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oops! i m late, today...
actually i just got up now, 2pm...
will unres just after reading...
**~~~edited~~~**Hi guys!.......hey gloosy budddy!.
Thanks to all those who
pressed the like button and/or commented.ur welcome., thnx for giving us a wonderful story.
So this is the last
part of the story! It's got a little bit of Hindi in it, if anyone has
problems, plz ask...I'll be happy to help!...
achhi baat h , i love hindi, hindi hamari matre bhasha h...
hindi h hum hindi h hum,
vatan h hindustan humara humara...
saare jahn se accha...
okay, sry, thoda over patriotic ho gaya,
To avoid confusion
with dialogues...I've colored them
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"What happened? You're so happy?" "I made it, Anu! I made the deal" He then told
her about his lunch meeting and assured promotion. Anu exclaimed her
happiness and hugged him saying, "Congratulations!"......deal tho crack honi hi thi, lucky charm jo mil gaya tha subah subah, anu ki smile.
, "What happened? Why are you shouting?" "Why is there no water in the shower? I'm all soaped up."
Ananya realized her mistake and told him, "I'm
sorry. I forgot to tell you that we are having some water supply
problems in the society today." He opened the door a bit and
looked at her angrily, "You forgot?"(kya bhulakad biwi naseeb hoi h veer ko,🤣 lekin yeh bholakad biwi yeh kabhi nhi bhoolti ki iske pati ne kya shaitaniya ki h uske saath😉, aur iss biwi ki special baat yeh h ki, iss biwi ka dimaag tab bhot chalta h jab baat veer ko pareshaan karne ki ho!😆
Anu
laughed on seeing his state and said, "I'll call
the Security to start the pump if he can." And then suddenly an
idea clicked in her mind. So with a naughty glint in her eyes and
mischief in her mind she told him "And ya, before I
forget, the water heater's also not working
today."(yeh lo ho gaya sone per suhaga!, yah phirr kahe ho gaya gareebi main aata gheela!🤣
And then silently giggling to herself, she went off to
make the call. Veer's eyes widened in shock and soap entered his eyes. bichara
When he tried to clear his eyes with his hands more soap got in them as
his hands were also soapy. He was helpless'somehow he cleaned his eyes
with the towel. And then he waited'with stinging eyes, soapy body and
shivering in the cold as he was wet from the rain.bichaare ki halat dheeli ho rahi h, and anu madam maaze le rahi h, bhagvaan aise biwi sabko pradaan kare! dhanya ho gaya veer aisi sundar beautiful kismat lekar.
He made silent pleas
to Water god to rain through the bathroom shower, singing various
bhajans and replacing the respective god's name with water god. And this
is how poor Veer waited for the water to come soon.🤣
bhagtan ki dhukh harta
mumbai ka pani data (BMC)😆
sukh sampati karta,
OH! JAL DATA(water giver)
Anu made the call and couldn't help but
laugh at the situation. Bathroom ka badla bathroom se! tit for tat
Veer was trapped
in bathroom with no water and he couldn't do anything to Anu. How
blissful! She realized that she had done the right thing in leaving
things to fate.acche logo ke saath hamesha bhagvaan hote h, and biwiyan tho hamesha achhi hoti h na!...😉...biwiyan kabhi galat nhi hoti.
But what kept her wondering was that if Veer had a lunch
meeting then what had happened to the lunch that she had cooked for
him.....bhot jaldi yaad aa gaya anu yeh baat tumhe😆
After half an hour, the water supply
returnedthnx god, verna veer ko tho ander hi hypothermia ho jata ...issmain bhi ek acchi baat hoti! anu usse apni body heat dekar thiik kar deti☺️...jab bhi rtmc ke married couple ki baat hoti h, mere ideas thode wild ho jate h...kya karo, main naughty baccha hoon na!.😳
, Veer thanked the water god and finally bathed. After changing
into a t-shirt and tracks he went to the living room with a towel. "Anuuu" He called out. Anu hearing his shout came
out of the kitchen and asked, "What happened? Why
are you shouting?" He showed her the towel. She understood and
shook her head saying, "You wait, and I'm coming."
