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Posted: 12 years ago
Jus read all the parts together...
Lol dewar bhabhi Vs saali jeeju...
Ab toh air bhi dhamaal hoga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now this is going to be fun ,naughty viren and naughty maanvi ,the combo is really explosive ,can't wait to see what they are gonna do.

loved it and thnx for the pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was so cute please PM me when you update
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Aww..dat was nice..update soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so cute..!
Its was funny update..
Can't wait for Devar Bhabi VS Jeeju Saali..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it dear... but  very short...
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wowww nyc part loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Lovely People 😊 Sorry guys Im not feeling very well so won't be able to PM you guys but I'm updating because I don't want to leave you guys eager 😉
Please forgive me for any writing errors.. Hope you like it 😊


Part 8


Around 9:30am
They all got up at the same time.. And march away...
Viren and Manvi head towards Viren's roon while Virat and Jeevika head towards Virat's room..

Viren and manvi in Viren's room...
Manvi: Jeeju yeh toh attaychar hai hum dono ke kilaf..
Viren: Exactly.. We have to do something to get them back... But Manvi...
Manvi: But... Please Nahi Jeeju... Don't get emotional... We have to get revenge..
Viren Looked lost...
Manvi: Come on Manvi you have to convince Jeeju ( mumbling) Jeejuuu... Come on... Show Di and chep what you are capable of... Be a Man!
Viren hearing this starts laughing..
Viren: Manviii seriously Be a man...
* laughs*
Manvi: Jeejuuu...
Viren: Okay okay.. Let's plan something... But we will do it in
Principles *winks*
Manvi: Jeeju... You are a saint... Thek hai.. That makes my job more hard then... Anyways Let's think... Hmm...

Virat and Jeevika in Virat's Room..

Virat had already decided what they were going to do..
Jeevika: No... no ways! I'm not doing this.. It not right... OMG what if...
Virat: Bhabhiii... It will be fun... Trust me..
Jeevika: Are you sure about this?* confused*
Virat: Please Bhabhi... Ab aap..
Jeevika: Virat yeh kuch zyada Nahi...
I mean I don't think I can do it... Too filmy and if someone finds out... Mein toh... * scared*
Virat: Bhabhiii... Stop being so scared...
Jeevika: Mein.. Yeh.. How? What if..? Nooo... Sorry I can't do it...
* scared*
Virat: Bhabhiii... pleaseee...you are truly a Sita from Ramayana
Jeevika: Virat stop teasing me... This is too hard and why do I have to do this.. You can do it..
Virat: Bhabhi... It will be More fun if you do and plus Viren Bhai will get scared and aapke Behna toh Shock mein.. * laughs*
Jeevika: Yes and if the people in the house find out.. Mein toh... * Bitting her nails because she is scared*
Virat: This plan will work... Trust me..
Jeevika: I mean... I don't know how...
Virat: Don't worry Bhabhi we have till night to practice it..
Jeevika: Till night...? * confused*
Virat: Obviously Bhabhi we can't do this plan right now.. We have to wait till night.. We will actually do it after Dinner when everyone is asleep * Cheeky smile*
Jeevika: * scared* hmmm...

Viren's Room...

Viren: I'm not doing this Manvii
Manvi: Jeeju yaar.. Aap mere 10 plan toh reject Kar chuke.. Now you plan I can't think of any plans...
Viren: Hmmm... I can't think... Mera fuze switch off ho Gaya hai...
Manvi: Fuze... OMG Jeeju... We can give Virat a Electric shock..
* excited and laughs*
Viren just nods and then realises what manvi said...
Viren: * Shocked* Manvi... Please sit down.. Take Deep breaths... Yaar Saali Ji Mujhe heart attack dena chahati ho kya..What are you saying.. Electric shock!! That's too much...
Manvi: I guess so Jeeju...
Viren: Guess... Manvi please Don't do anything like that...
Manvi: OMG what is wrong with me... My brain has gone nuts.. Sorry Jeeju.. That idea was a bit too much...
Viren: Too much... I can imagine why Jeevika gets worried when you say you have an idea.. * laughs*
Manvi: Jeejuuu...* pouts*
Viren just laughs...
Viren: Manviii what are we going to do...
Manvi: I dont know Jeeju but we will come up with something better than them... Afterall Jeeju aur Saali ki Shaan ka sawal hai * smiles*

Virat and Jeevika were planning and practicing their act... Jeevika was not looking forward to it but didn't have any choice but to do it...
On the other hand... Viren and Manvi came up with an idea but didn't want to do it... Too much drama.. They were still planning...
Viren: Saali Saheba Kuch sochna pade gaa...
Manvi: Hmmm... OMG Jeeju meri genius mind mein bohot he genius plan aya hai..
Viren: * scared* Kya..?
Manvi: Let's call Dabbu.. I'm sure he will help us..
Viren: Dabbuu..Yes Yes call him Jaldi .. Kya Baat hai Meri Saali...
Manvi: thank you Jeeju...

They call Dabbu...
Manvi: Dabbeee... Kaisa hai?
Dabbu: Didiii Mera naam Dabbu hai... Waise aaj meri Yaad kaise aye.. Aap toh mujhe bhool Gaye ho waha ja ke..
Manvi: Meri jaan Dabbu emotional maat ho.. Afterall tu toh meri teesri Behen hai naa
Viren just smiles.. ( Manvi you are just too cute and badmash)
Dabbu: Didiii..
Manvi: Dabbu now on a serious note... Listen...* narrates all about the bet between them*
Dabbu: Manvi Di yeh toh hard hai.. Mein kuch sochta hu..
Manvi: Soch Soch... Jaldi mere Bhai... Time ke kami hai...
Dabbu: Mein Virat Bhai ko phone karke poochu?
Manvi: Bandar.. The people you don't have to tell unse hi bole ga kya.. Dabbu please don't call Virat... Meri Baat sun...
Dabbu: Darbinder Singh Chaudhary Sab samjh gaya.. Hahahahaha
Manvi: Gabbar Singh hai kya... Bandar... Think quickly now... Jaldiii

Viren is just siting there patiently and smiling...( Manvi is truly full of life... Jeevika is very lucky to have such a caring sister)

Manvi: Vaah meri Bhai... Dabbu sun I'll call you back later... Now I'll tell the plan to Jeeju... Teek hai? Bye Bye...

Viren: kya kaha Dabbu ne?
Manvi: Dabbu ne kaha Viren Jeeju ko Maaro... Iss se..
Viren: What! Hit me... Manvi why are you experiment all this on me? Why not you...
Manvi: Jeeju... If I get hurt jeevika di will scold me a lot and Aap ka Bhai toh happy hoga... Lekin... If you get hurt Both of them will be worried and we will blame them for this... * smiles*
Viren: Saali Shaheba... You are too much... Kya idea hai... Dabbu tussi great ho...
Manvi: Afterall Bhai kiska hai...
* winks*
Viren: So how are we going to do it?
Manvi: Lets do it after dinner.. When everyone is asleep because you know if they come to know about this they will get worried...
Viren: good point... Let's practise
*excited* my acting skills are not good but practise will help...



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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg getting better and better plz continue looking forward to next part :)