Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! - Page 54

Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome when you going to be updating? :)
Posted: 11 years ago
omg
u r really a cliffhanger yaar
kya time pe u have stopped
cont fast plaese yaar
hamare patience ka imtehaan mat lo
Posted: 11 years ago
"Viren: These two are lost cases.. " this dialogue in the previous update was hillarious and i loved both updates
OMG cirika told vadheras avout VirMan i have a feeling dadaji is guna go down and approve of VirMan's relationship infront of them
Continue soon and pm me when u update and the next update better be long
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Guys 😃
Thank you so much for the likes and Comments.. Means a lot! 😊
This update is long so Enjoy guys 😳
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I hope you guys like this update..


Part 35:


Manvi and Virat are sitting quietly when Dadaji enters the Main Hall.. Everyone else is behind him..
Dadaji: Viraaat... Manviii
They both look up and stand up immediately from their sofas and stand in their places life statues..
Dadaji: Come here..
Manvi and Virat both look at each other and walk towards Dadaji..
Everyone is quiet.. No one has the courage to say anything..
Dadaji: So relationship huh? * hands fonded*
Virat and Manvi are standing in front of Dadaji.. They both are looking down..
Dadaji: Why will this relationship work out?Tell me! * serious*
They both are too scared to utter a word..
Dadaji: Virat.. I didn't expect this from you..
Virat looks up at Dadaji...
Dadaji: I never ever though you would choose a girl like Manvi.. Whom we all love.. * smiles*
Manvi looks up too..
Dadaji: Yes beta.. I can't express how happy I am.. My whole family will be complete now..
Everyone is surprised at this reaction..
Dadaji: First the happiness of becoming Pardada.. Then you two together... Diwali celebration.. It's perfect..
Manvi and Virat smile..
Dadaji: Toh Manvi Beta.. Are you sure you want to marry this boy?
Manvi looks down shyly and nodes..
Everyone in the background cheers..
Viren: Oyeee Hoyeee..
Virat and Manvi both get embarrassed.
They both take blessing from
Dadaji, Vanshika and Swamini..
Dadaji: Okay then.. Im going to go and inform the Chaudhary family about this..God bless you two...
Swamini and Vanshika go along with Dadaji to talk to the Chaudhary family..
Manvi rushes to Hug Jeevika..
Jeevika: Maaanuuu * grins*
Manvi: Thank you Diii... Love you... * clings on Jeevika*
Virat hugs Viren..
Virat: Bhaiii Tusse toh top ho..
Viren smiles...
Virat: Seriously Bhai.. I was so scared...
Viren: I know... So happy for you.. My little Virat is big now.. * grins*
Virat just smiles...
Virat ( Thank you so much god! )
Manvi: Thank you Jeeju... * pushes Virat to Hug Viren*
Jeevika giggles...
Viren hugs Manvi..
Virat: Did you see that Bhabhi.. I have no importance now... * walks to Jeevika and Hugs her*
Jeevika: Dont worry DevarJi.. Now.. I will get revenge from my Devrani... * winks*
Virat and Jeevika Hi5 and laugh..
Viren: Dont worry Saali Saheba.. I'm with you..
Manvi: Thank you Jeeju.. Di is just a traitor.. * winks*
Jeevika: Anyways... I'm just really happy for you two..
* grins*

They all sit in the main hall and chat and tease each other...
Viren: Jeevika we have to go at 5 o'clock.. Don't forget..
Jeevika: Oh yes...
Virat: Where are you guys going?
Viren: Doctor Madhu's clinic to do some test..
Virat: Oooh... * smiles*
Manvi: Sounds like fun.. * smiles*
Viren: Saali Saheba it's not fun.. When you have to do blood test * winks*
Manvi: Blood Test? * gulps* it's not fun then...
Everyone smiles at Manvi...

Kadambari: Haaaiyeee ne Virat aur Manvi... * walking towards the Main hall*
Everyone looks at the door and see Kadambari coming inside..
Kadambari: Oh my God! Virat Tusse itne Bade ho Gaye..
* hugs Virat*
Everyone grins..
Kadambari: Haaaiye ne I'm so excited.. Manvi.. Haaaiyeee.. * hugs Manvi*
Kadambari: Bauji is still talking to Beeji and I think everything is going well.. * grins*
Viren: Wow.. Chachi.. Please give us more news.. What's Happening upstairs?
Kadambari: Bauji is smiling so happy news.. I'm so ready to dance in the Baraat.. * grins*
Virat and Manvi are sitting on the sofa shyly..
Jeevika: Chachi.. This time im going to dance too..
* excited*
Viren: We will see about that.. * folds his hands*
Kadambari: Haaaiyeee ne.. I'm so excited... Oh lunch in half an hour.. * smiles* I'm going to the kitchen now..
Everyone smiles...

