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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Totally brilliant...

I dont remember if this is my first comment coz if i did I would have commented a long time back...

I have fallen in love with the story. I will confess and what i will say will probably not sound good to you. But please bear with me.

I had started reading your story when you started writing it and went along with you some way. But then I got incredibly bored. The way you described Geet's learning process was too much for me to bear - I couldnt ever expect a more boring person than her and it looked quite different from what I had envisioned when you had mentioned the story of an ordinary girl. I have had my few fitful days when i started working and subsequently when i changed jobs, but i couldnt take this as normal.So the story went just blah-blah-blah for me.

But I didnt give up on this story. I tried catching up on phn from time to time to see what was happening and from the last 10 chapters or so, I am impressed. The story has taken a lovely turn and I am totally engrossed. Its become more interesting and I wait for you to update !

I am surprised myself. You dont look like you are a first timer and you have a unique flair ... I promise you - you will find me here often - hats off girlClap


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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Totally brilliant...

I dont remember if this is my first comment coz if i did I would have commented a long time back...

I have fallen in love with the story. I will confess and what i will say will probably not sound good to you. But please bear with me.

I had started reading your story when you started writing it and went along with you some way. But then I got incredibly bored. The way you described Geet's learning process was too much for me to bear - I couldnt ever expect a more boring person than her and it looked quite different from what I had envisioned when you had mentioned the story of an ordinary girl. I have had my few fitful days when i started working and subsequently when i changed jobs, but i couldnt take this as normal.So the story went just blah-blah-blah for me.

But I didnt give up on this story. I tried catching up on phn from time to time to see what was happening and from the last 10 chapters or so, I am impressed. The story has taken a lovely turn and I am totally engrossed. Its become more interesting and I wait for you to update !

I am surprised myself. You dont look like you are a first timer and you have a unique flair ... I promise you - you will find me here often - hats off girlClap

It sounds very good. I always welcome constructive criticism because I believe it makes me better. The initial chapters were definitely required as a base to the story. I tried to make it as interesting as I could. And I know a lot of people were miffed with me at that time and called Geet crazy, irritating, frustrating but they stuck with me and I am most thankful for that. 

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
"Titli dabochli Maine zindagi khyaal main tere"...hmmm felt like singing this with how Geets grace clutched devs heart! Ufff beautiful...she really is this regal beauty! I imagine a rich blue swim suit on her!!
Absolutely loved how Maan made her understand so much in such few words... But I became soo uncomfortable with his sudden impersonal moods in between!! From "leave me?" ...to u can't leave here" now i really feel that he is the biggest jalebi from inside!! All gol matoll thoughts!!
Thanks for the update Ji Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Meera sacred because of geet's behaviour and the funniest part was maan said that meera looked like a sacred bunny...!
God now geet is really a swimming champion and i'd love to see her swimming with maan one day...
Something in dev snapped when he saw geet's dolphin strokes..?now if he falls for her the only thing which will break would be his heart coz geet belongs only to her maan sir...
What happened to nainatara by the way..?it looked as if they were inseparable...

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mollycoddle

Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by mishtimohabbat

My second reserved post here..and like the one before I was going to leave it empty (sorry) ur ff is of that kind where I don't have enough words to describe its effect on me!! It's obvious that unlike the usual case ...Geet is my first love in ur ff than the actual progression of Maaneet..everything seems secondary to the intriguing characters of Geet and Maan. I won't even begin on Maan..his wordless actions and codeless intentions has not only left Geet falling for him but ur ff's ardent lovers like me.. I sometimes feel like that once I read ur updates it acts like a balm to my never ending thoughts (yup I'm another Geet..well not exactly as crazy as her but I do think deep) and most of the times a spring of questions gushing out yet again!!
There is soo much to appreciate in ur ff that i don't know where to begin and don't even know if what I wrote above is making sense!! But along with the updates I really wanna appreciate ur awesome commentors who have the most zealous discussions here.. its an absolute laugh..love it and salute them for their lively discussion, though I feel out of place to join but soon I may Embarrassed ...
I only hope this ff reaches out to others and the number of likes and threads u open doubles up coz it truly deserves it ...
Lastly just one interesting note hehehe...I saw ur ff by a random coincidence as I was roaming around in the forum ..but then didn't read it coz I couldn't seem to catch my interest on its title ..but then I saw ur name Glass door and for some random reason I thought nahi if the ff has caught my eye then I should read it na...now I absolutely love love the title name ...its soo Geet!!
And as for ur name..I can only say glass doors are meant to b transparent...as ur reader I had assumed to see thru ur thoughts and grasp on as to which emotions and feelings you are intending to evoke in me thru ur writing but I have concluded to the fact that ur that glass door which is transparent on one side from where u peek into my thoughts like ur now but I can only see the mirror of ur words( what Geet sees of Maan) but not ur intentions behind it..I'm yet to figure out where ur leading me to (just like Geet is thinking the same of Maan) ...gosh do sound remotely crazy!! Coz I feel one while writing all these non sensical things...hope u understand these thoughts of mine. Embarrassed
Thank you for ur regular updates and esp the double ones Clap
*sorry for mistakes wrote this novel frm my phone Ji!!

I feel so proud to be a part of such an amazing comment!!
(Isse pehle ki you ppl stare at me...I'm talking about the "commentors" wala partROFL)
Oh My...I read ,re-read the last para of this comment!!Embarrassed
It's too good!!Tongue



mee too...this comment made my day...i dont have much contribution to zealous discussion, but i do add to entertainment value of this ff...thats what i wud like to presume...though my so called jokes rarely tickle ppl's funny bone...LOL, but then am improving my non existent sense of humourLOL...

i was once told by a sir holding a seminar in my class that i make my presence a lot...so i can safely conclude i have a great thread presence(words made up by me...)LOL


Humbled with ur appreciation and glad to have made a few ppl smile... Im sure all the actual credit goes to the initiator of this ff!! So let's just bask in the glory of more updates...coz this is one ff where I don't mind losing my mind if not in confusion then pang of anger or even anxiousness or grief! U have created a freaking maze I tell u!! Just that like these proud commentors!!(hehehe) none of us are looking for a way out or trying to get to its core...we are all (and try an imagine this bdw) fluttering our dupattas in the air and dancing along to ur tunes! If only I was a butterfly!
Thank you ..now I feel like I'm grazing this ff with back to back comments...should give space to others to feast on!

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
ls it going for a love triangle...love d way Maan handles Geet & Maan probably wants Geet to groom Dev
l know it will be repeatition but let tell me once again it is fascinating

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Posted: 06 June 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
that was beautiful,,
dont tell me dev is gonna fall in love with geet now,,

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