She finished off her work in a few minutes, washed her hands and went
to Veer who was already sitting on the carpet in front of the sofa. Anu
went and sat on the sofa taking the towel and dried his hair..ooo tho biwi se sir dry karwa raha h...maine socha aisa kya ho gaya...
"God! Yeh pani
ke supply ne to tang kar diya." Veer complained. Anu giggled
remembering his soapy face and whispered to herself, "Chalo lunch nahi to shower hi sahi" mar li na! aapne pair per kholahadi
But Veer
heard her and asked confused, "Matlab?" Anu
fumbled, "Umm'who kuch nahi. By the way Veer
where is your lunch box?" Veer gasped suddenly remembering that
Anu had cooked lunch for him that day. He turned and took her hands in
his, "Sorry! I totally forgot. I had that lunch
meeting with the delegates and I hadn't informed you about it. And then I
came directly from the hotel so the lunch box is still in the office.
I'm so sorry."accha hoa nhi khaya, verna band baaj jati boss!😆
He said apologetically. Anu couldn't help herself
and started laughing, "I'm so happy you didn't eat
that food." "Happy? Why?" Veer
asked totally perplexed with his wife's reaction. Anu mumbled to herself
deciding that it would be best to tell him the truth. "Woh Veer actually I need to tell you something."
Then she proceeded to tell him all about what she done to make his lunch
extra special and Veer's eyes widened with each word unable to believe
that she would do such a thing.....kyun sun kar hi tote udd gaye!🤪.khate tho kya hota, lale pad jate, poore mouth main volcano eruption ho jata,!🤣
By the time Anu ended her story Veer
was standing and looking at Anu dumbfounded. He finally found his voice
and uttered, "You messed with my food this bad?
You sent me such horrible lunch?" dekha kya danav biwi laye ho aapne ghar main, kachha chaba jayegi,,,,,,,😈
With every word he bent a
little towards her and Anu kept bending backwards on the sofa in reflex.
"But you didn't eat it, na?" khaya hota tho tumhari kabki waatt lag gyi hoti😉
She tried to
console him. "Thank god for that but you deserve a
punishment for that horribly bitter coffee." haan ! milni chahiye!
By this time Anu
was completely lying on the sofa with Veer bending over her. "Uh-uh Punishment?"kyun english nhi aati kya tumhe anu...chalo hindi main batati hoon, punishment matlab SAZA...jo ki tab di jaati h jab koi naughty harkat karta h,
"Yes,
punishment" Veer said lying over her now and deliberately
trapping her with his arms. Anu started to babble and explain herself.
But Veer would have none of it and kissed her hard. Anu was shocked at
first but then reacted with the same fervor as his. ......ooo...😳...
so romantic jii.☺️
bitter coffee ka, itna sweet punishment,☺️ ab tho rooz anu tumhe bitter coffee hi degi..😳
kya kare, hamare saare ffs, and os's , ss's ke rt's ko, mugzz ke liye isese better punishment milti hi nhi,😳 sab rt's apin patni ko yahi punishment dete h..😳...kya kare hamari mugdha h hi itni sweet.😳
When they broke
apart for breath, Anu wrapped her arms around his neck and said smiling "I liked the punishment" "Me
too." Veer said and pecked her lips. punishment kyun nhi acchi lagegi, bitter coffee ke baad itni sweet lips mil jaye tho baat hi kya, vaise bhi deal crack karne ki khushi main MITHAI tho laye nhi tum veer!, so ab tho anu ke sweetest lips se hi kaam chalana padega!.
Anu then asked coyly, "Don't you think we should do something?".you naughty gal...double meaning , hann!.
Veer
jerked his head upwards and asked, "Really? I mean
what do you want to do?" "I was thinking
along the lines of'"Anu said in a husky voice. "Of?" "Of eating."
She finished with a grin. popat ho gaya!🤣
"What yaar Anu! Way to
kill the mood!" He whined.awww,,,koi baat nhi.veer,🥺
"Sorry for that.
But you're pretty heavy. So please get off me now." Veer made a
face at her but then got off the sofa......dekha tumhare pyaar ne kitna mota,😉 oops! healthy kar diya veer ko,😳 khoob acche se khyal rakhna veer ka, khoob khilna😳
They had their dinner and saw some TV
cuddling on the sofa. Finally switching it off Veer got up "Chalo Anu. It's late. Let's go to sleep." "Hmm'"Anu murmured sleepily, "I don't feel like walking" so romantic...so cutei pie!
