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OS: Hesitant Feelings

ABCDesiGirl93 Goldie

Joined: 05 December 2011
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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 3:25pm | IP Logged

Heyy guys this is my first OS :)

I hope you like it!!

You can image anyone you want (Im a D3ian lol), but to tell you the truth I was imaging SwaRon when I was writing it.

Hope you like it! 

Happy Reading! LOL


"Hey !" 

She turned around.


She looked at him nervously.

"Don't walk know you want me?" He states

She looks up slowly at him through her eyelashes.

Still nervous from what happened...



After she realized that she wanted him that day after he said the liked someone else, 

she just couldn't ignore her feelings any longer.

She had caught him alone in the locker room. 

"Im sorry, I should have confessed that it did bother me that you started liking her."

"I know, and I am sorry too."

"Why would u be sorry?"

"Because I lied, to get you to feel bad and finally realize how I felt when you and him were looking like "more that just good friends"."

"So im sorry too"

"WHAT! So you never liked her! Why would u do that!?! That's so not cool. And STOP smiling."

"Hey... hey I just wanted to see if you got as much affected like I did."

"Well then! No I did NOT get affected! If that is what you want to know! I mean who would? Your like so like not my type. I mean if that girl wanted you, she could..."

She suddenly gets cut of, and he kisses her on her lips...

She opens her eyes after a long passionate kiss and touches her lips with her trembling fingers.

"Oh no he did not just do that!" she thought angrily.

"He's smiling!"

"So he thinks he won!?!"

"Yeah right!"

She had to leave or else he would think he won this round!

She leaves the locker room asap!

And of course he's right behind her...Calling out her name, but she doesn't turn around...till she felt something soft rather someone's soft hands on her shoulder causing her to halt from her retreat.

Flashback ends


She looks at him slowly.

She knew she had to get rid of that smug on his face.

She knew how to, but she just couldn't...could she?!"

That's when she heard him, " know you want me"


"You heard me. You want me." He said with a purr in his voice and a huge grin on his face. 

"Ughhh you know what, your sooo right!"

" I want you, and your crazy bipolar answers to me when I ask you "who are you really?"...I want you, and your way to calm everyone down...I want you and your love for everyone, even if they're mean or insulting you..I want you and ..."

His hands went behind and down to her back. He pulled her body close to his. 

"Yeah I know".


She was too overwhelmed to respond.

"I said I know...actually I knew from that same night when you came to my house that night"

"Oh" she said

"I have told you before and I am telling you again...I WILL ALWAYS WANT YOU TOO."

She smiled a little hearing it from him...again

She knew that the real reason why she was mad at him was because she thought that he finally figured out why she wanted him to move on.

 And him actually moving on with that girl made jealous?!?

He just stared at her. Waiting for her to sort things out in her head.

That's when it happened.

She looked up at him and his beautiful eyes, and said "Your right. I have always wanted you, but it never started from that night only. It was always there. Like you have, in my world, and in my life."

"I'm sorry...But I can not let you in to my heart."


So depended on how you guys respond and if you like it, I'll continue Wink

So for now, It is a OS Smile

Edited by ABCDesiGirl93 - 04 April 2012 at 3:29pm

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nish22 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 December 2011
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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Nicely Written... :) Do write more!! 

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JalebiHearts Goldie

Joined: 02 February 2011
Posts: 1588

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Aww cute!!! very nicly written :) 

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ABCDesiGirl93 Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
aww thnks for the comments!! 
ABCDesiGirl93 Goldie

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Posts: 2073

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
Yeah im not sure whether I should continue or not...I have a lot of views but not any likes or Ermm
puja_arsha IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 October 2011
Posts: 3501

Posted: 05 April 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Awesome...beautifully written...:)
do continue n plz pm me...:D

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MirageSwaron IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3503

Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Well written, hope u continue & I luvd ur style of narration... 

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Phosphenes Goldie

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Aww. This was so cute! Do write more! :) 

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