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ArHi OS Chalo naam soche! EngTranslation available (Page 10)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
LOL. I love Khushi. Damn. Imagine this, " Hi, I'm ASR, this is my kid Unbelievable."

Lame imagination I know..but still too funny...
:P

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Agree with appy_12, this was a totally awww moment! Romantic, comedic and lovely! Clap

Awww! Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

And I have a feeling we met in the YPNHK forum...sorry, dont remember your name but I am Rae. :)
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged
ROFLoh this was hilaaarious... i was in fits...so much in character...and wonderful writing... looking out for more Big smile

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Psychedelic

I was openly laughing by the end of the OS! It was super cute! I like the idea of Arhi cuddling (idea, because we have not really seen anything yet have we) and teasing each other! And the family too.. They are also gutter minded like most of us :P

I could totally imagine the confusion on Khushi's face when she says "Naam? Kiska naam?" Its something similar to the look she gives Arnav when they are on the recliner and he loses his voice. :D

And the final bit of teasing by Khushi! Like I said, I was in splits! Loved it! Thanks for the PM! :)

Oh! And about the plagiarism issue. You can definitely count on me to be alert for any further copying issues. Will do my bit as a reader! :) Dont worry Rae! :)

Ah...when the writer is gutterminded, it is but natural that her characters will be too. ;) :D

I am so glad it made you laugh! That was the objective! :D

Thank You so much for your comment and specially for the last bit! :)
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PixieFlame

Aww! <3

Lol!

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by ambishika

heyy it was really a nice oneee

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by multifaceted

hey this was adorable...it made me go all mushy..lol..loved it..thanks for the PM...n hope you keep on writing such beautiful pieces

Thank You! :)

Glad it made you feel so! :)
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Binny...

soo sweet.. had to get that out first.. LOLLOL

Loved it Rae.. Khushi was hilarious and adored ASR's What the.. really an adorable OS..!!

Thank You, Binny! :)

Glad you liked it! :)

And ASR's 'What The' is toh just adorable at any time any place! Lol! ;) :D

Originally posted by indy12

loved the ending LOL 

Lol! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by inspiringstars

Good one, very funny and romantic!

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneaky-aj

that was cute!!!

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by lilmzsunshine

awww Rae, it was beautifully endearing.

I love the loving relationship!   I liked the lines 'he trusted himself more often, he trusted her always' part ... so iconic given the way this show has been set up.

You've got great talent.

Great job!

-S

Thank You! :)

Someone noticed! Lol! That was there for a reason! :) 

And you are too kind with your words. Believe me when I say I am truly humbled. :)

Originally posted by farfar319

Cutee!!

Thank You! :)
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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashlove

aawww Day Dreaming

Lol! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by anumber1

Lol if Kushi found out some of the names Hollywood celebs gave their kids, she wouldn't think What The and Unbelievable were that strange. lol!


P.S. I really like your writing and I'll be on the lookout so no one steals it! I've got your back!

Hahahahahahaha! True that! Coco Raizada would be the tamest in the lot! ;) :D

Thank You sooo much, specially for the last bit! :)

Originally posted by tina_1234

cute os

Thank You! :)

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