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Around 1 pm

The Dining Room

Dadaji: Well.. We spoke to Beeji and She was surprised.. When they come for the Diwali celebration in few days We all will get a better picture but right now it's okay.
Everyone smiles...

Everyone finishes Lunch...

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Around 5.00pm

Dr Madhu's Clinic

Jeevika and Viren are waiting in the waiting room..
Jeevika lays her head on Viren's shoulder..
Viren: Tired? * holds Jeevika's hand*
Jeevika: I'm fine.. Just really happy..
Viren: I know everyone is.. * grins*

The lady: Mr and Mrs Vadhera.. Please go inside..
* smiles*
Viren and Jeevika go inside the room..
Dr Madhu: Hello Jeevika and Viren..
Jeevika: Hello Dr Madhu.. * smiles*
Viren: Hello Dr Madhu..
Dr Madhu: Please take a sit.. Okay then... Jeevika I'll just do a general check up first so please lay down on the bed there...
Jeevika smiles and gets up and lays on the Bed...
Dr Madhu: Take deep breaths.. * takes her stethoscope out*
Jeevika smiles...
Dr Madhu: Everything seems fine..
Jeevika goes back and takes a sit next to Viren.
Viren: Dr Madhu won't you do the blood test and other tests today?
Dr Madhu: Not yet Viren.. The 13th week of Jeevika's pregnancy is when we will do all these tests and your first scan too..
Jeevika: First scan... That's wonderful.. Thank you so much!
Viren: Thank you Dr Madhu..
Dr Madhu: I'll inform you guys about the next appointment till then Jeevika eat what you eat normally and walk in the evening to get some exercise..
Jeevika: Sure Doctor.. We'll take a leave now..
Dr Madhu: Alright then.. Take care... Bye..
Viren and Jeevika: Bye Doctor Madhu..
Viren and Jeevika both leave the clinic to go back home..
They ring the bell..Vanshika Opens the door...
Vanshika: How was it? Everything okay beta?
Jeevika: Jee Maa.. Dr Madhu said everything is good..
Vanshika: Thats good.. * smiles*
Viren: Where is everyone? * confused*
Vanshika: In the garden.. * smiles*
Viren, Jeevika and Vanshika walk towards the Garden..
Dadaji and Shlok are playing chess..
Swamini is on the phone..
Kadambari, Inder, Virat and Manvi are further away sitting on the grass and chatting..
Vanshika :Jeevika.. Your juice..
Jeevika: Thank you Maa.. * smiles*
Viren: Maa and me? * sad face*
Vanshika: Mera beta.. You will never grow up.. * hugs Viren*
No one notices them.. Except Swamini..
Swamini: Viren.. Jeevika... How was it? Everything okay?
Jeevika: Jee Bade Maa.. * smiles*
Swamini: Thats good..
Swamini: Vanshika I need your help with this..
Vanshika and Swamini start to Chat..
Jeevika goes behind Shlok and hugs him..
Shlok: Hi Bhabhi...
Dadaji: Oh I didn't see you guys.. Beta what did Dr Madhu say?
Jeevika: Dadaji everything is okay..
Dadaji: Acche Baat hai beta... * smiles*
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Viren and Jeevika walk towards Virat, Manvi, Kadambari and Inder..
Manvi: Diii.. Jeejuuu when did you guys come? What did the doctor say? Everything okay?
Jeevika: Maaanuuu.. Everything is fine.. * grins*
Virat: Okay Chachu.. Do this experiment on Bhabhi now?
Jeevika: What experiment? * confused*
Kadambari: Haiye Ne Jeevika.. Your Chachu has found some interest in palm reading?
Viren: Wow Chachu.. * grins*
Inder: I'm new so my predictions are not always true.. But it's fun...
Kadambari: Inder You should read Jeevika's Hand and see how many kids they are going to have?
* winks*
Jeevika looks away shyly..
Manvi: Oye Hooyeee...
Virat: Jokes apart.. Bhabhi please... Please...
Jeevika: Okay but I have a condition.. * smiles*
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Ani
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww cute update o loved the dadaji-VirMan part i was right dadaji approves of their relationshipp awww so cute
Continue soon amd pm me when u update
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...pls cont soon
Posted: 11 years ago
l love story it so nice...keep up the good work
Posted: 11 years ago
Ani ji aap ko bohot maaza aate hain! ðŸ˜¡ do you have fun in torturing me with cliffhangers! ðŸ˜†
pleasee update sooon! your amazing! wonderfull update! AWESOME! FANTASTIC .. and it can carry on!

updatee sooonnn!!!!!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx for the longer update loved it please pm me when I continue
Posted: 11 years ago
I truly loved it please PM me when you continue

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