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romanticgurl070 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome as always loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago



aww so cute and adorable
i wanna hug dhruvie so tightly :P
he is cute 
and the way viren woke jeevika up
could not help but imagine it
its amazing
romantic and cute
do update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
FIRSTLY HOW DARE YOU SAY YOU DON'T LIKE THIS UPDATE πŸ˜‘ YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO THINK OR FEEL THAT, BECAUSE THIS WAS MY FAVORITEST UPDATE OF ALLL β€οΈ

okay firstly, you're words before the update itself:
"I'll be only updating on the weekends so that should help.. Maybe πŸ˜‰ "

Yeah you definitely got me at that MAYBE!!! Seriously I cannot tell you how many times I have read this update of yours. You're probably tired of me telling you this, but seriously I LOVEEE this story from the bottome of my heart. I just recently switched to the i-phone and I downloaded this app where I save all your updates and Aaliya's updates (little.angel56) because seriously both of your guys's story is the closest ones to my heart! I read it anytime I go anywhere like I live and crave for both of your updates. So please please please give us more frequent updates, because this story is the BEST πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Now coming back to the update, I really mean it when I say it was my favorite. Firstly Dhruv is way to adorable and his conversation with Virat, omfg πŸ˜† πŸ€£. And the way Viren and Manvi were just laughing at Virat, gosh that was sooo funny! But for me I loved the Virika part, gosh you make Viren sound like the most perfect guy any girl would dream of. The way he holds her, the way he blocks the sun from coming in her eyes, the way he remembers her perfume to make her feel better, the way he explains to Dhruv how his two sibling are not bad, just EVERYTHING about him is too damn perfect! Like ughhh I really want a guy just like him who treats me the same way, and loves me the same way. Like I keep reading the Virika part over and over and over again and just fall in love with him even more. So pleaseee I beg you to please give us more frequent updates! I love your story oh so so so so MUCH β€οΈ
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
-Aaliya.KryAn- thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
it was really amazing!
dhruv is really cute and adorable 

loved the update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i swear i am in love with this FF!!
DHRUVIEEE!!!!!!! I LOVE HIM!!
i dont know why you dont like this part coz it rocked and i loved it!
anyway back to dhruv! He is THE most CUTEST boy i have ever seen (read)! god i wish virika have a kid like him soon!!!
 
CONTINUE SOON!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
totally love dhruv he should be in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laurenza.carson

Awwie... OMG...

Such a cute and adorable one...
My Dhruvie...he's so cute..
i wanna have him for a day or two... :D
So so adorable...
And

Yeayi yeayi yeai... i'm the first one to comment... woohooo...πŸ₯³
A big hug to you for such an awesome one...πŸ€—
Wowie... they care about Jeevika so much...
Loved it to the core...
Please cntinue soon n PM me...




Firstly congratulations πŸ˜‰ for being first one haha
You will have to ask Viren and Jeevika if you want to have Dhruv for a day or two haha
Thank you so much πŸ˜ƒ
A big hug back at you πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal_chohan

I swear dhruv is so adorable LOL @ his questions
Really cute and sweet update loved it please
Update more soon


Thank you Bubs πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy

Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow!
Seriously so well written! :)
I LOVE IT!!
<font size="4">From where in this world do you get the ideas to write so BRILLIANTLY?</font>
You always take we away with you're update :)
I am seriously use you're story for realeasing the stress I am having now-a-days because of my exams!!
You won't believe I read this entire story 4 times IN LAST 5 DAYS
It makes me forget everything...
So thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku for that :D
Now coming to the update...
Thanku thanku for such an adorable update! :)
Dhruvieee is SO ADORABLE :)
He is a good boy not a shame shame boy :*
I LOVE HIM! :)
N he is a mini calculator and and a mini einstien too...
Hahahahaha Is VIRAT CARRYING A BABY IN HIS STOMACH?
Like seriously gow could he be so adorable?
I live his from the core of my heart!!!!!!!
I loved the way you also described the caring side of Viren, the way he wakes Jeevika up and then helps her with the sickness! So caring update :*
<font size="4">Ani I LOVE YOU!! Please continue soon :)</font>



Awwwrrrh!
Thank you very much πŸ€—
I'm so happy you to hear that you read it so many times 😳
Thank you thank you again.
I love Dhruvie too πŸ˜ƒ he is adorable!
Awwwrh Charu I love you too ❀️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdollashita

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finally update is here n that too long one...thanks alot anika...πŸ€—πŸ€—
what to say about the update...
i want to ask you that how do you come up the ideas????
its really awesome that you write sooo marvellous story...
i'm in love with this story alottt...
</div><div>this update was spectacular as always...πŸ‘
dhruv is sooo adorable n he is the heartbeat of this ff ...

dhruv questions are really very cute but difficult to answerπŸ˜†
love the way he asks jeevika about rishikesh's home n time she spent in chandigarh n starts his calculation...that was freaking adorable...πŸ˜†

i was laughing throughout the update...
viren slept on jeevika's shoulder n she kept her hand on his cheek☺️

dhruv is soo innocent ...he told viren that he'll make them good babies that was soo outstanding n lovable...
woowww...he cares soo much about his mother..πŸ˜ƒ

best part was when dhruv came n sat on virat's lap n asked him if there is a baby in his stomach too that's making noise i was like🀣

every bond in this story is brilliantly portrayedπŸ‘
i just love this story to the ore n core of my heart...❀️❀️
you are a super talented writerπŸ‘πŸΌ
continue soon dear...
This story always bring a huge smile on my face... plzzz try to update soon...



Thank you thank you thank you very much πŸ˜ƒ
When I read your comment... I smiled a lot 😳
Thank you much for the compliments
I know... I Love Dhruv. I'll totally agree... He is the heartbeat of the FF.
Love πŸ€—