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SS: LoveDrunk *Edited* Part 2 Page 2 (Page 2)

ABCDesiGirl93 Goldie

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
hmm maybe one more update and you guys will figure it out! lol

taniya_dostii IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
m damn sure its swaron.. haina?

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luv_arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
awesome start...loved it very much
and i think its about kriyansh
pm me when you will update

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avisheka Newbie

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
nilesh and simmiTongue

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yogini64 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Well,,, mujhe to kriyaansh ke alava kuch dikhta hi nhi hai,, so plz pm me Wink

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ABCDesiGirl93 Goldie

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged

Hey guys here's Part 2 to the SS

Hope you like it! 

Happy Reading! 


Part 2 


"Hey hey I was just asking if I lost my mind?!"

She was really mad now.

"Seriously Nil, I really thought you liked me back" She looked at him disappointedly.

"Simmi, your cool but I don't see you in that way though."

He looked at her, and saw her tired eyes;

She seem like she was about to release some tears, or so he thought [ LOL ]

"I mean I like you as a girl-friend, but not a "Girlfriend" though." 

"And to be quite frank, you don't seem to uhh "girlfriend material.""

He said, using his hands to show quotation marks around the word girlfriend, empathizing the word a tad bit.

"Oh. Never mind then," She said wiping her drop of tear that involuntarily released fro her eye after she yawned. 

"I thought after what happened last night, that you were willing to give us a chance" She said looking him straight in the eye.

"Oh well" She started to get up from the huge couch that they were sitting on from last night. 

She stood up straight, and started to fix her clothes and tried brushing her hair with her hands. 

He just sat there, surprised that she didn't cry or even asked him to why he didn't see her as girlfriend material.

Usually he knew her inside out, I mean with the "Dazzling Dance Team" History behind them, any body would.

But she was fine...actually fine.

This really bothered him. 

Especially cause he knew, well he thought he knew, thinking in his head, 

But her different, unexpected response was annoying him to he finally  asked her, "Uhm Simmi?"

"Yeah Nil what's up?"

"Doesn't it bother you that I said your not like girlfriend material?"

She pauses what she was doing, and says, "Actually. It really doesn't."

"Oh...ok" He responses hesitantly, unsure of what to do.

"I just thought it would, I mean I know you've kinda like me ever since we first met and all. So I just thought..."

"Oh Nil, I'm so over that." She said interrupting his worried explanation.

"I mean no offense, but I'm kinda moving on now."

"To tell you the truth though, I was kinda worried that you were giving "us" a chance, especially since I have decided to move on." She said moving her hand around. 

At a lost of word, and an awkward silence, they both stared at the floor, the wall, the ceiling, everything and anywhere besides each other. [LOL..this happens n real life too...too often Confused]

Finally she broke it. 

"Uhm Nil, I kinda have to go."

"Oh right. Yeah you should go before my parents come back home from their trip to Hawaii."

(Oh I forgot, they're at Nilesh's House Big smile)

"Yeah." She said while picking up her car keys from the under the  pillow that was on the floor. 

She started walking towards the front door, and was about to pass through it when...

"Hey Simmi, hold up." She turned around when he called out to her.

He got up off the couch and walked over to her as fast as he could. [Without looking like he's rushing...he doesn't want to look like a despo now does he? Wink ]

"Hey I was wondering if you were going with someone tonight?"

She looked at him a little confused.

"I mean if you need a ride tonight for Swayam's Birthday party?"

"Oh yeah I totally forgot." She said rolling her eyes and touching her forehead with her hand.

He looked on anxious for her answer.

"Oh Nil don't worry about me I have a ride, so I'll see you tonight." She said walking out the door, waving her hand in goodbye.

He watched her drive away, and thought to himself, "Of course she has a ride, she's probably going with Sharon and Rinni." 

He felt relieved for some unknown reason that he didn't know. And started to get ready for the awesome party tonight. 

Little did he know that the opposite of being relieved is gonna hit him tonight. 


So guys just do you guys think that Simmi has a date or was she just kidding?  And is she really over him? Any guesses to who it may be? 

SO OFFICIALLY IM CHANGING THIS OS TO A SS, we'll see how many chapter it will be, depended on how much studying I can get done...who said college is fun?! 8D (I feel like a nerd! No offense to all the nerds out there! LOL!)

And also if you want to get updates...YOU HAVE TO BUDDY ME AND COMMENT ON MY POST. Because I look at all the ppl who comment and then I accept their buddy request! Shocked

Edited by ABCDesiGirl93 - 09 April 2012 at 1:15pm

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Alaadin Senior Member

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Nice update:-))
Please do write

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
superb part.
i guess no simmi goes nt have a bf.she was jus kidding.

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