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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
First I would say that... I love your writing...
Thank you so much for adding me to your buddy list and thanks for the pm too...Smile


Edited by aysha1989 - 13 April 2012 at 8:37am

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
sorry 4 late comment dear
really sorry

im little sad to know that the story is finished

but the last update is mindblowing,loved the ananya n veer's scenes,they both r so cute

omggg anu ka khana...agar veer kha leta to uska kya hota...

Hmmm...veer was so naughty...bt loved them yr
loved ur story n concept
loved ur writing...u r fabulous writer...

Thanks 4 this beautiful story dear,pls come with new story like this

thanks 4 pm
sorry 4 late comment

luv u

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
edtd ma comnt...sorry 4 makng u wait .
P.S- dont call me di...we're of d same age !!
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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
awesome ss..
loved the way u write...
waitng to read more ff's from u
thanxs for the pm...

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sparksfly

FINALLY unresng !! LOL Yup,finally my wait ends!LOL
i just luvd it !! Star
it was hillarious !! Big smile
moral - tit 4 tat n God works in mysterious ways !! 
perfectly shown by a humurous way by u !! LOL
put a hUge smile on ma face !! Big smile i'm sooo glad to hear that!
Veer is soo...sweet n naughty !!
kya punishmnt hai !!! Embarrassed
awww...he calld her 2 dry his hair n carried her ...Embarrassed
luvd dis -
 When he tried to clear his eyes with his hands more soap got in them as his hands were also soapy. He was helpless'somehow he cleaned his eyes with the towel. And then he waited'with stinging eyes, soapy body and shivering in the cold as he was wet from the rain. He made silent pleas to Water god to rain through the bathroom shower, singing various bhajans and replacing the respective god's name with water god. And this is how poor Veer waited for the water to come soon. ROFL ROFL ROFL mujhe yeh likhne mein bhi bada mazaa aaya
bechare Veer ko aadhe ghante tak wait karna pada...n bhajan gane pade !! Wink
in husband n wife ke jhagade mein bechare rats maare gaye !! Dead woh kehte hain na...no pain no gain...bas maine pain aur gain alag alag logon ko de diya LOL
likd d names u usd 4 rats !! Thumbs Up
n unka funeral bhi maast tha !!! LOL
ab anu ka khana khaya hai to ...LOL
u r a gr8 writer !! Clap Clap Star thank uEmbarrassed
ur story has romance...Embarrassed... humor...LOL...traged (rats )...Ouch...n perfect discrption !!!Star
luvd it !! thx a lot!!
do write more...
n sorry 4 d really really l8 reply !! Cry Cry  no worriesBig smile thx for ur luvly commentSmile
best wishes 4 xams...Hug...n loads of luv...Hug
thx & wish u da same
hugs & kissesBig smile

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha1989

First I would say that... I love your writing...
Thank you so much for adding me to your buddy list and thanks for the pm too...Smile
 
Thanks for the appreciation & ur luvly commentBig smile
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

sorry 4 late comment dear
really sorry
arre plz don't say sorry...i knw u had xams
im little sad to know that the story is finished aww, sorry but i don't think i had anything else to write in this story

but the last update is mindblowing,loved the ananya n veer's scenes,they both r so cute

omggg anu ka khana...agar veer kha leta to uska kya hota... band baj jati!!!LOL

Hmmm...veer was so naughty...bt loved them yr
loved ur story n concept
loved ur writing...u r fabulous writer... THank u sooo much dear!!Big smile

Thanks 4 this beautiful story dear,pls come with new story like this
i'm thinking abt it but xams are the bane of my existence!!!Angry
thanks 4 pm
sorry 4 late comment
thx for ur luvly commentSmile

luv u
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rapunzzel

awesome ss..
loved the way u write...
waitng to read more ff's from u
thanxs for the pm...
thanx so much
ffs ka toh pata nahi...but i'll try to write ss/osBig smile
thx for ur comment
luv u...Big smile

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