Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

OS: The Untitled Kiss [15+]

-Khushali- Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Another OS that I wrote. Please have a look and leave back honest comments. Wrote this because I was really tired of ArHi fighting all the time. Smile


That wasn't really the first time she felt something in her heart. It was beating faster than it normally did, though. A wee bit out of control. She held her hand on her chest and shut her eyes tight hoping the crazy heart beats would stop making her feel any more woozy.


She opened her eyes slowly. He hadn't moved away. Not even an inch. He let his hand slide over her waist and pulled her closer to only to aggravate her thudding heartbeats. She tried to push away but his grip was firm. He slowly moved forward. Instinctively, she tried to move back. She couldn't. She knew this was the best game he could play. She knew she would soon bump into a wall if she tried anymore. She slumped in his arms, almost giving in to his playful torments.


He pushed her against the wall. The coldness of the wall sent shivers down her spine. She held her breath. She was a mix of emotions – fear, trust, anticipation, and nervousness. He bent down and she moved her face as far away as it could. He bent in closer and brushed his lips on hers, slowly capturing her fragrance. He could see her visibly trembling. He held her hand and brought it near his heart. She only shut her eyes tighter. He would never understand what made her so scared of him. Confused a little, he backed off a little.


She opened her eyes in a flash, feeling bemused than ever. Her brows furrowed up with an almost questioning look in her eyes. She squeezed his palm with her own fragile fingers and pulled him closer, till he was towering over her. She tiptoed and kissed his lips slightly. She would never understand why she did what she was doing but she did not believe in regrets. She wanted this to be one of the most perfect moments of her life. She left him too shocked at the turn of the events. There wasn't a split second for him to realize and react. Discernably, he captured her lips. The kiss came naturally to him. Her sweet taste was constantly keeping him on the edge, almost making him ready to lose control.


She broke the kiss, slowly and very unwillingly. Her cheeks were almost beetroot red and a smile played around his lips. He touched his forehead against hers and smiled big enough to reassure her that she did no wrong. She smiled, her eyes downcast. He was happy that she didn't look scared anymore. He bent in near her ear and whispered, "I am in love with you. I'm more in love with you every passing minute."

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PollyTrolly Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
That was adorable. And I LOVED the last line.


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zafi IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6232

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Wow! Awesome.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar
I loved it. We so needed this. I am so sick of the fighting and the hatred track.
Thanks.Big smile

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Scintillating IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Wow!  That was an awesome OS. Clap  Loved the kiss...Smile

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-Drishti- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 18 March 2009
Posts: 18573

Posted: 05 April 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Khushhh Hug i LOVE!! this was adorable!

P.S.- i thought you said you were writing on a fight scene? :s ROFL
P.P.S - write MORE!

Edited by -Drishti- - 05 April 2012 at 12:02am

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-SiDsAnGeL- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14636

Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Khush..That was Brilliant..OMG..U r such a Good writer..
Plz do write more...
Lost in ArHi's worldDay Dreaming
Awesome Khush...Love u for this OS..Muaaah..

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Parsha Goldie

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged

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ArhiDeewani IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Awww that was so sweet x

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