--**Soulmate**--Kriyaansh n Swaron OS*Chap 1-11* - Page 13

Ardour.

@Ardour.

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

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Snigs, I luved chapter 4. It was awesome n thanks 4 d pmEdited by nikitajha - 12 years ago

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

luvd d rst of d 3rd chptr...

bht d couples r so cute...

krisha always mu reyam..poor reyam...

waitin fr d nxt updt...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

magnificent dee !!!!

i just luved ur update...😳

from the very starting-the flashback to the last-swaron zipper thingy...

hayeee it's just mindblowing !!!!😍

nd the way rey controls his anger ...is sooo

sweet !!!😳

very veryyy veryyy awesuuum blossom update !!!!⭐️

i olso lyked the heading of the chap !!!👏

very true...so continue sooon dee...😛

veryyy sooon nd PM me !!!😃

mwaaah !!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part...loved it very much

kriyansh fight in the flashback was awesome and in present the way rey tease her was very cute...loved it very much

swaron flashback was very sweet and in present swayam pulling her zipper 😳 awesome

loved it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

hey when u wiil update!!cant wait anymore!😭 update soon na baba!

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ekiholo
hey when u wiil update!!cant wait anymore!😭 update soon na baba!

Updated..scroll down on d 1st page..

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Awsm update 👏👏👏

wow kya flashback tha 😊

Kriya toh rey ko pura galat samajh baithi 😆 aur

swaron ne swayam ko buddhu bana diya. koi nayi baat nahi hai ye bhi 😆

thx for pm snigdha

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

meow the remaing part of the chapter was amazing...well i'll comment on the whole chapter again...its amazing...luved the flash back...kriya vomiting on rey yuckk bechare rey ki shirt n awww kriyansh sleeping together on the car...n the swaron part was amazing...swayam kissed sharon accidentally wow n dey also sleeping together awww...now cuming to the present its nyc...kriyansh ki cute si fight luved the way rey was scaring kriya dat he would tell everything to swayam n she's talking sweetly to rey awww...n swaron wala scene is tooo gud...swayam kitna bhola hai he believed that shiny is her nick name n den he pulling up her zipper wow...chalo im done wid my comment...ab eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010
meow the remaing part of the chapter was amazing...well i'll comment on the whole chapter again...its amazing...luved the flash back...kriya vomiting on rey yuckk bechare rey ki shirt n awww kriyansh sleeping together on the car...n the swaron part was amazing...swayam kissed sharon accidentally wow n dey also sleeping together awww...now cuming to the present its nyc...kriyansh ki cute si fight luved the way rey was scaring kriya dat he would tell everything to swayam n she's talking sweetly to rey awww...n swaron wala scene is tooo gud...swayam kitna bhola hai he believed that shiny is her nick name n den he pulling up her zipper wow...chalo im done wid my comment...ab eagerly waiting for the next part

Twinkle chalo dis is my record in history!!!U gav dis much long comment among all my 4 works for d first tym...👏!!!!N Im so happy!!!

Thnxxx...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Twinkle chalo dis is my record in history!!!U gav dis much long comment among all my 4 works for d first tym...👏!!!!N Im so happy!!!
Thnxxx...

yup true...aage se i'll try to give long comments on all ur ff's

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