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The Bet: Thread 3 {Jun. 19 - Pg. 113 NEW!!} (Page 109)

boyznaka IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Awwwnn! The last part was just adorable! And the red splotch-LOL! LOL

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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Khup chaan update aahe (Marathi)

Bau sari update che (Gujurati)

Bohot achchi update thi (Hindi)

It was a very good update (English)

Ahsana update (Arabic)

Wah Aapki update to badi hi pyaari hai (Urdu)
 
Bahut hi badhiya update kiye rahi Shreya bitiya (Nani Ji)

Bahut hi Badhiya Update tha Bheri Good Hello Hi Bye Bye (Mami ji)

Aap bhi na Shreya Ji (Anjali)

Finally

Aap thik to hai na? (IPKKND)


prpk525 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Nice update.. Loved it..
Hope you are fine..
Glimmer Goldie
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Superb update !!!!!!! Loved it !!!!!
Loved how Arnav was trying not to think about Khushi but couldn't stop thinking about her !!!!!! And how he thought about apologizing but then realized who he was !!!!!
Loved how he banged the door on her forehead !!! And the Rudolph part was sooo cute !!!!
Omg she kissed him herself !!!!! Just to check whether sparks would fly !!!!!!! Loved the last line !!!!!!!! Loved that she is falling for him !!!!!!
Hope everything gets better in your life !!!!!! Big smile
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !! Hope you update soon !!!!
daydreamerr Senior Member
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Eeep update!
I loved this part, especially how you wrote from both their perspectives. Ahahah the sheer velocity of Arnavs ego makes me laugh and the ending was fabulous- they're finally realising!
Thank you and hope life is treating you better now! :)
-Garima- IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
THE STUPID LIKE BUTTON ISN'T WORKING! ;alkjdf;alskdjf UGH. MY LIFE. Angry

...anyway, back the update! :D DUDE I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! heeheee the sparks definitely did fly when they *blushes* kissed Blushing I was getting freaking butterflies in my stomach, gahhh im so cheesyy. Day Dreaming

YAYAY Khushi's falling for the utterly handsome laad governor! :D :D I honestly loved this update Shreya! And I'm so so sooo glad you're in a good mood! (: Makes me happy! <3 Love youuu! Update soon! (:

--Garima <3

P.S. I WILL GET BACK TO THE LIKE BUTTON..even if it takes forever. Ermm
PepsiGirl101 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Saw your update!!!
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And best part...here before the PM!

AND omg... his anger and the way you built up the story:

OMG OMG...He's going into the room in the middle of the night!!! Things are getting spicy!!!

What the-? He hits her on the forehead?
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Rudolph...that was so corny, I loved it!
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Hey Devi Maiyaa...(moment of silence)...she pecked him... SHE PECKED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WHAT!?! No sparks!?!

Continues to read...silently crying at no sparks...
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AND OMG HE GRABS HER AND KISSES HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh Gosh! I c-can't take it...the fifteenth of August...AWWW
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And she's falling in love with him?
I'm officially in cloud 9!
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Nonetheless what I'm trying to say is that was one great and wicked update!!! LOL 
LOVED IT! 
-Abi

P.S. I would give you a kiss right now for the update but...
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LOL 
Have a nice day! 
Peace out!
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Edited by MrsRaizada101 - 19 June 2012 at 3:49pm
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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Amazing!!!!:D
Khushi's so adorable!!!! Fireworks..really!???????:p
Arnav's so cute...oh god! They're perfect for each other...:)
Loved the update!!! Continue soon:)

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