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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow amazng updt
n wat dat cndisn ani.
Wel excited fr nxt part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was realy good..so finaly they approved of virman...waiting to read d next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
these three updates were awesome like truely amazing plz continue cant wait till next and thx for pm and do pm me again 
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww very nice part.. it was superb.. loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
aniii!!!!! ahahannn!! i love dis updateee gurll!! and dare u take tym to update d nxt parttt!! i want it soon!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Edited by runjhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww so awesume
pakka hum saath saath hai wala scene hai na
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Guys 😃
Thank you so much for the likes and comments.. 😊
Guys if you want PMs please add me to your buddy list.. Thanks!
I just finished writing part 36 so I thought I might as well Post it 😉
Hope you guys like it.. And please comment.. Don't forget the Comments motivate me to write
More 😆

Part 36:

Viren and Jeevika walk towards Virat, Manvi, Kadambari and Inder..
Manvi: Diii.. Jeejuuu when did you guys come? What did the doctor say? Everything okay?
Jeevika: Maaanuuu.. Everything is fine.. * grins*
Virat: Okay Chachu.. Do this experiment on Bhabhi now?
Jeevika: What experiment? * confused*
Kadambari: Haiye Ne Jeevika.. Your Chachu has found some interest in palm reading...
Viren: Wow Chachu.. * grins*
Inder: I'm new so my predictions are not always true.. But it's fun...
Kadambari: Inder You should read Jeevika's Hand and see how many kids they are going to have? * winks*
Jeevika looks away shyly..
Manvi: Oye Hooyeee...
Virat: Jokes apart.. Bhabhi please... Please...
Jeevika: Okay but I have a condition.. * smiles*
Virat: Condition? * confused*
Jeevika: Yes... I want all the guys to show their hands too... * looks at Viren*
Kadambari: Koi Baat Nahi.. Boys you will show your hands too..
Viren and Jeevika take a sit..
Manvi: Di... What a condition!
Viren raises his eye brows and Jeevika winks at him..
Inder: So let's begin... Jeevika we will start with you...
Jeevika: Okay...
Inder holds Jeevika's hand and starts to read her palm...
Kadambari: So exciting.. * grins*
Virat: Bhabhi... Can I ask question on your Behalf?
* smiles*
Jeevika: Sure Virat...
Virat: Chachu... Have you finished reading?
Inder: Virat.. Have patience.. I'm new in this job..
Manvi: Inder Chachu... Hurry up please.. Look at Jeejuu.. He is very eager to know... * winks*
Viren: Saali Saheba.. You are meant to be in my team..
* sad Face*
Manvi: Sorry Jeeju.. * hugs Viren from behind*
Inder: Okay.. Okay.. Virat ask your questions.. * smiles* Let me inform you all.. They don't always turn out to be true..
Virat: Koi Baat Nahi Chachu.. Well... First of all.. How many children?
Inder: Hmmm... according to the vertical lines.. They will have three children.. Out of which there will be twins too..
Everyone Grins..
Manvi: Haaaiye Twin..
Viren: Oh my God... * surprised*
Manvi: Don't worry Jeeju.. I'll look after them.. * pulls his Cheeks*
Virat: Can you tell the gender of them or is it not possible? * smiles*
Inder: You can.. The straight vertical line shows one boy.. From the twins It's sort off confusing but it seems like two girls..
Manvi: oh my god this is so cute! Chachu can you read my hand too..
Jeevika: Shetan.. Kuch toh sharam rakh..
Manvi: Diii...Jeeju Congratulation! * hugs Viren from behind*
Viren: Thank you Saali Shaheba.. Now who's going next?
Kadambari: Next one should be a guy then Manvi.. * grins*
Inder: Toh phir.. Virat.. You come..
Virat: Hmmm...
Jeevika: DevarJi.. No need to getShy.. * nudges him*
Virat look down and Smiles..
Virat: Okay.. But Chachu you can't find out about my children can you?
Inder: Of course I can.. * grins*
Viren: Really Chachu.. So if you read my hand.. It will also say three children..
Inder: Yes.. * smiles*
Manvi: Wow.. This is so fun..
Jeevika: Virat I'll ask questions for you then..
Virat: Sure Bhabhi...
Jeevika: Chachu.. Same questions that Virat asked..
Inder: Okay... Virat your Lines are more visible and Bold.. Makes my job easier.. Well...
Everyone looks at Inder.. Eager to know..
Inder: Two children.. One boy and one Girl..
Viren: Kya Baat hai.. Mere Bhai.. Waise I'm sure the same goes for Manvi then.. * winks*
Manvi: Jeejuuu.. * embarrassed*
Viren: Oye Hoye.. Waise Saali Shaheba.. It's your turn now..
Manvi: I don't want to do it now.. * embarrassed*
Viren: Stop being shy.. Come on..
Manvi: Okay.. But no one will make fun of me..
Viren: Dont worry.. If they do we'll beat them up.. * winks*
Inder reads Manvi's palm...
Inder: Wow.. Exactly like Virat's...One boy and one girl.. But..
Viren: But...
Inder: The lines show twins...
Viren: What.. Twins..!
Inder: See this line is together then separates into two lines.. One straight and one a bit curved.. So a boy and Girl..
Everyone is speechless..
Manvi: Okay.. No need to think about it so much.. This isn't always true... * smiles*
Kadambari: Twins.. Haaaiyeee ne.. It's so scary and exciting...
Virat: Now Bhai.. It's your turn..
Inder reads Viren's hand..
Inder: Same as Jeevika three Children.. And one boy and two twin girls..
Viren: Wow...
Manvi: Wow Di so right now you could be having twins..
Virat: I don't believe in this.. It's just for fun..
Viren: I know right..
Jeevika: I think whatever is going to happen will happen so it's better to stay in present * smiles*
Everyone smiles..
Vanshika: Kadambari.. Ramu kaka needs your help in the kitchen..
Kadambari: Aaye Didi.. * gets up and goes inside the house*
Inder's phone rings and he goes inside too..
Viren: Jeevika come on get up.. You have to take a walk..
* stands up and helps Jeevika to get up too*
Manvi: Jeeju can I go for a walk with Di?
Viren: Saali Saheba... You don't have to ask.. Go on..
Manvi and Jeevika Go for a walk around the garden..
Virat and Viren are sitting in the garden and chatting..

They all soon go inside for dinner...


Ani
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊yeahhh i m firsttt...it is great as always Ani and i m super happy that these days u  r very fast at doing updates...plz continue doing so...omg virika 3 children and virman 2 that too twins i can just say one thing i m loving it...the serial is going through a sad phase so reading ur ff is a complete refreshment...continue soon and thanks always for the pm
love 
Pankhur 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was soo sweet. maanvi getting embarassed! newayz thanks for the pm