Originally posted by curledup
Reya 😃 hey there girl 😃 I thought of braving it out and commenting on another fic I follow 😆 So here goes. Anyway this is besides the point but Dex does end up with Rachel right? 😕 Cause I wanted to know 😉. Actually don't tell me it would ruin the suspense of your fic 😆 Why did I ask? Lets just forget it! And focus on your fic here:
Okay first things first, SORRY I'm so late replying! This thing got pushed to the back and now I just now saw that more people commented. 😳
Chapter 1 and 2:
She was keying his car? 😲 no she wasn't it was her sister 😆 and then he thought it was her? 😲 his little sister is really mischievious isn't she? 😆 but he just loves khush khush's arms doesn't he? and cornering her. Man this man got issues 😕 He opens her zip? 😲 chi chi Arnav bitwa that is absolutely terrible! how could he? 😲 I mean that is just NO! and even if it is Arnav thats not on 😕 but having said that, its an excellent potrayal of his character, it shows so much which is I bet what you wanted to achieve? 😃 and thats good right? but she cut herself too? and then not admiting it or what happened, Khush Khush is a silent pain-er meaning she doesn't make her grief known, is that right about her? 😉 And now in his house, this man has a thing for manhandeling people! really. But once again it is an excellent potrayal of what he is like, it shows his 'mean' element in a way. One shade of many 😆 And isn't Arnav good at hiding things?
Exactly! Arnav isn't Arnav unless he is mean, and Khushi isn't Khushi unless she is her bubbly self. So yeah, I felt they needed to stay true to their characters, even though Khushi is slightly out of character in the first chap. 😳
Chapter 3 & 4:
WHO IS THE CREEP? 😲😡 Oh no khush khush is hurt naa? real bad 😕 why do I get the feeling this guy is not going to be in jail for long keep him there! Stupid pedo! I bet he is one, are we allowed to use pedo on IF? 😲 oh well, I said it 😆. Bua-ji seems nice here 😕 its weird 😕. UH-OH! TRASH? arnav loves picking on her doesn't he? 😆 same old same old. And khushi is as fiery as ever, didn't she turn around and punch the tire 😆 hahaha! that cracked me up! SHES NAKED? 😲 woah! intense, in his shirt? 😆 this is going to be interesting. Looks like Arnav can't afford en-suite showers anymore 😆. OMG IS HE GOING TO SEE HER NAKED? 😲
Hahaha! I think we are allowed to use pedo on I-F, but no, the guy isnt really a pedophile, you were close though ;)
Hahah! You are so good at predicting things!
Chapter 5 & 6:
he saw her! woop ti doo 😃 why I am happy is beyond me, but maybe it will begin the tension between the two 😆 what am I saying there already is tension, it would bring more tension 😉 the 's' tension that is. I can't say it the word is forbidden on I-F << hopefully that should help you figure it out! Like JUSTIN BIBER GIRL FANS! 😆 aww he finds her adorble! <3 that so cute 😃 And I can just imagine him in a suit 😍 so hot! I like rahul! <3 he seems like the easy go going kinda guys! thats a nice touch to the fic, considering Arnie is so full of hot steam 😆 Aryan does not talk much does he? 😆 They bet? 😲 they are drunk? 😲 falling in love? 😲 OMG! I am squeeling Reya! you have no idea, I can't wait for this. Really. And Simran take your claws of my man! yes he is mine! stupid simran! kwack? hahaha 😆
Hahah! Awww no one likes Simran. 😆
But yeah, Aryan doesn't talk much. He's kind of shy. 😳
Chapter 7 & 8:
Yes they are actually doing it! *squeels* now I am over over joyed! 😃 AWW SHE SLEPT ON HIM! that soo sweet, its like they are comfortable with each other without even realising it, but they will 😉 and Arnav is already jealous! boy I am really really happy 😃 really, wait Arnav why are you still in the shower? 😲 besharam! 😲 another shade of him eh? too many shades? the last line is jsut a killer 😆 HE SAW HER FULLY NAKED NOW? 😲 SHITNESS! I would've died to shame! but been like its Arnav! 😆 Family jewels eh? 😆 isn't that funny! and he wants to show her the family jewels? isn't someone getting ahead of themselves? 😆 He liked the slap? aww! well love/lust is in the airr! 😉 Yeah Aryan does not say much 🥱 but thats okay. Rahul is enough 😆 THE LAST DIALOGUE! OHMYGOD! HE DARED? 😲 thats soo cute! I don't know why I find it cute XD but its just the teasing? that is adorable, its like they are that comfortable with each other to actually tease like that! 😆
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D :D
OKAY! I NEED TO GO EAT, but I will be back to comment on the rest of them! 😆
I'm baackk!
Chapter 9 & 10 & 11:
PERVERTS! they are both PERVERTS! 😆 wait there is a scar? NOOO ITS THAT PEDO isn't it? stupid pedo...stupid stupid pedo! OOO someone has got mooves like jagger eh? loving it, there is an elegance to khushi as well as a fiery spirt which I love! who was Arnav talking to? ohh no! he seems stressed 😕 oh well I'm sure Khushems will help him out! Ohmygod that raj guys is a peeerrrvveerrtt I would've kicked him in his family jewels! stupid 🤬 but ARNAV! oh Arnav why so protective? see a new shade! << I AM SOO RIGHHT! 😆 but thats good? 😉 and also they kiss! that is so cute 😍 and hot! and its and and its just sooo yeah its hot 😃 I love it, but Arnav will probably think she has done it to provoke him? or anything else? just like the naked incidence 😕 but thats so typical arnav :( OH WELL! can't wait to see the majnu-ness which may not be soon but i look forward to it,
it is the pedo, yes :)
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