And stretched her arms
towards him. He smiled at her antics and swiftly picked her up in his
arms. Anu kept her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes, arms wound
around his neck. On their way to the bedroom he asked her, "How are you sure I won't drop you into the bathtub this
time?"kabhi nhi sudherenge yeh dono
Anu opened an eye and then shut it, "No
water supply, remember?" yeh, intelligent wifyyy...
Veer rolled his eyes and muttered, "Yeah, right."
He laid her on the bed and then went to
switch off all the lights. He slid in bed next to her and kissed her
goodnight. Anu smiled and slept with her head on his chest......so sweet
The happy couple slept cuddling with
each other and with peace on their faces. They were truly made for each
other...but then they still love annoying the hell outta each other!......i just loved this couple like hell🤗
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Somewhere else...
The room is dark. Beside a wooden table
lay a Tiffin box. Two rats came scurrying towards it.
Rat1: Jerry, I smell food in there......hey jerry ma favorite!😳
Rat 2: Yes, Mickey, me too. Let's check
it out......and mickey too😳
Both the rats managed to open the box
and opened the lids to see the food.
Rat 2: Mickey, I think something's
wrong. The food doesn't smell right.....sahi kaha don't eat it
Rat 1: It must be because the man's
wife cooked it in the morning and he forgot to have it......plz don't have it
Rat 2: How do you know?
Rat 1: I saw the man while leaving for
lunch. He kissed a photo with two women. One of them must be his wife......hey! mickey...u naughty boy! human romance ka bhi maaza lete ho ...veer ko chup kar dekh rahe the!
Rat 2: So why didn't you tell me then?
We could have eaten his food then only.
Rat 1: I had planned so. But just then
the sweeper came and I also had to meet my girlfriend Minnie......pata h , rtmc ke baad, mickey minnie r ma second fav.😳
Jerry shook his head in exasperation.
Rat 2: Ok, let's not waste any more
time and gorge upon the food....😲...nooo😲😲ooo, plz don't
Both the rats stuffed themselves with
Ananya's special lunch and ran back into their holes.....yeh kya anarth kar dala...
Epilogue
Inside a dilapidated building, lie two
dead bodies shrouded with slices of cheese and everyone around them is
crying with grief......jerry, mickey mar gaye...me too crying.😭
"Why did he have to die?" wailed
Minnie.....ab minni ka kya hoga!, veer anu ki tho love story successful, but minnie ka tho sansar ujhaad diya!😭
"I'll miss him." said Tom the cat......tommy ke bachhe, u get lost!
The sad demise of the two rats, Mickey
and Jerry was mourned by their entire clan. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 They had been suffering
from severe food indigestion for quite a few days and finally succumbed
today early morning. Even Jerry's biggest enemy Tom came to pay his last
respect. accha chal tu acchi bhavna se aaya h tho ruk sakta h yahan, pray for jerry
The funeral of the duo was visited by Remy, the famous
rat-chef in Ratatouille. After that, the rat clan abandoned Veer's
office as a food spot in fear of more deaths......kya sad ending h, 😭
i hate u glossy, u killed jerry n mickey,
'arey minnie ke baare main tho kuch socha hota!...
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Moral of the story:
Don't irk your wife or face the fate the rats did.
Apni biwi se panga mat lena warna chuhe
ki maut maroge!😆
fantastic moral, maaza aagaya...
***********************THE END***************************
So that was the end of my story!......and i m soon gonna start a new one!.....u forgot u write this, dekha main kitni acchi friend ho tumhari, tumhe yaad dila diya!
Do
tell me whether you liked it or not. Suggestions/criticism of all kinds
are welcome......u for a have a pyaari si lovely si jhappi🤗.jhappi paalo yaar🤗
Thanks a ton for
reading!.thnx for such a wonderful story...lov u
waiting for next, i won't leave u!...
i just lov ur writing,,,,,,
hope to see a new story soon!
lov u glossy, do keep visiting IF regularly, will lov to talk to u.
lov ya.
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