PAYBACK - RTMC (Three Shot) Last part pg 8 - Page 11

Originally posted by: pranita1202

part 1

nice start

it was gr8 2 see VeeNYA TO EJOY THE MARRIED LIFE

LOVED ANNAYA 'S ATITUDE 2 SETTLE THE SCORES

PART2

annaya is arming up face her hubby

gr8 idea 2 handle ur hubby by getting his mom on ur side

ruby ruby ruby

don't build castles in air

he is not into u not coz something is wrong wid u

but he is head over heels in love wid HIS MISCHEVIOUS ANANYA

LOVED UR DV TOUCH in ur ff man! i really loved that ff

loved anu n nivi convo

part 3

 glad veer got the deal

anu finally decided 2 leave everything to fate

part4

SAVE BEST FOR THE LAST

u r last part suits this saying

wat superb part

finally scores r settled

""When you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.""

agar tum kisi cheez ko sacchay dill se chaaho toh saari kaainaat tumhein usse milaane ke liye jutt jaati hai... 

see anu finally everything fell in place

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RIP TO mickey n jerry   

hope u in better place 

my condolences r with MINNIE N TOM

TOM now u realise jerry's importance . huh!

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MR Ratatouille hows the trip 2 india

hope u try our indian delicacies

visit TAJMAHAL its as stunning as effel tower

it not possible visit chaupatii n try the paani puri 

i m sure in paris it u will make paani puri in u r restaurant

Hey dear...i jst luv d chapter...plz post d nxt 1 soon...& may I know ur name plz..😊😊

1 more thing which I wanna tell u that Rajat is my fav also since PRC..& I really luv to read d ffs which is made 4 him..so definately I m going to njoy this ff...I jst Luv him..thanks dear...plz put sum romance b/w them...😉

Wow! Amazing ff dear..I luvd it..it was small bt a nice story

there is so much luv b/w Veer & Ananya..

lods of hug to u for d fab story..😊

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Wow! Amazing ff dear..I luvd it..it was small bt a nice story

there is so much luv b/w Veer & Ananya..

lods of hug to u for d fab story..😊

RTMC story 😃 readin it ASAP!thnx fr the pm!

Edited by disha15 - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: disha15

im sooo sooo sorry for the late reply.

I read all the  three parts..n i loved it! 😳 ur writing is really fresh..n i like it!

loved the ending 😆 

i loved d way how  you described some incidents in the past in between the present ones. 👍🏼Well done!lukin fwd to read more from u! 

Awesome dear...i read all da parts nd especially loved the last part...i was seriously thinking of something very very serious like Agastya in DV in 21st century  wen i read the line "without noticing someone was watching him" but really this is the best story i ve ever read...seriously...short and vry vry vry sweet...the best part is Veer and Ananya are married...Awesome story dear...:) :)

@aamirkhanfan

Edited by glossyglassy - 11 years ago