet : maan what are you doing here and what are you saying ?

Maan didn't utter a word but came toward her with a dangeours smirk , geet gulp hard seee him in such a devil avtar

If he came 1 step near her , geet started going 2 steps back , 
it's going on till geet hit the wall and then maan traped her between him and wall

He came more close to her , there was only one inch diffrance between their face ,

Maan : what are you thinking Ms handa , u can fall me on you huh ??

Geet : how did u know ?         it came out like a whishper

Maan : because u won the bet geet , I fall for u , I m in love geet , I m in love with u , 
I really love u geet , I don't know how , when , where … bt I know only that I love u , do u loves me geet?

Geet saw in his deep eyes , which always shows innocence but today it shows something else , yes it was showing love for her

A smile spreads on her lips , he tug his hand in his waist and bought her more close to him , a blush came on her cheeks , now there is no space between them

He said huskily : bolo na geet do u loves me ??

Geet nodded her head to yes yes

Geet : yes maan , I love u more then my life ,

Her eyes are showing undefinded love for him

He kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly , she hugged him back

He kissed on her neck and came on her lips and started brushing  his lips on her lips then he incressed the pressure of his lips , she open her mouth and he rolled his tongue , geet was pulling him more closer and their tongues are dancing with eachother , it was so passionate one

Both left eachother felling breathless and maan gave a forehead lock to her


Precap :

Maan : geet are you okay ? why are you breathing hevily ?



Same clothes ???????????



Are you out of ur mind , u fall in love with him in just 3 DAYS ??????????????


Pyar samay ka mohtaj nahi , pyar to kabhi bhi kahi bhi aur kisi se bhi ho sakta he ,


Sorry for lit short update bt I m not so well to type much , I know precap is confusing bt I ll update soon and onther jatka is waiting for u ;)Wink

Plz give ur likes and commnat ,Ouch

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maaniqra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
ohh its just amazinggg
vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
nice part..
geet having dream with maan..

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Tia-AFreeBird IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
omg frst i thgt its a drem may b bt its true omg
wah 3 din mai lv wahLOLLOLLOLLOL

lvd it...

Infinity. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 01 July 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
woww superb update
loved it

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